My Return to Life Begins with Saving My Dad

The handling of this issue is too poor. I guess your rating will not be very good. Nowadays, ruthlessness is popular. This is the trend. Your writing style is not very good, but you still write against the trend.

There are nearly 400,000 words, but the rating is not displayed. Have you considered the reason? The connection of the story is too messy, with a hammer in the east and a sap in the west. This thing is described halfway and then transferred to other places; the description of the characters is too extensive, there are so many characters, but none of them can be remembered; and the most critical narration is too much. Four-fifths of each chapter is narration, and only one-fifth is the dialogue between the characters in the novel. With so many narrations and so little dialogue and exchange between the characters, how do you describe the characteristics of the characters? This is just like making friends. Only by communicating with each other and having common experiences will the readers have a sense of involvement. When they think of something or something, they will think of the corresponding person.

Middle school timeline is too long! It looked pretty good at first, but it was a bit awkward to add an ambiguous girl to the mix! I really can't stand it anymore, having to worry about trivial things every day!

What a great book, but I discovered it too early. I finished reading it before it was fully cooked.

I hope there are more female protagonists

Many or one?

The author is still a little out of tune and it gives me a headache.

Collectible novels

Write carefully and you can do it.