Sailing: Starting from Giving up the Burning Fruit and Becoming a Pirate

Maybe I am too small. It feels so bad to throw away the Shao Shao fruit.

The content is quite novel, but a bit short. I believe the author can make further breakthroughs in writing, but I give you full marks for the novel content. There are more than 100 pictures so far, and I only have two complaints. Yes, come on, author

This is a rare book about extraordinary pirates, but the title is a bit unflattering. It's a pity that I started it too early, and it was a bit painful to watch it.

Personally, I still like it very much, regardless of others. Some of the initial minor flaws are barely acceptable. Some of them have been explained later. Although some of the explanations are far-fetched, they are acceptable. It is just that the updates are a bit slow now, and sometimes they are interrupted for a day.

How can I put it, people are selfish, it really makes people feel uncomfortable when they see Devil Fruits being given out everywhere [Thinking] It doesn't matter if you give them to the weak ones, they are natural ones, even if they are pulled again, it still feels awkward to give them away.

7 Points is very accurate. Overall, it's okay, but there are some places where the preface and subtitles don't match up, especially when I lose the fruit at the front, which makes me feel lonely...

Generally speaking, this book has some so-called poisonous points that are difficult for ordinary people to understand, but in my opinion, these are not poisonous points. The combination of Soul Soul Fruit, Dark Fruit, Bat Fruit, and Bat Fruit is unique and original. It can be seen that the author has thought about the combination based on a complete world. The plot is very good, and it is not a so-called cool novel. At a certain level, the protagonist is not invincible at the same level or invincible without brains. The legendary power is also well outlined. It is a masterpiece. One chapter is enough for anyone [crying]

It's good, but the conflict between noble status and pirates, you need to offer a reward, and you have to prepare for the gold mine.

I'd be heartbroken if you gave me a devil fruit, but it's so beautiful

Chapter 51 is currently progressing. The biggest poisonous point is that the protagonist cannot win over his subordinates and give out good things when his subordinates have little loyalty. Personally, I think throwing away the Devil Fruit is not considered poisonous, but throwing away the Burning Fruit is. I hope the next plot is more interesting [rolls eyes][rolls eyes][rolls eyes]

In fact, it was not that good in the beginning. In the beginning, the protagonist did not rely on strength and resourcefulness to survive the desperate situation he encountered. He was lucky every time. It was only later that he started to rely on himself when he fought against the legend. Moreover, the level of this world is much higher than that of One Piece, so the power obtained by the protagonist has limited improvement to the protagonist. However, this is still one of the rare books that I can read and give it a good review.

The writing is super nice, come on, it's the type I like.

It is recommended to revise the first few chapters

Promotion is a bit difficult. It is recommended to add multiple abilities, or come up with some kind of integrated form, which can clearly boast the level of combat capabilities. This will be great. Normally, he can perform two moves beyond the level, and the explosion is absolutely true.

Animals - Shining - Another BUG fruit = invincible. The BUG fruit has childlike charm, time, and the retrograde fruit is basically invincible.

A very good nautical novel that borrows the setting of One Piece and has its own characteristics.

It's still very interesting to write

Not many people see it but it's really pretty

Very interesting novel

I would like to ask the author, were these Devil Fruits drawn and placed in this world? Authors can also create some devil fruits themselves

It looks good, but the recent updates are a bit ominous.

The famous Thirteenth Lang of Nanhai once said, Those who learn from me will live, and those who resemble me will die.

It's so pitiful that I can't read enough. Nowadays, I lose interest in many books. Books that I have been following are rarely finished.

Gaga is great, much better than most books on Tomato

It's really good to watch, the world view is grand, and the plot is smoothly connected. One chapter in two days will kill you

It's getting better and better from behind, come on Great battle description

Very good, looking forward to the follow-up

Very good, why did you stop?

I managed it in the front, but it was actually okay in the back. The main character in the front had some mysterious operations, but it got better in the back. This book is not dead yet. I accidentally emptied the bookshelf before. Someone just commented and liked me, and I realized that it is still alive. The 3,000 people reading it must [facepalm] support it.

This book is well written, the only drawback is that updates are too slow.