Quick Travelquickly Capture That Inhuman One

I think the writing is pretty good, but why can't the two protagonists live in each world until they grow old? [Cry]

It's okay, but is there too much system drama? [What] Wuwuwu There are too many scenes in the system, and it's easy to get into trouble⊙⊙. The plot is very novel, but it's hard for me to read it immersedly. I feel that the protagonist often interacts with the system, and sometimes it's a bit uncomfortable to watch😭, because I may not be able to fully understand the plot. , Will affect the atmosphere at the time ﾍ(;´Д｀ﾍ)sorry personal opinion|･ω･｀) The host interacts with the system a lot of the time. Sisters who like this kind of plot can join, it is very friendly, but I can't see it⊙⊙sad jpg

The pace of the story is pretty good, and the relationship in the small world is actually "quite fast"? But I really like the memories and the ending, so I give full marks to the final chapter! The warm and ambiguous atmosphere is very good. The feeling of ease, confidence, calmness, gentleness and tolerance when Xiao Yuli and Snake first get along is really amazing. Snake is a combination of innocence and danger, and has an animalistic straightforwardness that is super cute!

It's a nice setting. I like it. I hope the author will update it more.

I am very satisfied with the subject matter [Sending Hearts]

What a treasure trove of books. I don't understand why so few people read them.

What an unexpected surprise, I saw a treasure! It's so nice, the body is warm (づ ●─● )づ[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The plot is coherent, the language is vivid, [love][love][love]

Good looking, love it, like it

It looks good, and the rhythm I like is neither too long nor too short.