Awakening the Detective Sequence, I Build the Ghost-Suppression Bureau!

After reading it, I personally feel that the whole article is confusing. If you want to popularize science, it's better to popularize science. Anyway, after I read it, you did some popular science and then something happened later, especially at the beginning where you pretended to be mysterious and said that joining would improve efficiency. Then I saw that the protagonist wanted to be a policeman, and I didn't know anything else. See, something has to happen. I saw the police were busy here and there. The protagonist was still working on his magic potion. He was pretending every time. On the other hand, the supporting characters were doing real things. Couldn't the author introduce them all at once or in several times? Why didn't they pretend every time they wanted to go further?

The imagination is okay, but the angle of the protagonist is not suitable for me. Most of them are supporting characters until the death of Han Min (I can only read this to write a review.) 😅 It feels to me that the protagonist is unreal, and there is not much three-dimensional description of the protagonist. The protagonist is described as a mysterious and supporting character with a God's perspective. I would understand if it were written like this later. But there is no three-dimensional sense of the protagonist, and it feels like a castle in the air. (Personal feelings, if you don't accept it, don't comment, it's all my fault, I apologize in advance, sorry, just treat my comment as just air!)

The plot is so tense, it's all about personal heroism! Villains all know that many people form organizations on the Internet! The protagonist, as a policeman, has always been fighting alone!

The setting is interesting and the sequences eat each other up. Some commentators say that the country has not been able to function as well as an individual for so long. This is entirely due to the protagonist's personal show. Are you sure you're not here to make fun of me? No matter how much the state agencies say, most of them are ordinary people. There is an original text in the book: "It is easier for serializers to meet serializers, and it is easier for ordinary people to meet ordinary people." Is it incomprehensible that state agencies cannot have access to them? Also, the sequence of the protagonist's awakening is biased towards the so-called sequence gene of the "prophet" who is omniscient and omnipotent. I think this can completely cover up the personal show. After all, the setting is full of monsters and humans, so there is no way to survive. Some people say the setting is a bit confusing, and that's how I felt after watching it. There are two conventional ways of writing this kind of book Writing method one: Publish a book about Cthulhu based on the unknown sequence. For this kind of writing, it is obvious that the portrayal of other ordinary people is a bit heavy Writing method two: The theme is similar to that of God-killing, but with a bit of blood factor added. Kill monsters and get promoted. Then this book lacks a second approach. (Although the mutation of mythical beasts and the mutation of other species can barely be considered two ways, it is still too far-fetched) I'll take a bold guess at the author's thoughts I want to create a book like "Ya She", where the protagonist is omniscient and omnipotent to a certain extent. But there are also people around the boss of Ya She. To change Cthulhu, you need a group of people. Nothing is more reliable than the official. This is the author's first thought. As a reader, I would like to give you some suggestions. You can reduce some so-called "emotional dramas". Ordinary People has too much space and you won't be able to get the feeling you want. Of course, if you plan to write a million-word novel, pretend I didn't say it. The follow-up to this kind of development is quite promising. The start looks a bit messy. I reserve my opinion and give it four stars.

The protagonist is too pretentious. If you want to cooperate with the official, you should cooperate well. Don't always put on a bad face and always half-talk when talking to others. The plot looks very inconsistent.

My IQ was severely impacted.

To be honest, the writing was a bit too slow. I know it's laying the groundwork for the world view, but there are already twenty or thirty pictures, and there's no progress at all. It's hard to make people want to watch it.

This Lin Yue is a little too annoying. Is she a forensic doctor or a eldest lady? She is still waiting for her. That's to catch the murderer, okay? Besides, she talks a bit too much. Can the author let her get a lunch box? 😂😂😂 Except for this Lin Yue, others are still very good.

If you write it quickly, it won't be enough.

Nice! Very interesting