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How should I put it? Overall, it's okay, and the author's writing is above the level. But there are a few small suggestions. 1. The focus of fast-travel novels is definitely on the heroine, but at least in the first story, I feel that the author spent a little more on the supporting characters, which actually makes the whole story too broad. Some readers will feel that it is obviously a fast-travel novel, but why it is a bit lengthy. I hope the author will pay attention to this in the following stories. 2. The author should first write the framework of the entire story and then fill it in bit by bit. So there are some places that make people feel less good when viewed from the front. This kind of embedded writing method is unless you publish the entire story at once so that people can see the content behind it. Otherwise, if you publish this chapter by chapter, it will actually be easier to lose readers. Overall, I would give at least the first story a pass. The settings and everything have already been released, so it's still okay. Maintaining the current standard, it should be considered a good novel. I'll read it again when the second story is finished, and I'll add my comments when the time comes! The second story will be much more mature than the first. The third one is getting better and better. It seems that the whole story has better coherence and readability, and the overall quality has jumped up a lot. I like the fourth story I'm writing now the most. It's really interesting and beautiful. It's almost the end now. The author has laid a lot of groundwork, so I don't know if it can end powerfully.

After reading it in one sitting, I can feel the growth of the heroine. Come on! It's a bit like infinite space + quick travel. There is obsession, conflict, feelings, career, romance, and fantasy. Like! Want to see it! Don't give up! Come on!

The author is really nb, super interesting. As for the book review, it said that there were problems with the first world, so I skipped it directly. The following is the fairy tale. Every world is very exciting. My mind really keeps spinning. The characters in it are basically very charming, and the author's writing is really good. The heroine has a little bit of luck, and she has a sixth sense. Everything else depends on the heroine's own efforts. In many worlds, there is a narrow escape from death, and nothing is easy. In fact, what impressed me most was the world of rules. It was the first time I saw the world of rules from the perspective of a passerby. It was very exciting. My brain was running crazy thinking about the rules. I recommend watching it. Although I didn't watch the first world, the rest is very exciting. [Top post][top post][top post]

Good looking, recommended The setting of the time-travel system is relatively novel. I like the plot of the mission station. It has interests and intrigues. It is not a silly and sweet system with pure plug-ins that have no intention of doing anything. The writing is very good, the plot is rigorous and logical, and the heroine's gold finger is not very open, there will be restrictions. If you like this type, it is not interesting to be a full-level boss, so the heroine is cut into a blank slate from time to time, and it all depends on the brain to go through the copy. It can highlight the heroine's own charm and ability. This is the real cool writing. I hope the author will continue to maintain this style of writing.

This is actually fairly detailed in a fast-travel novel. Nothing too short or too rushed, not too long or too drawn out. The only shortcoming is that the heroine's character is sometimes weird (but the author also explains it) and the story is not very amazing, but the readability is okay. [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] However, the writing of the story of Passerby A was not smooth and a bit inexplicable ([Thinking] The author said it was because the heroine was Passerby A and could not come into contact with the protagonist group, but I think everyone is an individual and the protagonist of their own life, so there is no need to write like this. You can just write it as usual.) The stories really feel well written, there are no major flaws, and of course there are not too many highlights. [Love][Love][Love] Advantages: The details are appropriate and the story is written in a specific way. The heroine's growth rate is slow and there is no brainless golden finger. [Sad][Sad][Sad] Disadvantages: Some small worlds are averagely written, and the stories are also average. They are not too exciting (and have no crotch) and are very dull.

The plot has no ups and downs, and there is no foreshadowing. The heroine is not strong either. The growth line is very gentle. Goldfinger is not big. There is no sad plot. There is no bitterness or hatred. The plot of each story is very gentle. Basically, it is a passerby character. There is no main line and branch line, and then the heroine dies. The mission is over [face covering]. I think what attracts me to read is the heroine herself, her personality and charm, which I find interesting. This is something that other novels do not have. Many novels can't even portray the heroine well.

