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Please Shuangnan, Cultivate Immortality, Don't Wear It Fast! Don't Make Bad Comments on the Internet!
I want to read a book like "When the Yandere Villain Takes the Black Lotus Green Tea Script".
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Shuangnan, a Cultivator, Gifted and with a Good Family Background, a Group of Teenagers Traveled Around the World
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Cultivation of Immortals Two Male Protagonists
I beg you, I want to see two male protagonists cultivating immortality. Please don't torture me.
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A Male Ghost Asks for a Book
Male ghost one, reading the essay makes me want to be a rat
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Stop Eating Good Food Secretly. Eat It for Me. Eat It and Taste It.
Brothers, stop trying to sneak good food for me, give me your food quickly, eat, eat, any type is OK
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It's beautiful. I like this kind of flowing emotion. It's very real. I just felt that the pace was a bit too slow. I wanted to skip reading it several times because the introduction was very interesting. I always wanted to watch the second rebirth, but I didn't expect that it would be more than a hundred chapters later [facepalm], but if I skipped reading, I would miss the plot [facepalm]
It's really good-looking, and the writing is also very good. It's not the kind of fast-paced story where the main character travels to the wrong time and is with the male protagonist, and then the two of them fall in love with each other until they die before they have been together for 30 chapters. The author writes the process of two people getting together in great detail!! Very interesting! ! ! The interaction is also fun! ! Especially when Bing Nandong and Fan Zhiyi learned about their feelings and were rejected when they expressed their feelings, they left again unwillingly. I even practiced it several times! ! ! So cute! ! ! ! !
At first I thought the two sudden system disconnections were a bit of a joke, but when you watch it later you realize, well, I won't spoil it here. Bing Nandong's character in the article is mainly divided into three stages. The first is that he is an upright senior brother, proud and determined to save the world, but he is not arrogant and aloof. He has a poisonous tongue and a childish side. These points give him the aura of many living people and the unique senior senior brother Bing Nandong in his youth. The second is that he discovered the deception and fell from heaven to the bottom. He was betrayed by everyone and separated from his relatives. He was immature and full of hatred and powerlessness. He wanted to seek death, but the reality that he could not die gave him another hard blow. This was also the most painful period, because during this transition period, he had to accept many things. The third is that he has finally grown into a big villain. When I saw that, I felt a lot of emotion in my heart. After all, before Chapter 200, he was still a young man who was full of ambition and wanted to ride a drunken horse in the world. Now he only has plots and conspiracies. To use an inappropriate word, it is world-weariness. He is tired and resentful of the world and does not care about himself. Such a life is boring. Fan Zhiyi is a silly character. The consciousness of modern people makes him have a strong sense of morality and rules in his heart. He cannot turn a blind eye when human life is at stake. He is an extremely kind person, so kind that he is stupid. I am not willing to call him a loving father. Perhaps this stupidity is one of the opportunities for him to save Bing Nandong. Such a timid and afraid of pain, but a truly benevolent person is willing to sacrifice his own self for the greater self. Zhiyi, I don't know what kind of meaning the author added when he created this name. The character Bing Nandong was a carrier of tragedy when he was originally designed. He seemed to be suffering for the sake of suffering. After the emergence of self-awareness, he crazily wanted to break the rules and touch the world outside the rules. The appearance of Fan Zhiyi really broke the sky. In countless cycles, I am very grateful that the two of them were able to save each other. Even though the journey was difficult, fortunately they persisted until victory. I feel so deeply that I cannot express it in words.
