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The highest possible rating is four stars. The main reason is that the ending didn't feel like a cool novel. It made me feel like I was watching Fortress Under Siege. I came here to read a cool novel, but I really couldn't bear the ending. I suggested that the author make a side story to describe the daily life of the male and female protagonists after they return to reality, otherwise it would be really difficult to get over it.

Yes, but author, how can you sleep twice a day? [Aggrieved]

There are thousands of flowers in bloom, each with its own love. After reading the whole book, the front part is pretty good, but the back part is a little weird. Overall, it's a good time-travel harem novel. [Cover face][think][think]

The author's writing is very good. Can the author continue to update? The ending of more than 100 chapters is a bit uncomfortable. I have already thought out the rest of the plot for you. After reaching the peak of another world, you will come to reality and rush to the peak of life. Then there will be a spiritual recovery, and then you will work hard to practice and fly to the fairy world, and then to the god world.

Although there are some reservations about the plot development, such as the male protagonist's views on marriage and love, and the writing style and rhythm are at the level of mainstream mindless novels, the most rare thing is that the article describes social status, wealth, and the many changes in people's hearts very well. At first glance, it seems weird, but after thinking about it later, I feel that the description is very reasonable. I must have experienced the ups and downs of society to be able to portray the complex and multi-faceted human nature of the protagonists in the article in such detail, so it is worth reading. Finally, I personally hope that as time goes by, the author's new book will be able to have a more mature and reasonable rhythm in plot layout and write his own writing style while retaining a sharp sense of human nature and society.

It looks good, it's so funny, and the content is pretty good, but the number of words is a bit short at the moment.

To be honest, the author shocked me in the last few chapters, and his imagination is also intoxicating [Like] [Cool]

[Facepalm] I don't know why I felt disappointed after watching it, but in the end I liked the protagonist and Lin Yiyi better.

The ideas are novel, the plot is interesting, and the writing is novice. It is defined as a refreshing article, and it has a 4-star rating.

When I read novels, I don't look at the writing, but whether the story is well told and not overly sensational. So I gave this novel 5 points, which is considered encouraging, but it does not have any bad points. To me, it is a very good novel. Although it is a bit short, the content is okay. I am looking forward to the author's second novel.

If you like daily life and love, you can follow it. The viewing experience is very good [like]

Big cheers for the author

I think it's pretty good-looking.

It's well written, but it develops too quickly and only has about a hundred chapters.

It's interesting. I hope the author can support me.

The ending you wrote is very good, but there is no follow-up, which is a pity.

The author should change the ending a lot [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] Please give me a sweet ending [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

Emmm, how should I put it, this is the first one I've read carefully and I think it's okay

It's so well written. I still want to read it. Why did it end?

The plot is okay. The plot is described and the characters are written with flesh and blood and emotions. Finally recognize the reality. That's the end. How unworthy it is. [Grievance] [grievance] [grievance]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Reinstalled but unchanged.

How exciting it is at the beginning, how miserable it ends

The writing is very good, I hope the author will continue to work hard

It's still very good, give it five stars.

Not bad, not bad, a wisp of warmth in the vast starry sky

It does feel pretty good, and the ending episode is also pretty good.

The top cool article agrees very much

Very well written! I like!

Wonderful and unparalleled Brilliant, Brilliant, Brilliant