It's so beautiful. I don't know how it will develop in the future, but now every article is very interesting. Originally, if someone else wrote this kind of thing, it would definitely be boring. For example, the mission bureau and so on. As a result, I felt that after the author wrote it, I felt like the heroine wanted to read it wherever she went. There are also things like NPCs. A lot of imaginative stuff. But when other authors write, they usually copy the original sentences and then talk nonsense. Not only is it mind-numbing, it's also illogical. Then the author wrote it. It feels like my brain is moving. I can't find any fault at the moment. I wholeheartedly gave it 5 stars. [Sending a heart] [Blowing a kiss] is also a type of cool writing. Listening to this novel, I feel that I am much more motivated in doing homework. There are just so few updates. Although the concentration is the essence. But there is only one article per day. [Covering face][Crying] I really look forward to the author's novels every day.

Wow! The final setting of Qingyun Xianjun's world line of karma and karma is very good. I like this kind of ending where good is rewarded with good and evil is rewarded with evil. The biggest golden finger of the heroine's baby is mainly because it has a super strong sixth sense to seek good luck and avoid evil. I would like to call it the author's mother's reminder hahahahaha However, our heroine is not the kind of greedy person. The communication with Tiandao in the mission world has been good and bad. It has happened several times. The feeling of Tianda dropping a reward and then the heroine starts to work hahaha is also quite interesting. It seems that only the first small world has a cp (which is quite easy to beat) and then there are no cp settings. Our heroine is very determined in her heart to follow the path. It is not a fast-paced game. The setting and storyline are detailed in detail. Most of the extra chapters are explained directly in one or two chapters. The after-sales service is quite good. U1s1, our big enemy, the super thug Sang Qingyu, really doesn't do a little after-sales service directly? Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Although not a good person, he is really funny, especially the heroine who is still trying to block her out after being tricked. Hahahahahahahahaha

The author admits her shortcomings at the end of the article, which is very good in my opinion. She corrects her mistakes when she recognizes her mistakes. She is very progressive and comprehensive. The overall look and feel of the article is not very good due to some of the author's writing style. However, the plot is relatively novel, so it will not be boring after reading it, and the plot is not boring, except for the characters. In addition to the instability causing the plot to be good and bad, some small worlds are still very interesting to watch, such as the rules world, the world where the heroine is the queen, and the ranking competition. It is more interesting to watch, but it ends a bit quickly. The ending is gone after the heroine finds the boss and adjusts the time and space situation. This ending is not within the range of my expectations.

I quite like it. Although the first world is a bit poisonous, the subsequent ones are better written than the previous ones. They are not aggressive or chasing and killing. The heroine is very good at weighing the pros and cons and is very generous. She may hate or be dissatisfied, but she can let it go before the big picture. There is opposition, cooperation and position transformation in the plot. Everything is not black and white. I like it very much. I give it a five-star praise [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

It's very beautiful. I read popular comments saying that the first world was toxic, so I watched it with a careful attitude, and it turned out that there was no problem at all. After reading the comments, I found that some readers didn't like the protagonist getting married in the dungeon, but I didn't have any objections. It may take a hundred years to travel slowly, but it's good to have someone to accompany you. And later the heroine got a pet companion, and the cp became even less. And as you watch, you will find that the originally weak heroine followed the way of heaven, and later fought against some evil ways of heaven. A great way to grow!

I happen to like watching slow time travel, and the pace of this article is okay in my opinion. Except for the character of the heroine in the first world, which collapsed so much before and after the exile that I felt like I had changed into a different person. However, it got better and better after that. It is obvious that the author's writing skills are constantly improving, and the logic and character creation are gradually improving! As of the second world, I give it 9 points. According to the author's current improvement in writing skills, maybe there will be a surprise for me that exceeds 10 points later [exploration] It is easy to attract fans by collecting and hoarding growth routes in various worlds.

The plot is exciting and the subject matter is novel. It can be seen that the heroine is growing step by step, and the author's control of the plot and writing is getting better and better. No one is born to strategize and win thousands of miles away. The heroine was weak at the beginning, experienced several traps, and gradually became stronger. Especially since the Punishment incident, the plot of each world is very exciting. Especially in today's world, I still didn't understand it at first. Later, the plot gradually got on track, and the charm of the wonderful characters in the plot began to emerge.