It's very interesting. It's really interesting. I've read Chapter 168 now. I think it's very interesting. But I really feel sorry for the male protagonist Bing Nandong. The favored son of heaven had his back broken, and the person who broke his back was the one he was closest to. Friend, the most trusted boss, but okay, okay, okay [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] There are many people accompanying him, so he is not alone. Xiao Fan, I feel so sad. Although I don't know what I feel sad for, I just feel so sad😭 After reading it, I am really happy. I hope this dog system and Tiannao will be killed by me. I don't want to see Xiao Fan lose his memory anymore, okay? It was so uncomfortable for me to see. Although I do like forced plots, I can't force them. Oh, what can I say? I also really like Nan Dong's high-spirited and proud character in the early stage, but his subsequent story also really makes me sad and uncomfortable. In fact, sometimes I really hope that he will be fine for the rest of his life and will not be disturbed. When my career was about to end, I hoped not to discover the truth, no (´△`) Then it was really a pity that God did not follow my wishes. He had been praised by everyone for so many years, and he treated every person in Tianyunmen with his heart. He continued to use his own abilities to help others, and continued to carry forward the great road in his heart. Then he got his own lover, someone he wanted to protect, and someone he wanted to go on for the rest of his life. But it was all fucking ruined! Xiao Fan is also really miserable. I love him every time, and then sacrifice for Nan Dong every time. In fact, sometimes I really think, is it possible that this is not good? If Xiao Fan really only has the first life, then Nan Dong may live in depression for the rest of his life, but fortunately, the development of the story will definitely not be like this. To be honest, if it is the norm in other novels, he should start the third life directly. Then I wrote a bunch of stories about the third life, and then briefly wrote about the first two lives. In this article, I really feel like they have been with me for 30 years from beginning to end [face covering] If I didn't have the painting skills, I would just draw fanart for them. I'll see if I can write fanfic, but it's not finished yet, and it's not good to write fanfic |ω) And I'm really afraid of ooc In any case, author, you must continue writing, you must continue writing, don't give up, it is really good to watch, but it may not be good for many people who prefer to enter the love story quickly, because the relationship development in the early stage is really slow and steady, after all, it is after 100 chapters. The early stage is all about fighting monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters, monsters. The pursuit character of Sister Chopper is really awesome, and it left a deep impression on me. To be honest, both the male and female characters in it are very well created. I actually have my own faults. Sometimes the author makes typos accidentally. I should have discovered five of them so far. However, it does not affect reading. Anyway, everyone in the comment area will correct it on their own.
The setting is very good, but in the end I think Fan Fan's character always feels different from the previous few times before he lost his memory. It always feels different from the first time. It may be my own problem, but overall it is very good. I like them very much and hope they can be together forever.
So pretty! ! ! I rarely write book reviews, but the author's writing is so good and it's so unpopular that I can't stand it! ! After watching almost a third of it, I can feel that the emotional changes are smooth and smooth, not abrupt, and the plot of the two getting along is very natural, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. Fan Zhiyi's little actions and complaints are also very cute, hahahahaha, and The plot connects very smoothly and is really comfortable. A long novel would be even more enjoyable💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻. By the way, I'm going to scold this🍅. It's really sad for the author that such a good book doesn't have such a weird popularity rating. Read it, read it, come and read it! ! Very, very beautiful! ! 💪🏻✨💪🏻✨
Fan Zhiyi and Bing Nandong are particularly good. The two little bitter gourds are really hard. Fortunately, the interaction between the two is sweet from beginning to end, and they are always going in both directions. What I like most is the interaction between the two at the beginning of the book, the purest and most beautiful love between two boys, the arrogant senior brother who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside x the lively and cheerful idiot Xiao Xianyu. After Bing Nandong turned black, he became a restless, sensitive and suspicious puppy, waiting for his owner Fan Zhiyi to come back and tie him up. In the end, all the hardships were rewarded and he had a happy ending. Young lovers must be happy forever, Bing Nan Dong Fan Zhiyi 99⁺₊♡₊⁺
The characters are really three-dimensional, with distinct personalities, and the motivations and reasons behind the characters' words and actions are also very clear. The author is very good at analyzing the shining points of the characters' personalities. But the entire book has a depressing atmosphere of an impending storm, which makes people feel a little panicked and filled with a sense of powerlessness. But I have to say that the author's control over the character's personality really impressed me. Fan Zhiyi's character is actually not lovable at the moment. His indecision even makes readers feel bored while watching, and they feel a little bit annoyed that iron cannot be transformed into steel. The author describes a lot of Fan Zhiyi's hesitant words, looking forward and backward when doing things. Apart from its role in promoting the plot, this is also a valuable quality of looking before speaking before acting. He has very little power, so the only thing he can do is to constantly reduce the possibility of leaving regrets. After losing his memory, he spent a whole night of deep thinking to confirm his own mind and at the same time give himself the courage to pursue this relationship. This is not a kind of strength and responsibility. Later, when the memory is restored, the reader finally gets a clear picture of the whole incident. Fan Zhiyi's tenacity is infinitely magnified, making people feel distressed and loved. As for Bing Nandong, needless to say, he was the one who felt the most distressed in the early stage, so that during the next two rebirths, I always compared Bing Nandong as a boy, watching his experiences and changes and secretly lamenting. The image of the righteous young man portrayed by the author is so deeply rooted in the hearts of the people that he almost becomes my Bai Yueguang [crying] [crying]. Faced with the entanglement between the warmth and warmth of people's interests and desires, Fan Zhiyi is his only truth. If Bing Nandong wants to seize what he wants, he can only become stronger, strong enough to overcome all obstacles. He did it but at a heavy cost. The various love-hate relationships in the later stages were also very heart-wrenching, and it made me feel pained and helpless. Overall, I feel that this book has flaws and flaws. I will not comment on some of the comments that are outrageous, but I believe that things in the world are unpredictable, always coincidental, absurd, true, and helpless. And as BL uses more plot settings as seasoning for the emotional pull of the characters, I think the author handled this aspect very well. This is my first time writing a long review just to express my feelings after reading it for the first time. Come on, author.
