Pokemon: Starting with Golden Magikarp

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It seems that the setting is pretty good. I prefer this kind of parallel world elf novel, so I'll save it and read it. Take a look at how long you have been watching. Come on, author, your ability to withstand stress must be maxed out 🤦

From a Pokémon perspective, this is a highly rated, high-quality book. The entire book mainly highlights that the original basic features of "Pokémon" have not been overly affected by the system. There are not many poisonous points in the whole book. It is an excellent Pokémon fanfic. If the subsequent plot can be written better, it should be able to reach a score of 9 or above. For a Pokémon fanfic, it is already a very good book, without the mythical beasts. There will be no fatigue that occurs when reading too many stories about mythical beasts, and it is not completely absent. It has a very reasonable and realistic description of the presence or absence of mythical beasts. This book is not obsessed with mythical beasts, and it can be used to kill time or read seriously.

A very good elf novel. There are no typos or sentences. The content is also very exciting. There are some hooks, but the abilities are very appropriate. The story progress is very good. It has been added to the bookshelf. It is worth reading. Please come on the author and update it soon.

Such a good book is rare in the world. The protagonist is interesting and the style is interesting. Great at the beginning, shit in the mid-term, and okay in the late-stage

After catching up with the latest, there are very few authors who are still persisting at this stage. Let's just talk about the advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that compared to other Pokémon types that I have seen, the author has chosen a lot of Pokémon from the 9th generation. At the same time, the Pokémon selection is also unique (I have not seen the baby bear start at the moment). I think the Pokémon selection does not necessarily have to be popularity and appearance. As long as it is reasonable and you like it, it is completely ok. (I just don't know if I can wait until the Bear Disciple evolves today 😂) The design of the protagonist Elf also has its own characteristics. It has buffs but is not mindless enhancement. There are traces for each Elf to follow in order to become stronger. Although there are too many girls in this article to completely depict the emotional line (at least for now), the focus of the protagonist is still on growing up with my partners. The harem is just an opportunity for me (funny). The villain setting is also very stable, with no obvious conflicts and brainless plots. I look forward to the follow-up setting of the big world view. The shortcomings may not be considered poisonous points and shortcomings in my opinion. Some plots and plots are relatively typical plots. I think of the ending as soon as I see the beginning, but it is understandable that they are not used as supplements to the plot. Furthermore, the Pokémon selection is not considered popular Pokémon (but my opinion has been stated, so it is not a problem). In summary, the Pokémon text is very comfortable for me to read. Except for some plots, the overall story is smooth and the setting is reasonable. Daily reminder (music)

Skill development and elf combat are more realistic than those written by other fans. I have read so many elf books, and this is one of the best ones I have read ❤️

It looks good, better than those outrageous cheats. In short, it's not a big deal 👍

Why do the more I read, the more I feel like I'm reading a fantasy novel? Collect 18 slates and slate collection disks, no matter how you look at it, you will feel like you are running on a fantasy road. Integrate 18 protagonists into alpaca spokespersons

Checking in at chapter 397, it took nearly 400 chapters to find Wind Speed ​​Dog. The team was around level 40, which was considered normal. First of all, the characters. The villain organization Polaris is too big. Generally speaking, a dozen kings of the Rockets or other organizations are considered very good. Polaris is even more invincible. It is a global organization. ABCDE also has the Big Dipper classification. There are many different strongholds in each letter, N layers. This time, I don't even dare to think about whether the A-level Big Dipper is the champion of all members. This range is too large, and it is basically impossible to remove them all in the later stage. Moreover, the villain is too strong, which means that it will be a big event in the later stage. I can imagine that the protagonist becomes the champion and travels around the world to stop the North Star conspiracy. The pitfall of the villain can be made smaller. Let's talk about the heroine, the introduction is multi-female, 400 chapters of the main character is focused on upgrading, no love, Tiansheng Taoyao is one, a lot of pen and ink shaping, Qingmei loses in a mess, Meng Ge doesn't feel like it, Meng Wan becomes a brother, and there is a Chen family, there is basically no emotional line, it is recommended to reshape it, Taoyao still has to be rescued many times in life and death crisis. The Bear Apprentice in the protagonist team has a high probability of evolving into One Strike Style, Circle Bear, and Heyue's form is really ugly. I feel like it can be set privately here. With the power of Cresselia, it can evolve to look better. The special attack is Gyarados, and the Ancient Jade Fish will be unlocked soon. It seems that Zeraora is about to join the team, and the protagonist's strength is about to skyrocket. Also, the author has buried too many pitfalls. Even the mythical beasts are missing. It feels like there is no way to fill it in. [Pause face] [Pause face] Just don't stop updating. In my opinion, except for the emotional line, everything else is okay. Please support it.