Naruto: Starting with the Rinnegan, I Launch the Fourth Great Ninja War

It's rubbish. You have the Rinnegan, but you're still afraid of Shisui's Mangekyo, and you don't even know how to use the drawn skills. Go watch Naruto and then write about it

The B-B author whose eyes are afraid of other gods after reincarnation

It's written like The Return of the Soldier King, the same rubbish. Watch Naruto before writing again.

As a writer who watches the excitement, I need to carefully study the script description and character setting.

The protagonist is too rubbish

Comment out of boredom

If you have divine power, you are afraid of other gods.

What can't be seen?

Timeline is messed up

After reading the beginning, I felt that the protagonist was a bit distracted and ran to find Orochimaru. What is the future of working with Orochimaru? It can't be the discovery of ninja technology.