The author, I really like this book, especially the first time traveling, it has a very juvenile feel. I have always liked watching dark plots before, maybe I find them enjoyable. I felt really bad after reading Bing Nandong's experience. If I really like a character, I don't want him to suffer a lot of harm. I would rather he always be the radiant senior brother and freeze his happy time in a sweet love forever. What really touched me was that he was imprisoned until death. That death really meant saying goodbye to his past character. 10 Years, how long is 10 years?
Finally I have time to comment! The author is really good at writing. I think that every time Fan Zhiyi loses his memory, he can write it perfectly every time, very coherent and smooth. This book really surprised me! ! Everyone in the book is made of flesh and blood. What amazes me the most is that Bing Nandong has gone through many years of growth and change, and written step by step. Finally, comparing him now with his past, he can highlight the things that some people do, which are really not human things. It highlights the selfishness and ugliness of those people and at the same time writes about his misery. It is a very delicate writing style. The same goes for Fan Zhiyi. The development of the story can be described in one word - just right. It's so delicately written, well detailed, and endlessly memorable. I like [blowing kiss][sending heart][like][love][admiration]
The characters are all very cute. In fact, I prefer the early sect. The interaction between the protagonists is young and cute. The relaxed daily life is accompanied by a huge conspiracy and the happiness of walking on thin ice. The later part feels a bit bloody and a bit long, but the flaws are not concealed. It is still very complete and beautiful. Young lovers must last forever for eternity. Watching Nan Dong transform from a high-spirited young man to a paranoid male ghost (and a bit domineering?), It's a bit sad. I really liked the reliable senior brother male ghost Tsundere 1 in the early stage, that kind of young man with bright clothes and angry horses, who has both career and love (?) I love watching it!
The author, I am a dormitory student in high school. After waiting for a week, my only wish was to see the follow-up, but I found that there was no update. It was so sad [crying] I hope the author will continue to update.
I probably know why this book has such a low rating. The pace is not slow but it is just crazy amnesia! ! ! ! It's so uncomfortable! ! The two protagonists are so miserable. The suffering is really funny and makes the whole novel a lot more relaxing. But it's really frustrating to watch the loss of memory. Overall, the writing is actually very good. Although Shou is clumsy, that's what normal people should be like, right? Having fun in suffering, cowardly Gong is not a compulsively yandere in the traditional sense. He is still very respectful and receptive. I was quite emotional when I saw the later part. In the early stage, Gong was so young and energetic, but in the later stage, he turned into a wet old ghost (bushi). It's just slow, because the plot of amnesia always leads to the reset of progress, which not only abuses the protagonist but also abuses the readers. . It feels like I am waiting for the pain along with the attack. . .
It looks good, it looks good, Nan Dong and Zhi Yi must be well, the winter solstice cp must be long and lasting, it is not easy for the young couple [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Everyone is fine [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]
I love watching it so much, maybe I'm just a couple who loves to eat this stuff! The relationship between Bing Nandong and Zhiyi is so bad. God knows, I was really heartbroken when I saw Zhiyi was forced to leave due to system reasons; some people may think that Zhiyi's character is like this, but I think this is the reaction of normal people (thinking); and I like Xiao Bing in the early stage and Xiao Bing in the later stage. Zhiyi, you are in luck (bushi); the plot is also very interesting, Baozi who loves watching can give it a try [Sending Hearts]
I particularly like the boyishness in the early stages, but I was so upset when I lost my memory twice! Although there is an explanation in the later stage, I really like the interaction between the two in the early stage, it is very cute, the confession and the first kiss are very green.
