Awkward and proud captain, sober and straightforward captain
His moon is the moon above the clouds and the moon in his heart.
His moon is the moon above the clouds and the only bright moon in his heart.
Reader comments
It's quite nice, but it needs to be proofread carefully. Many paragraphs are out of order.
It's quite nice, but it needs to be proofread carefully. Many paragraphs are out of order.