Naruto: From the Start with the Rinnegan, I Launch the Shinobi World War

There are many typos, the plot is boring, and it's not interesting to watch. The author should read Naruto first before continuing to write. The Rinnegan is afraid of other gods. Besides, there is Kamui. What are you afraid of? The moment you see the kaleidoscope, you can use Kamui to hide in the space.

It's rubbish. You have the Rinnegan, but you're still afraid of Shisui's Mangekyo, and you don't even know how to use the drawn skills. Go watch Naruto and then write about it

The B-B author whose eyes are afraid of other gods after reincarnation

Goldfinger is good, but some settings are hard to like

It's written like The Return of the Soldier King, the same rubbish. Watch Naruto before writing again.

After reading Chapter 25, it's not interesting to read the rest.

Give it two stars. After all, the author has never watched Naruto.

As a writer who watches the excitement, I need to carefully study the script description and character setting.

The protagonist is too rubbish

I can't bear to see that the Samsara Eye is so rubbish and I'm afraid of a kaleidoscope