It's a pity that it's a serial, it would be great if it was finished! The pace of the book is quite slow for the general trend, but I still prefer this to those fast-food novels! ! ! Thank you for your hard work, please update soon XD
It's really beautiful. Can you all show it to me? He is more inclined to the infinite flow. I thought the final ending would be that both people died, but I didn't expect the author to be able to figure out this idea. Moreover, the ending of both people dying turned out to be a reincarnation that has already happened countless times. It made me cry. Please let me watch it at the end, okay?
I can't stop. It's so beautiful. I really like this kind of rebirth of the same world multiple times. Although every time I come back, I have to remember, but every time I come back, I am the best Fan Fan to maintain my mentality. He is very cheerful and humorous [please update] It is not enough to watch. Author, don't be tired, but don't rest either [shy]
Really nice to look at. The author's many transitions are well written and the characters are well created. The character of Bing Nandong is really three-dimensional and vivid! Innocence, cuteness, integrity, cruelty, and dankness... I love this book so much! Don't stop!
I forgot the title of the book after reading it for a long time. I thought it was finished when I read half of it. Thank you to the author for saving my life. I saw that there is still another half, which is being serialized. It's really good to read, the plot is novel, the writing is brilliant, and it's touching. The young man written about is really beautiful, high-spirited, refined, and unparalleled in his elegance. The mental movements are well described in detail, and the details are well received. The characters are real, rich, diverse, and plump, and the characters are well received. The chapters are well received. I hope that before the end, I can write a more detailed and daily story about the relationship between the two protagonists before Death Shield. It is really sweet. I will follow up on this type of extras after reading them. Thank you, come on, madam. I look forward to better development. ㊗️My wife's article went viral It's a book with a very juvenile feel. It's really beautiful.
Very interesting setting,,, why no one is watching it?
The writing is good, it just makes people angry because it is well written. If you ask me to say that I am also the perpetrator, I know how difficult it is for Shou to live in this environment. If I don't care about the rumors and do not make changes, I mean Shou has a good attitude. It makes people angry. I can only say that I don't bless you and don't understand.
Really love this book! Whenever I recall it, I will be moved by the relationship between the two. The author's writing style is really good. It seems that he really feels that these people are living in another small world. Whether it is Nan Dong's transformation from an arrogant person to a person who looks a bit "crazy", or the reasons why Xiao Fan makes every decision, or the foreshadowings, they are all very real and natural! In addition to the shaping of the plot, the grasp of the characters also made me feel a "sense of completeness". No one is a stereotype, and everyone has their own good and bad qualities. I still remember the story of Xiao Lu. From the snippets, I can see that his life trajectory was indeed rugged, and his natural personality defects aggravated this. It is undeniable that he did a lot of wrong things, but at the same time, I still think he was a pitiful man, and his complete death in the fire was, I think, the best outcome for him or as a reader. This book is well written and carefully crafted. I hope the author can continue writing books and I hope this book can be read by more people! ! ! 🥺🥺🥺
It's very interesting to read, the author's writing style is pretty good, and the characters are very full and three-dimensional. The description of the emotions between the protagonists is very delicate and vivid. All in all, it's a very good novel, but I don't know why it's rated so low.
My favorite part of the whole story is still the first life, the youthful spirit is really irreversible, the second life is Bing Nandong and the third life, the second life is tortured, the third life has been darkened, personally I still prefer the innocent and arrogant first life, it is really pure love [almost crying] [almost crying]
This book is so beautiful... I read it in one sitting. It's been a long time since I read a book on Tomato. This is the best book I've seen this time when I came back to Tomato. [Crying] [Crying] I almost wanted to cry after reading it in one go, and I couldn't bear to part with it.
I can't understand why such a good novel is not popular. The plot structure and characters can be said to be novel. Each character is not a stereotyped image, they all have their own characteristics. There is no cool and arrogant old-fashioned flavor at all. The laughter and curses are all written into the article. It is very three-dimensional and the article's intention is also correct. There is nothing between the lines that ruins the three views and makes one's appetite unappetizing. It can be seen that the author is also a good kid. I recommend it.
Everyone is so cute! There are many twists and turns, and the relationship between the two protagonists is not inexplicable. The characters and personalities are very three-dimensional. It is a good book. I like it very much. I hope everyone can read it.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I read a story a long time ago with a very similar setting (but the plot and characters are still very different). I was so excited when I read that. Now that I have seen a similar setting and the plot characters are all online, I am really going crazy hahahahahaha. I am planning to read it again in a while hahahahahaha. Now it seems like a pervert wants to hide this article and lock it in a small dark room [crying] [crying]