[Slow Transmigration] The More I Set Traps, the More I Get Used to It

How should I put it? Overall, it's okay, and the author's writing is above the level. But there are a few small suggestions. 1. The focus of fast-travel novels is definitely on the heroine, but at least in the first story, I feel that the author spent a little more on the supporting characters, which actually makes the whole story too broad. Some readers will feel that it is obviously a fast-travel novel, but why it is a bit lengthy. I hope the author will pay attention to this in the following stories. 2. The author should first write the framework of the entire story and then fill it in bit by bit. So there are some places that make people feel less good when viewed from the front. This kind of embedded writing method is unless you publish the entire story at once so that people can see the content behind it. Otherwise, if you publish this chapter by chapter, it will actually be easier to lose readers. Overall, I would give at least the first story a pass. The settings and everything have already been released, so it's still okay. Maintaining the current standard, it should be considered a good novel. I'll read it again when the second story is finished, and I'll add my comments when the time comes! The second story will be much more mature than the first. The third one is getting better and better. It seems that the whole story has better coherence and readability, and the overall quality has jumped up a lot. I like the fourth story I'm writing now the most. It's really interesting and beautiful. It's almost the end now. The author has laid a lot of groundwork, so I don't know if it can end powerfully.

After reading it in one sitting, I can feel the growth of the heroine. Come on! It's a bit like infinite space + quick travel. There is obsession, conflict, feelings, career, romance, and fantasy. Like! Want to see it! Don't give up! Come on!

The author is really nb, super interesting. As for the book review, it said that there were problems with the first world, so I skipped it directly. The following is the fairy tale. Every world is very exciting. My mind really keeps spinning. The characters in it are basically very charming, and the author's writing is really good. The heroine has a little bit of luck, and she has a sixth sense. Everything else depends on the heroine's own efforts. In many worlds, there is a narrow escape from death, and nothing is easy. In fact, what impressed me most was the world of rules. It was the first time I saw the world of rules from the perspective of a passerby. It was very exciting. My brain was running crazy thinking about the rules. I recommend watching it. Although I didn't watch the first world, the rest is very exciting. [Top post][top post][top post]

Good looking, recommended The setting of the time-travel system is relatively novel. I like the plot of the mission station. It has interests and intrigues. It is not a silly and sweet system with pure plug-ins that have no intention of doing anything. The writing is very good, the plot is rigorous and logical, and the heroine's gold finger is not very open, there will be restrictions. If you like this type, it is not interesting to be a full-level boss, so the heroine is cut into a blank slate from time to time, and it all depends on the brain to go through the copy. It can highlight the heroine's own charm and ability. This is the real cool writing. I hope the author will continue to maintain this style of writing.

This is actually fairly detailed in a fast-travel novel. Nothing too short or too rushed, not too long or too drawn out. The only shortcoming is that the heroine's character is sometimes weird (but the author also explains it) and the story is not very amazing, but the readability is okay. [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] However, the writing of the story of Passerby A was not smooth and a bit inexplicable ([Thinking] The author said it was because the heroine was Passerby A and could not come into contact with the protagonist group, but I think everyone is an individual and the protagonist of their own life, so there is no need to write like this. You can just write it as usual.) The stories really feel well written, there are no major flaws, and of course there are not too many highlights. [Love][Love][Love] Advantages: The details are appropriate and the story is written in a specific way. The heroine's growth rate is slow and there is no brainless golden finger. [Sad][Sad][Sad] Disadvantages: Some small worlds are averagely written, and the stories are also average. They are not too exciting (and have no crotch) and are very dull.

The plot has no ups and downs, and there is no foreshadowing. The heroine is not strong either. The growth line is very gentle. Goldfinger is not big. There is no sad plot. There is no bitterness or hatred. The plot of each story is very gentle. Basically, it is a passerby character. There is no main line and branch line, and then the heroine dies. The mission is over [face covering]. I think what attracts me to read is the heroine herself, her personality and charm, which I find interesting. This is something that other novels do not have. Many novels can't even portray the heroine well.

Wow! The final setting of Qingyun Xianjun's world line of karma and karma is very good. I like this kind of ending where good is rewarded with good and evil is rewarded with evil. The biggest golden finger of the heroine's baby is mainly because it has a super strong sixth sense to seek good luck and avoid evil. I would like to call it the author's mother's reminder hahahahaha However, our heroine is not the kind of greedy person. The communication with Tiandao in the mission world has been good and bad. It has happened several times. The feeling of Tianda dropping a reward and then the heroine starts to work hahaha is also quite interesting. It seems that only the first small world has a cp (which is quite easy to beat) and then there are no cp settings. Our heroine is very determined in her heart to follow the path. It is not a fast-paced game. The setting and storyline are detailed in detail. Most of the extra chapters are explained directly in one or two chapters. The after-sales service is quite good. U1s1, our big enemy, the super thug Sang Qingyu, really doesn't do a little after-sales service directly? Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Although not a good person, he is really funny, especially the heroine who is still trying to block her out after being tricked. Hahahahahahahahaha

The author admits her shortcomings at the end of the article, which is very good in my opinion. She corrects her mistakes when she recognizes her mistakes. She is very progressive and comprehensive. The overall look and feel of the article is not very good due to some of the author's writing style. However, the plot is relatively novel, so it will not be boring after reading it, and the plot is not boring, except for the characters. In addition to the instability causing the plot to be good and bad, some small worlds are still very interesting to watch, such as the rules world, the world where the heroine is the queen, and the ranking competition. It is more interesting to watch, but it ends a bit quickly. The ending is gone after the heroine finds the boss and adjusts the time and space situation. This ending is not within the range of my expectations.

It's so beautiful. I don't know how it will develop in the future, but now every article is very interesting. Originally, if someone else wrote this kind of thing, it would definitely be boring. For example, the mission bureau and so on. As a result, I felt that after the author wrote it, I felt like the heroine wanted to read it wherever she went. There are also things like NPCs. A lot of imaginative stuff. But when other authors write, they usually copy the original sentences and then talk nonsense. Not only is it mind-numbing, it's also illogical. Then the author wrote it. It feels like my brain is moving. I can't find any fault at the moment. I wholeheartedly gave it 5 stars. [Sending a heart] [Blowing a kiss] is also a type of cool writing. Listening to this novel, I feel that I am much more motivated in doing homework. There are just so few updates. Although the concentration is the essence. But there is only one article per day. [Covering face][Crying] I really look forward to the author's novels every day.

It's very beautiful. I read popular comments saying that the first world was toxic, so I watched it with a careful attitude, and it turned out that there was no problem at all. After reading the comments, I found that some readers didn't like the protagonist getting married in the dungeon, but I didn't have any objections. It may take a hundred years to travel slowly, but it's good to have someone to accompany you. And later the heroine got a pet companion, and the cp became even less. And as you watch, you will find that the originally weak heroine followed the way of heaven, and later fought against some evil ways of heaven. A great way to grow!