
The End of the World: My Business Dominion Area
末世:我的商业统治区
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 129k Words
- Genre
- Modern Romance
- Subgenre
- Modern Romance High-Concept
- Audience
- Female
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
3Reads
89Chapters
2.8kReads · all time
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In booklists 4
The Heroine Opens a Shop, Hotel and Restaurant in the Apocalypse + No CP + System! ! !
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Please Ask the Heroine to Have a Shop and CP in the Apocalypse
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I Want to Read the Kind of Literature About Opening a Supermarket in the Apocalypse
The kind of story where the protagonist opens a shop in the apocalypse! With system! It's best if the system has a better relationship with the protagonist, because I prefer the plain and warm style of farm stories.
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Seeking the End of the World! Female Channel, the Heroine Opens a Supermarket Store in the Apocalypse!
It's best it's over!
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The writing is quite good, but some of her actions are a bit illogical. It seems like she is a new writer. For example, she is fighting fiercely, but others look at her with admiration. Then she restrains her fierce expression and asks gently what's wrong. Then she fights fiercely. The description of Qi is also weird, with a lot of typos. Every character in the book is written in the first person, which is very strange to read. The title of the book is very attractive. It would be better if these flaws are corrected. This is not based on my preferences, but based on normal readers' logic, so don't think that I have written down my favorite points.
Don't you know how to add punctuation marks to the dialogue? It's just commas and periods. It makes my brain hurt to read it. Moreover, the early tasks are inappropriate. The shop owner is just a helpless social beast. What can he use to fight level three zombies when he goes out? Even though he is invincible. Then he plotted a sneak attack but was slapped in the face and killed in the same old way.
Not bad, come on
It's okay, come on!
Looks good, keep up the good work
It's okay, the author keeps up the good work!
Not bad, keep up the good work. Author