It took me a while to read this book. Before looking at it, I read the reviews and they said that the front is lightning-proof and the back is good. I listened to the advice and started reading directly from the second story, so I didn't know much about the first story. The story behind it is pretty good. The heroine follows the main line, but then she doesn't completely follow the main line. The main stories of the heroine's time travel are very conventional silly and sweet stories, but the heroine has taken a different path in these brainless and cool stories, which makes people can't help but wonder where she will go, what she will gain, and what she will lose. The heroine gradually grows up, has a brain and is decisive. She is not a virgin, nor is she dark, and the text is positive. Each story in it is a short story under an outline. It has more main-line connection logic than many fast-traveling articles, so it will be more attractive. A quick travel article worth reading.

The heroine's golden finger is quite big! The storyline is pretty good! It feels like it's unfinished, and the heroine has just reached the golden elixir stage and it's already finished! It belongs to the heroine upgrade stream, there is no emotional drama! Some stories have CPs, and CPs are also soy sauce!

Why did the rating of such a beautiful book drop? ! It was still 9 or so before! I like the heroine of this book very much, she is a growth-oriented heroine! There are some units that you don't like very much, just skip them. The female leads in most units are very good! Hard-working, independent, not brainless, and kind (but not a holy mother, with sharp kindness), anyway, the heroine is still good! Recommended by old bookworms, good [like][like][like] Author, please update [send heart][send heart][send heart] It's beautiful, I didn't expect it to be finished! Looking forward to the author's new work! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's good-looking, the heroine is very sober, but there is no cp. The heroine is always doing tasks. I like to watch the ones doing tasks. It's good. But I like to read cp books. Ambiguous and sweet pet stories. I've read this book in several worlds, and it's still very good.

The writing is very good, not only the heroine, but also the other supporting characters are well written. The layout is spread out and makes people feel like a fuller world. I like it very much. Come on, author [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]

This book is one of the better ones in the fast-travel genre that I have read so far. The writing is delicate and the plot is complete. It feels like each world can be published separately. Moreover, the main plot is very novel and exciting, but you have to be patient when watching it. It is highly recommended!

Not bad! The author uses "mission stations" to connect the travels of all small worlds, and the heroine serves as the taskmaster to complete the task of heavenly consciousness! Each small world has about 100 chapters, the plot is very complete, and the rich content is very user-friendly! I quickly skipped over the small world that I didn't like very much, and it didn't affect the subsequent reading experience. I like to follow the same protagonist to experience different small worlds. The heroine's personality is unified, so I don't need to spend time getting used to it! But it's really hard to find good-looking fast-travel and slow-travel stories! The world view of this novel is large, complete and self-consistent! So I really recommend it! !

The writing is very good, although everyone said that in the first world, the heroine felt a bit like a virgin, and the holes were filled in later. It is normal for the heroine to be affected by the influence of heaven without noticing it when she just started the mission. Later, she can also detect the influence and control of heaven, which is very reasonable. This is also growth. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. I haven't seen such a long and logical article in a long time. Nowadays, the articles on Tomato are basically one sentence and one paragraph. It seems very long, but actually it doesn't contain much. I had to read some passages written by the author twice, haha. The content is very rich, just like that rules world, ordinary novels have a lot of content if they only have a school. The author also came up with many other rules. It vividly shows the life of the aboriginal people in the world of rules. They do not serve humanity. The people inside also have their own pursuits and ideas. At first, I didn't understand why the protagonist, as an NPC, had to work part-time, but later I understood that the rules world is just a copy for us. For the NPC, it is true that she lives and survives in a world where she needs to eat, drink, and have sex. It is very different from the rule world I have been exposed to before. Nice! There are just a lot of holes filled but not buried. However, after writing about the heroine's situation, there is already a lot of content, and there will probably be more to fill in. I hope you will keep writing [Like][Like][Like]

I started reading it from The Second World 🌹🌹🌹. It's really a fairy tale. For such a long novel, I actually read the last chapter from The Second World. After reading it, I felt that I still have more to learn. The wife is so beautiful and the heroine's character is very stubborn. 💞 💞💞She can seize opportunities when they come. She is a growth-oriented heroine with three correct views. She is rational and clear in doing tasks. The plot is ups and downs. She likes the world with strange rules and the world of beast control the most. The heroine's little fox second love loves water and fantasy.

