Across the blue sea, I ride the waves to visit Spirit Isle, with cranes for companions and mist for a cloak.
I feast on jade dew and rosy clouds, a solitary figure standing in the cold autumn.
I would knock upon Heaven's Gate, beyond its myriad layers of cloud, with stars for bait and the moon for a hook.
Nine locks seal the mysterious pass, trapping a mayfly. I trace the clear current upstream, against the empty boat.
Thunder shatters the dark firmament, illuminating a century of confinement.
I fathom the true realm beyond life and death, ride upon a crane's back, and roam the heavens.
Suddenly, my body feels light as the stars wheel around. The full moon shines upon my homeward boat.
The writing is excellent, the description is really good, it is good at creating an atmosphere and has a strong sense of immersion.