Rebirth: Who Still Wants to Be the Female General's Dog Licker?

The writing is great, I like it very much, but the early plot always reminds readers that it is easy to put off readers. I clicked it back and forth several times, but the early reading was too frustrating, but the writing attracted me again. Come on

Isn't this still adding a dog? It is said that love is deep and hate is deep. In my opinion, the love is still lingering. When reading a novel, I am looking for someone with an open mind and a clear personality. There is no need to be so realistic. Of course, the author's writing style is also excellent. It feels like listening to an old man telling a story. I look forward to the author's subsequent chapters.

The writing style is very good and sophisticated. It is a novel that is delayed by the name. It is written as an orthodox novel with the title of "Shuang Wen". Those who read the orthodox novel cannot read it, while those who read the "Shuang Wen" will run away cursing after half an hour. This is polarization (I want to ask about the original name of this book [Thinking] [Thinking])

Awesome! ! ! ! The author's writing is so awesome! ! The future is promising It's so awesome. It has great potential. The writing style is very good. As long as I can write it down, my rating will definitely not be low.

Now that I have seen it, I feel that it looks good, there are no major bad points, and the author's writing style is also good. After reading the comments, some people said that the heroine was too vicious, but that was probably because she practiced the Heartless Sword in her previous life, so she didn't feel the efforts of the hero. There was a section in the middle where she either lost her memory or had feelings for the hero. And although I am also a ruthless sword in this life, my cultivation level may be relatively low, so I can clearly see that I have more emotions, and I cry even in my dreams, right? The same goes for the investigation in the middle. Wouldn't it be more interesting to write a more detailed story? I'm not saying that the writing is boring, the main plot is also interspersed with some interesting things and daily life. It doesn't mean it's a long paragraph, just read it in one go. Although everyone has different preferences, I suggest you read more before making an evaluation, and don't criticize maliciously, otherwise there will be no new people entering the industry. Everyone has a novice stage, right?

It's okay. The plot is similar to other rebirths.

It looks good, and the early writing is okay. The only dissatisfaction may be that the protagonist is a bit weak, but the number of chapters is still small, so I can't see any major flaws for the time being. The writing is good, and overall it's good to read. I hope the author has laid the groundwork for so long and can have more exciting parts later on in terms of plot or emotion.

I would like to encourage the author, the writing is very good. I feel that the main reason for the low rating is that the pace is too slow. After all, most people, like me, probably came in for the cool writing [laughing and crying]. However, there are currently not enough plots of Bai's regret. To put it bluntly, it's just not cool enough [facepalm]. Moreover, the interspersing of past lives from time to time seems to affect the viewing experience. But the plot concept feels very good, and the supporting characters are all very good, especially Hong Shuang's portrayal, which really aroused my emotions. Some people in the comments said that this is the core of martial arts, which I think makes sense.

I really like the author's literary style, so I read some and wrote: 1. There will always be people in life who have no feelings but can't let go of the opposite sex. 2. Eat one bowl of human noodles and lose one bowl; eat one bowl of human noodles and lose one bowl every time. 3. Lemon fruit on the lemon tree, you and me under the lemon tree, so sour. 4. Once the horse has gone, you will not be afraid of leaving! 5. Why can darkness swallow everything, but light spots bring me confusion? 6. It's not one minute that changes your destiny, but every minute. 7. The stars will only shine for those in need! 8. Slowly... Will appear in any form! 9. Slowly... Suitable for any kind of first time! 10. Some things don't need to be expressed, just keep them in your heart! 11. Anyone who likes rain is not a person with stories!

How can I put it, the writing is very good, especially the first few dozen chapters. Maybe due to personal reasons, I still like this kind of memory killing, Xiaosao, and the author's writing style is also good, and he can also introduce poems. In short, it fits my reading style (it will be better than other novels of this type I have read). One star may be because I usually read too many Haoshuang novels, and I always felt that this one was a bit frustrating, a bit regretful, and unsatisfactory. The plot itself is very good, has foreshadowing, and is well written. You can give it a try. I also hope that the author will continue to work hard and not abandon the book. Thank you! I still want to read this book.