It's pretty cool. It's like a rookie who just joined the job. He worked overtime as a small employee and was cut off at every turn. Quick travel didn't even have a system [laughing and crying]. There were pitfalls everywhere. In the end, he rescued the chairman and his life became easier.

A good book deserves a long review! I stayed up all night for two days and read it all in one sitting! The whole text has a strong sense of logic, except for the heroine's ideological flaws in the first world (it makes people feel very disturbing, but it does make me remember the heroine to a certain extent, and the glass heart can skip the first world). After all, the heroine is also the first time to fast travel, and the setting is also a growth flow. The heroine handles it better later. Most of the other worlds are well written~ But what impressed me most about this book was not the growth of the heroine, but the description of the workplace! Unlike other articles that are just for fun, I always feel like I'm overthinking it after reading it. The description of the fast-traveling workplace can be described as very realistic! I was stunned as soon as I opened the chapter! Anyway, I think I have some experience in the workplace. My heroine baby is always on the road to being tricked by the way of heaven, time travel points or other characters. Even when reading later, the heroine is not always happy, and is also controlled by her own greed. (But don't worry, the heroine must have solved it! Anyway, the heroine is set as an ordinary person, greedy and lustful, but there is still an untouchable bottom line in life, but she will slowly grow in dealing with things, and she will not be particularly cruel). The resources of each world are largely based on cause and effect, so don't read any selfish suggestions in this regard! The heroine's golden finger is also very small at the beginning, and it is not said how powerful it is later. I think the heroine's biggest golden finger is the intuition of small animals. The sixth sense is relatively strong, but it's not so strong that it can predict all crises. Otherwise, how would I write it? Generally speaking, this book written by the author feels like sour radish duck soup with rice. The stew is very delicious! ! ! Unlike delicacies or big fish and meat that will make you feel tired after eating them, and unlike snacks that you won't be able to eat until you're full, the sourness of the sour radish and old duck soup (the heroine's growing heartache, etc.) Creates a strong appetite when paired with the sweet rice. You can't help but take one bite after another. Anyway, I couldn't resist and read it in one sitting in two days. Anyway, the status of this book in my heart is above 9 points! It's worth brushing twice, three times, four times, five times. I don't understand why the rating is not above 9 points? It's unreasonable! Anyway, I will occasionally recall this delicious sour radish and duck soup later on. As for the ending, I think it's a bit bland. Why didn't you write about the heroine returning home? Do you have to think about it with my poor imagination? Woo woo woo, please don't watch enough extras! I feel like there are only 9 small worlds, which is not enough to see~ It's so big~

The author does not blindly write about the heroine, nor does he blindly write about the family background. The protagonist's wisdom, character, and character are all clearly portrayed. The writing style is also very smooth, not stiff, and you can understand the author's meaning. It looks good. If you like it, please update it.

Overall it's pretty good. I quite like the heroine's character. She's decisive and decisive in doing things without being afraid of anything. I skipped a few worlds that I didn't like, but I felt that the other worlds were pretty good. Regardless of the characters in the book, the characters were basically quite fleshed out. Although the female protagonist has had several relationships in several of the small worlds, it is very good that the male protagonist has not been rewritten. Five-star praise, the author, please give it a try!

Not bad, not bad. The plot is relatively novel, the characters are well-drawn, and the world is not simply black and white. [Laughing] Sometimes you think a person is a good person no matter where you look at it. It may not be because he is really a good person, but because he has not encountered an opportunity for him to do evil. Even if a really good person has pity on people in trouble and is not stingy in helping those suffering within his sight, but when the people he helps climb higher than him and need him to look up to, will he... Really be happy to see such a situation?

I don't understand why the rating is so low. It's obviously very well written, especially the era world, the beast-controlling world, and the current rule-based world. These three worlds are very good. The setting of being kidnapped and participating in the Space-Time Bureau is also great.

It's very interesting. This kind of slow-traveling makes each story feel more complete. I like this. I watched it thoroughly and interestingly. I didn't skip chapters at all. I didn't feel like I had read enough when I saw the latest chapter.

I've finished reading it, it's super good [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]. I will read it again in the future, so I will open another quick-travel novel of this type. [Send my heart], it's not enough [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]