The Twisted Abyss

I think the subject matter and content are acceptable, but the writing style is a bit stiff, and the descriptions in some places could actually be less detailed. It's still great that you wrote so much! It's because of the bluntness that I couldn't really immerse myself in the plot of the book. Also, the introduction can be refined. I hope that if you have the energy, you can make some revisions. After you finish writing it, you can read your own article for a period of time, or ask a friend to read it. It is really stiff, and then continue to revise it 💕 Also, I hope it can be divided into more segments. It feels like my eyes are dazzled by a long list 🤦