The first book, the book collapsed in the middle, and the ending was hasty and unfinished.
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Reader comments
Adding a female figure to the title of the book will definitely attract many readers
For example: female villain (many readers like this one)
There are some water characters at the back
The description of the scene is so in-depth! It's easy to be confused. It's not excluded that there are people who like this kind of novel with overly descriptive descriptions, but there are still a small number of people. Most people still find it laborious and deliberate, which affects the perception of the novel. The setting is very good, but the skills need to be strengthened. You can feel that the author has a strong foundation, but it has not been polished. Come on, come on [send heart]
The plot is good, the framework is novel, and very interesting. In the villain article, the egoism of the villain is achieved, but the number of words is a bit watery. If you rest a little, it can become more perfect. Come on (◕ᴗ◕✧)
Can the male protagonist take Xiao Nanniang under his wing? [Smile][Smile][Smile] That little boy is a very nice girl. If it can't be Nanniang, you can consider using some means to change it from a boy to a girl? 💔💔💔Thanks to the author, I really like this character😭😭😭 (Is it possible that I am also a dog licker in reality?)
It's quite nice. I can see that I used to write a lot of 10-point essays about the environment when I was in high school. The plot is also quite interesting. The villains all have a little green tea. I feel very relaxed now. Please support me.
Why is this book so short? It's the same as the author's 78
The writing is okay, not bad
It's pretty good, I love watching it [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
A very interesting book with many interesting old jokes and a thorough understanding of the government. The author is very good.
Bad work not worth reading
My God, if you are proficient in the art of tea, you belong
Adding a female figure to the title of the book will definitely attract many readers For example: female villain (many readers like this one) There are some water characters at the back
The description of the scene is so in-depth! It's easy to be confused. It's not excluded that there are people who like this kind of novel with overly descriptive descriptions, but there are still a small number of people. Most people still find it laborious and deliberate, which affects the perception of the novel. The setting is very good, but the skills need to be strengthened. You can feel that the author has a strong foundation, but it has not been polished. Come on, come on [send heart]
The plot is good, the framework is novel, and very interesting. In the villain article, the egoism of the villain is achieved, but the number of words is a bit watery. If you rest a little, it can become more perfect. Come on (◕ᴗ◕✧)
Can the male protagonist take Xiao Nanniang under his wing? [Smile][Smile][Smile] That little boy is a very nice girl. If it can't be Nanniang, you can consider using some means to change it from a boy to a girl? 💔💔💔Thanks to the author, I really like this character😭😭😭 (Is it possible that I am also a dog licker in reality?)
It's quite nice. I can see that I used to write a lot of 10-point essays about the environment when I was in high school. The plot is also quite interesting. The villains all have a little green tea. I feel very relaxed now. Please support me.
Why is this book so short? It's the same as the author's 78
The writing is okay, not bad
It's pretty good, I love watching it [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
A very interesting book with many interesting old jokes and a thorough understanding of the government. The author is very good. Bad work not worth reading
My God, if you are proficient in the art of tea, you belong