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I suggest you change it or explain it in the introduction. The protagonist's love for the person who raised him. Not love but maternal love. Or you can explain it later without changing it, after all. After all, 11-year-old children have no concept of love. One more thing. I feel that the character of Hermione should be the one who brings the protagonist out of his sadness. He probably won't be resurrected later. It would feel a little bit poisonous if it was resurrected. Hermione appears as a character similar to a redeemer. If you don't explain, many people will leave. The author also saw it and responded. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] I always feel like it's a female author [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's really good-looking. It's better than those that simply take one wocao at a time. I'm looking forward to the update.

The content is okay, it is Tomato after all, and reading novels does not necessarily mean you have to get into trouble. You just need to pursue a clear logic that makes you feel comfortable and happy with the novel. Just remember to lose your mind at the beginning. There are so few hp fanfics, but the ones like this are pretty good, I hope you keep up the good work! There are still many shortcomings

Very good book, okay. But if my filial piety has not deteriorated, I will retreat first, and don't expect it without authorization [crying] (Can any old readers tell me whether there is a love line for Lisette in the future? If so, I will change it to five stars)

I don't know what your taste is like, but in my opinion, this is a book that I think is pretty good so far.

The writing is quite good, why was it removed from the shelves?

It's good to read, but I don't know why so many people think this is a harem novel [eating melon].

What a novel Potter fan

Very unique way of writing

Look good, look good

My evaluation is, it looks great [like]😋😋😋

Okay, it's pretty good-looking and worth a look.

It's quite interesting, come on!

Super super pretty

It's beautiful, very interesting, and I'm looking forward to it!

A bit ooc, but not bad.

Very nice novel.

Personally I think it's okay

Very exciting and imaginative

So is Esther the heroine? Looking at the way it is written now, why does it feel like Hermione is a single heroine?

Very imaginative. Very well written

My favorite HP fan at the moment

Very good, I like it very much, I hope Hermione is the heroine [admiration] [laughs]

It's really well written, and the writing style is also very delicate.

Look, my writing style is really good, it's worth a try [laughing]

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good!

There are quite a few HP writers, but this seems to be the first one where the main character is a vampire.