When he woke up, Zhang Dongsheng found himself in an unknown hospital. When he tried his best to escape from the hospital, he discovered that this world was no longer the world he was in. The cursed town of Innsmouth and the terrifying legend of Dunwich disappeared for no reason. The nameless city, as if countless pairs of evil eyes are staring at him, how should he not fall into madness (atypical infinite flow, if you read too much, you can change your taste, pure refreshing novel, growth type, novice, overhead, male protagonist, no cp, no harem, no ambiguous plot)
Reader comments
I think the subject matter and content are acceptable, but the writing style is a bit stiff, and the descriptions in some places could actually be less detailed. It's still great that you wrote so much! It's because of the bluntness that I couldn't really immerse myself in the plot of the book. Also, the introduction can be refined. I hope that if you have the energy, you can make some revisions. After you finish writing it, you can read your own article for a period of time, or ask a friend to read it. It is really stiff, and then continue to revise it [Sending Hearts]
Also, I hope it can be divided into more segments. It feels like my eyes are dazzled by a long list [face covering]
I think the subject matter and content are acceptable, but the writing style is a bit stiff, and the descriptions in some places could actually be less detailed. It's still great that you wrote so much! It's because of the bluntness that I couldn't really immerse myself in the plot of the book. Also, the introduction can be refined. I hope that if you have the energy, you can make some revisions. After you finish writing it, you can read your own article for a period of time, or ask a friend to read it. It is really stiff, and then continue to revise it [Sending Hearts] Also, I hope it can be divided into more segments. It feels like my eyes are dazzled by a long list [face covering]