Honkai: Star Rail: Fu Xuan's Younger Sister Is the Sword Champion

It's okay if you hope you don't get married, or you can be single.

Nice! It's just that there are too few of them in my daily life. I would like to see some posts [sending my heart] When will the green bird come out? I want to see what interesting things will happen when Qingque, Wei Na, Ah Xuan, and Xiao Ya meet together 😏 Qingque → Fu Xuan ↔ Xiaoya ← Wei Na This scene will definitely be beautiful [laughing]

I have seen more than 20 chapters so far, and there are too few protagonists. The protagonist's name only appears 11 times in Chapters 1 and 2, and even the protagonist's name does not appear in Chapters 3, 4, 5, 6, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 19, 20, and 21. I've seen it before, and I don't know how the author came up with it. Maybe he was explaining the world view or background, but I feel that it was not handled well. The battles were written in too much detail, and it was a bit indifferent. He kept writing about other protagonists who were inexplicably in their twenties. Another point is that Fu Ya and Fu Xuan have different hair and eye colors, which was not mentioned in advance. Although this matter is not a big deal, if it is not mentioned in advance, readers will imagine that the two of them look exactly the same, which will affect the perception a bit. The rest is okay, the plot is quite smooth, the writing is good, and the concept is very attractive to me. It looked a bit disappointing from the front, mainly because I had high expectations. I'll take a look at it later, I hope it will be better later. If you were originally going to write a group portrait and the main character didn't have much of a role, just pretend I didn't say anything. Finally, I would like to express my own wishes: I hope that the protagonist can maintain his current personality and not become too cold. I hope that the protagonist can maintain a girlish figure and not grow too tall. I want to be cuter, like Fu Xuan, please 😘. Also, I hope Xiaoya is single. I'm sorry, but I'll give it four stars first. I've finished reading the current update. The later chapters are very interesting and the protagonist has more roles. The first few chapters are not irrelevant and will be used later. It is no exaggeration to say that this is my favorite Star Iron fanfic I have ever read. (I just said I like it the most, not saying anything else is bad, and I didn't criticize me, so don't scold me)

I feel like the early group portraits are okay, but the foreshadowing is still a bit too long. The subsequent writing is very good, so please give me my best [Sending my heart] Also, after reading more than 200 chapters, I discovered that the author is actually the author of Terra Revolution 🤦

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write 100 chapters a day? It's not that I am being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I have never been an author.

The writing is good. It is similar to a group portrait novel in the early stage, with an epic feel. Instead of being like other books, it starts to mainly describe the protagonist and uses the power of one person to change the entire universe (this is refreshing, but it cannot reflect the vastness of the universe and makes people feel like they are just fighting in a small place). It is more like a coming-of-age novel. Summary: Suitable for those who read long-term novels, but not for those who are accustomed to short and refreshing novels.

It's really great. The author's writing style is really good, and he has written something of his own. It has an epic feel.

First of all, let me say that this book is very suitable to my taste. I like it very much, but it is a bit strange why Fu Ya had an accident every time he participated in the war in the early stage (it may also be my own problem). This will not happen in the subsequent updates. Finally, I hope the author will work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง, I am optimistic about you (´-ω-`)

The description of Fu Ya's character in the early stage is too thin. Even if you look carefully, you can only "roughly" understand that she is a kind and tough girl who respects her sister, master and other elders, and is determined to wipe out all the evil things in the world. It would be better if there were more inner portrayals of the protagonist. The description of the group portrait drama is very good. The foreshadowing in the mid-term was recycled and the story line was well controlled. The overall rhythm did not collapse. The description of the group portrait is a victory. As a refreshing article, overall it was quite enjoyable to read 😄

To be honest, I feel that the pace is a bit slow. The story of Fu Ya's growth is too long. I would prefer to watch Fu Ya's interaction with the train crew, or post with Fu Xuan. I would prefer to call this novel Fu Ya Zhuan [sneaky laugh]