The Host Keeps Derailing the Plot

No matter, give yourself praise. I really hope that someone can clear up the mines, because the author himself has no minefields, and the author of mines will not write the plot. Forget it, the two words that brothers started attacking each other have already been cleared up🤔 Ah, let's just say it. The "mutual attack" here is not in the traditional sense of "you once, next time it will be me." It is more about the protagonist wanting to take the initiative as the plot develops... I am not trying to sell dog meat. I want to make it clear in many places, but the tomato does not pass...

What's wrong with dragons! The dragon just wants a wife, what's wrong with the dragon! No one is wrong about dragons. Come on, that's a dragon! Oh, it's from the previous book, luckily it's still our CP, it's so cute! 😳 Zhu Bao is really a pure love brain. 😉 Ah, there are so few people, and I feel that the audience for mutual attacks is still too small (Fa is happy), but it is actually a good book. Moreover, let me put it quietly, the emotional response is good, but the narrative line is a bit thin. . . You can add a little more about the world of immortality, mainly about Zhu and Yan. (Not to guide writing, but to give a small opinion? 🤐)

Wow, the first world was so sad. From the last book to this one, I felt sorry for them. But the first world is like this again. It's so sad. Can't they transition to the next world peacefully? Especially Zhubao, I really love love and I feel sorry for them both. Author, please do more and write well. I am really looking forward to the next world, and I haven't explained why Yan Yan has also traveled through time. Author, please do well and write well 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 I just feel that the transitions need to be improved. Sometimes they change suddenly, a bit suddenly.

A very special article, one of the few that can make me feel like two people are in love. The author's description of emotions is very delicate. There are many similar domineering characters like Wen Renzhu, but once a strong and paranoid character is written, people will always feel that the status of the two is unequal. Many writings tend to be conquest and possession. This book is written more like a real person. Behind Wen's behavior can be hidden his concern, attachment, and concern for Jiang. He will worry about gains and losses, and will be sad. Of course, his desires are also undisguised. Very sweet. The article points out many times that some of Wen's behaviors are inappropriate (for example, Wen himself has complained about his bad personality. If Jiang is stubborn, the two of them may be). He has a certain reflection on himself, which actually adds to the three-dimensionality of this person. This article will not make me feel that writing about forced love is for the sake of forced love. A very good book. Ps: Actually, I like Jiang Yan better, but the one who writes more is actually Wen

It's a very cute book, with the beauty of a hammer here and there (× The brain circuit is very strange to fight against the young couple Lu, the very human inhuman and the very inhuman... Inhuman. The slimy, cheeky and coquettish black dragon is really cute. When he is furious, he visions a little dragon with scaly hair and scaly hair (touch it). Brother Jiang's inhumanity is also super delicious, with a touch of possessiveness, and he makes some fiery straight shots in a dank way. In this way, the young lovers reached a frank reconciliation in a strange twist (? Hey, in short, they are cute and cute, and the effect will be better when consumed together with the previous one. I look forward to the next one. Yeah, the book is also very funny. I was so happy that I looked at it.

It looks good, but the first world is very disappointing 😢 😢, why did Su Yan do this, is this heir so important 🥺 🥺, he obviously has Zhu 😢 😢 😢 Also, the big scenes are well written. It would be even better if the transitions were more natural 💕 💕 💕, come on 💕 💕 💕

A very delicious book😍... The kind that even if the continuity is interrupted, it is still interesting to read when you open it again...😋 The car is delicious, yes 🥳 I finally finished reading their story intermittently. After reading it, I felt satisfied instead of feeling uncomfortable with withdrawal. I loved it so much...😌 The previous one was also very good😘 Pure sweetness, cruelty-free and safe to eat🥰We found a small amount of broken glass in a large amount of sugar✓

It's pretty good, they fall in love and kill each other, haha, but it should be better if I have read the previous one, but I haven't read it. I just took a few glances and I don't like it personally. That's it. As always, I only see one world. I'm crying.

After watching it for half an afternoon, if I want to evaluate it, it is actually of a very high standard. The plot is smooth, the writing is good, and the protagonist setting is also good. I have to say that there is a slight problem. I feel that the author's code words cannot catch up with the thoughts in my brain, so there is a slight jump. But if nothing else, it is really perfect. I read it with some brains. The details are really rich and natural, and the plot is smooth. I highly recommend it.

I just want to ask the author, is Su Yan the same person as Jiang Yan in the previous book? I was a bit confused in the previous book. I wanted to see the young couple stay together forever, but according to the development of the plot, they should be the same person. Also, I like it very much. The author must update it soon [Blow kiss]