I will never forget the night when I met her in the street on the ninth year after coming to this city;
Although the whole body was covered with filth, it could still be seen that it was once pure white.
The two floppy cat ears, the thin body and tail that curled up probably out of instinctive fear, the girl lying in a pool of blood;
At that time, she was lonely, she had lost all hope, now she has precious emotions, and she is unwilling to give up all this——
Cornflower, I sincerely wish you the best, the memories that I can't forget, the sadness that I can't forget.
Reader comments
The writing style is considered delicate and mostly uses psychological description. The plot of the story has its ups and downs, but it is quite attractive. I want to keep reading. (Although there may be a sense of wanting to see the beauty of partisanship.)
The characters... Should be said to be difficult to understand in this scope. Except for the paranoia, I can't understand anything else. It has psychological descriptions and is easy to empathize with, but many of the stories are quite outside the scope. I say this, but there is no negative meaning in it. Since it is something I don't understand, I am not qualified to say it, not to mention that what is written actually has the feelings of other people. (Paranoid, if you continue to live by the rules you have been living by, it would be weird if you are not paranoid.)
The description of the natural environment does not look like the author has written much.
But in the social environment, the author seems to have been creating an atmosphere that is difficult to understand.
Mainly just a little envious, thinking of myself. Anyway, if you don't see enough, hear enough, understand enough, or think enough, what you write will naturally not be much better. (In the end, I am thinking crazy - Zhongmai/Mai Wenhe)
That is, there are abnormalities, but the form and method of existence are still a bit confusing. (Isn't it over yet? Natural meow.——He)
Pot: mass binary function
t:2024.7.2
How to say it? At the beginning, I didn't expect that the author would always write from the first-person perspective. After all, it is difficult to describe the other person's psychology in the first person. Only by seeing it through "my" eyes, or by "I" feeling it, can we guess or understand the other person's psychological activities. If you are not careful, you will step on the wrong side of the story.
It is indeed a good book, and it reminded me of the famous literature I read before. And it doesn't seem like there will be any sense of incompatibility, and it's easy to understand the protagonist, which is great.
The author's writing style is very good, but in today's society where fast-food novels are exploding, not many people will read it if it only writes the truth. After all, it is good to be alive, and few people will be willing to read this kind of novel.
If the author eliminates elements such as "cat girl", "cohabitation" and "crime", adds more activities between the protagonist and supporting characters, or adds more of the protagonist's alone feelings, and grasps the plot of the novel well, it will have the flavor of a literary work.
Of course, I am not very knowledgeable and have only a superficial knowledge. My opinions are personal, so please don't criticize anyone who disagrees with me.
Few people here will read it, which means that few people will read realistic novels.
The first-person perspective is more exciting than watching a movie. It feels really good to fight against gangsters. I feel that the author can be the master of first-person writing like Tomato. According to the author, it should be a single woman. I still want less money and more sugar.
Good works don't need too much modification
The writing is beautiful and very comfortable
After reading the beginning, the taste of Riqing is quite good and can make people immerse themselves in it. I hope the author can see the direction of their destiny. I feel that you have such strength.
A good book, worth reading, with great potential. This kind of book may not be recognized in the era of cool writing, but when we calm down, words with connotation are what we need.
In the era of Shuangwen, this work was really not discovered.
The writing style is considered delicate and mostly uses psychological description. The plot of the story has its ups and downs, but it is quite attractive. I want to keep reading. (Although there may be a sense of wanting to see the beauty of partisanship.) The characters... Should be said to be difficult to understand in this scope. Except for the paranoia, I can't understand anything else. It has psychological descriptions and is easy to empathize with, but many of the stories are quite outside the scope. I say this, but there is no negative meaning in it. Since it is something I don't understand, I am not qualified to say it, not to mention that what is written actually has the feelings of other people. (Paranoid, if you continue to live by the rules you have been living by, it would be weird if you are not paranoid.) The description of the natural environment does not look like the author has written much. But in the social environment, the author seems to have been creating an atmosphere that is difficult to understand. Mainly just a little envious, thinking of myself. Anyway, if you don't see enough, hear enough, understand enough, or think enough, what you write will naturally not be much better. (In the end, I am thinking crazy - Zhongmai/Mai Wenhe) That is, there are abnormalities, but the form and method of existence are still a bit confusing. (Isn't it over yet? Natural meow.——He) Pot: mass binary function t:2024.7.2
How to say it? At the beginning, I didn't expect that the author would always write from the first-person perspective. After all, it is difficult to describe the other person's psychology in the first person. Only by seeing it through "my" eyes, or by "I" feeling it, can we guess or understand the other person's psychological activities. If you are not careful, you will step on the wrong side of the story. It is indeed a good book, and it reminded me of the famous literature I read before. And it doesn't seem like there will be any sense of incompatibility, and it's easy to understand the protagonist, which is great. The author's writing style is very good, but in today's society where fast-food novels are exploding, not many people will read it if it only writes the truth. After all, it is good to be alive, and few people will be willing to read this kind of novel. If the author eliminates elements such as "cat girl", "cohabitation" and "crime", adds more activities between the protagonist and supporting characters, or adds more of the protagonist's alone feelings, and grasps the plot of the novel well, it will have the flavor of a literary work. Of course, I am not very knowledgeable and have only a superficial knowledge. My opinions are personal, so please don't criticize anyone who disagrees with me. Few people here will read it, which means that few people will read realistic novels.
The first-person perspective is more exciting than watching a movie. It feels really good to fight against gangsters. I feel that the author can be the master of first-person writing like Tomato. According to the author, it should be a single woman. I still want less money and more sugar.
Good works don't need too much modification
The writing is beautiful and very comfortable
After reading the beginning, the taste of Riqing is quite good and can make people immerse themselves in it. I hope the author can see the direction of their destiny. I feel that you have such strength.
A good book, worth reading, with great potential. This kind of book may not be recognized in the era of cool writing, but when we calm down, words with connotation are what we need.
In the era of Shuangwen, this work was really not discovered.
I saw that piece
Very beautiful and well described