Comprehensive Comic: Reincarnated into a Two-Dimensional World

Let me leave a comment first. It seems that the word count is enough, so the book is released. As the introduction said, I am updating as the situation arises, but because I have wanted to write a super grand comic story since I was a child, my idea for this book is that I am too lazy to write a million or two million words. To be honest, what I want to write is basically after the protagonist grows up, but if I don't write about it when I was a child, I feel that there will be a lot less emotional foundation, and I am still the first This is my first time writing a novel. There are a lot of things that I didn't take into consideration at the beginning, so I'm going to take my time and grow. But whether it's good or not, at least I don't want to be a eunuch. I must finish writing the story I long for. Wish me good luck. [Hold] I hope you can read a few more chapters and give me your thoughts, because I really didn't read the first few chapters by myself, but now I'm too lazy to read it from the beginning. I'll wait until I finish the current story to stop and read it better.

Let's talk about the advantages first. 1. Many daily cast group portraits have a good atmosphere. 2. Everyone has their own characteristics (it can be seen that the author is really careful). I like it very much. It feels very comfortable, warm and joyful. 3. It can be seen that it is quite realistic. As for the shortcomings, I would say that the reason why it is not popular is that 1 is too bland. I am not going against the author's decision to write about daily life in the early stage, but the daily life in the comprehensive comic is not completely bland. It is much more attractive to have high-purity superpowers every day. Secondly, I think that these many, many characters perfectly help each character because of their original world view. 2. There are too many characters before the exciting plot begins (some people may think it is confusing), which will make the plot more difficult to develop (you need to write a long outline before you can live with it) Why do I write about the shortcomings for so long? I hope they can really be improved. This shortcoming cannot take away from the quality of the work. I hope the author will get better as he writes more🤗

Very good👍ahhhh

Author, are you considering adding more water balls here? Why are you still traveling after graduation after so long?

Very good book

Not bad, but the words are a bit short Has this guy been isolated by Tomato? His writing is pretty good. Why are there so few people reading it?

It's not bad. I only watch 60+ at the moment. Origami has a little bit of a problem. The sub-personality is okay, but Origami should be rebelling at that age.