[1v1, devoted male lead, coming-of-age, face-slapping, comeback]
A college girl with a limitless future suddenly becomes a mom?!
A pure, innocent girl turns dark and becomes a vicious supporting female character? What do you mean, turns dark? Our girl has just grown up and deserves better.
A mischievous kid steals chickens and dogs as a child, then grows up to be a bandit who burns, kills, and loots? What do you mean, bandit? Our kid just didn’t have a proper childhood. A few extra beatings will fix that.
A high-IQ criminal steals state secrets single-handedly, bringing down the whole country? What do you mean, high-IQ? Our kid is just a little too clever for their own good.
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Hmm?
Why are the innocent girl’s uncle, the bandit’s superior, and the criminal’s friend all looking at me so ardently? Never mind. I’d better focus on raising the kids first.
First-person, pain-free motherhood! You can’t lose!
I have only read about 20 chapters now and I feel that the writing is very rushed. It has the feeling of being in a hurry. In many places, the scene jumps inexplicably and the dialogue suddenly becomes mindless. In fact, the writing is good, but it does not feel very coherent. It feels like it is pieced together. It is unfolded from the perspective and psychological aspects of the heroine. It is too compact and feels weird. I think the author can relax it appropriately and write some aspects more delicately.
Good-looking ❤️ ❤️ ❤️