Become Invincible After Losing the Initial Sprite

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It seems that the setting is pretty good. I prefer this kind of parallel world elf novel, so I'll save it and read it. Take a look at how long you have been watching. Come on, author, your ability to withstand stress must be maxed out [face covering]

From a Pokémon perspective, this is a highly rated, high-quality book. The entire book mainly highlights that the original basic features of "Pokémon" have not been overly affected by the system. There are not many poisonous points in the whole book. It is an excellent Pokémon fanfic. If the subsequent plot can be written better, it should be able to reach a score of 9 or above. For a Pokémon fanfic, it is already a very good book, without the mythical beasts. There will be no fatigue that occurs when reading too many stories about mythical beasts, and it is not completely absent. It has a very reasonable and realistic description of the presence or absence of mythical beasts. This book is not obsessed with mythical beasts, and it can be used to kill time or read seriously.

A very good elf novel. There are no typos or sentences. The content is also very exciting. There are some hooks, but the abilities are very appropriate. The story progress is very good. It has been added to the bookshelf. It is worth reading. Please come on the author and update it soon.

Such a good book is rare in the world. The protagonist is interesting and the style is interesting. Great at the beginning, shit in the mid-term, and okay in the late-stage

After catching up to the latest, there are very few authors who are still persisting at this stage. Let's just talk about the advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that compared to other Pokémon types that I have seen, the author has chosen a lot of Pokémon from the 9th generation. At the same time, the Pokémon selection is also unique (I have not seen the baby bear starting at the moment). I think the Pokémon selection does not have to be based on popularity and appearance. As long as it is reasonable and you like it, it is completely ok. (I just don't know if I can wait until the Bear Disciple evolves today [laughing and crying]). The design of the protagonist elf also has its own characteristics. It has buffs but is not blindly strengthened. There are traces of the path for each elf to become stronger. Although there are too many girls in this article to completely depict the emotional line (at least for now), the focus of the protagonist is still on growing up with his partners. The harem is just an opportunity for me (funny). The villain setting is also very stable, with no obvious conflicts and brainless plots. I look forward to the follow-up world view setting. The shortcomings may not be considered bad points or shortcomings in my opinion. Some plots and plots are relatively typical plots. As soon as I see the beginning, I think of the ending, but it is understandable that they are not used as supplements to the plot. Furthermore, the Pokémon selection is not considered popular Pokémon (but my point of view has been stated, it is not a problem) In summary, it is a Pokémon story that I feel comfortable reading. Except for some of the plot, the overall story is smooth and the setting is reasonable. Daily reminder (music)

Skill development and elf combat are more realistic than those written by other fans. I have read so many elf books, and this is one of the best ones I have read [Love]

It looks good, better than those outrageous cheats. In short, it's not a big deal [Like]

Checking in at chapter 397, it took nearly 400 chapters to find Wind Speed ​​Dog. The team was around level 40, which was considered normal. First of all, the characters. The villain organization Polaris is too big. Generally speaking, a dozen kings of the Rockets or other organizations are considered very good. Polaris is even more invincible. It is a global organization. ABCDE also has the Big Dipper classification. There are many different strongholds in each letter, N layers. This time, I don't even dare to think about whether the A-level Big Dipper is the champion of all members. This range is too large, and it is basically impossible to remove them all in the later stage. Moreover, the villain is too strong, which means that it will be a big event in the later stage. I can imagine that the protagonist becomes the champion and travels around the world to stop the North Star conspiracy. The pitfall of the villain can be made smaller. Let's talk about the heroine, the introduction is multi-female, 400 chapters of the main character is focused on upgrading, no love, Tiansheng Taoyao is one, a lot of pen and ink shaping, Qingmei loses in a mess, Meng Ge doesn't feel like it, Meng Wan becomes a brother, and there is a Chen family, there is basically no emotional line, it is recommended to reshape it, Taoyao still has to be rescued many times in life and death crisis. The Bear Apprentice in the protagonist team has a high probability of evolving into One Strike Style, Circle Bear, and Heyue's form is really ugly. I feel like it can be set privately here. With the power of Cresselia, it can evolve to look better. The special attack is Gyarados, and the Ancient Jade Fish will be unlocked soon. It seems that Zeraora is about to join the team, and the protagonist's strength is about to skyrocket. Also, the author has buried too many pitfalls. Even the mythical beasts are missing. It feels like there is no way to fill it in. [Pause face] [Pause face] Just don't stop updating. In my opinion, except for the emotional line, everything else is okay. Please support it.

The writing is quite good, there are glitches but not too outrageous. There are no quasi-gods or beasts at the beginning, and the system's presence doesn't feel very strong. It seems quite comfortable.

The writing is great and beautiful. It's good without the heroine now. I feel like the character will be broken if there is a heroine. Just keep writing according to your own ideas. It's really comfortable to read. It's very beautiful. The protagonist is not obscene at all. It's not the kind of disgusting thing where you get into heat after seeing a good-looking girl. It's very beautiful.

The writing is quite good. Compared with other Pokémon, the biggest highlight is the girls in it. I always like to watch movies without female protagonists, but this one is okay. They basically just show their faces and won't interfere with anything. Did Meng Wan appear too much? Even if there is a female protagonist, I don't want her to be the female protagonist.

The book is worth reading, but the author doesn't write much about daily exercises, so sometimes the skills are learned and used very suddenly, but it doesn't affect the perception very much, just think of it as a surprise for readers. [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying] Ahhhhhh, it was so boring after going to Qinhuangdao. It was a bit too much to show off to others, and it was really weird to be insulted for no reason. [Cover face]

Let me rate it and evaluate it. To be honest, the writing is okay, just not good at all. Every time you think that his writing is good and you can read it, he will give you a mouthful of poison and make you feel uncomfortable after reading it. But after the poison has passed, the rest is okay again. Overall, Tomato is a good Pokémon article.

Good: development, elves, cheating looks okay, call the police when encountering a villain stronghold, and has brains Bad: I mock pig horns as an individual, like to take risks, the alliance is like a fool, villains have strongholds everywhere, and there are many sacrifices, look at the freshman 749 game:), national power, information is the absolute priority, fighting directly has more people and fewer people, the higher fights the lower, a stable country means more people and more high-level people, allowing the villains to walk around arrogantly is against the sky.

I really like the development of the storyline. The concept is very good, but the updates are too slow. I finished reading it in two days and it was not enough.

Pokémon Begins, the plot is quite good, Flay is invincible, it only started after more than 200 pictures, it feels like there are many girls

There are new types of Pokémon! [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] No poking or poking, the idea is pretty good, and you can see that it has an outline. The author, please give it a try! Write, write, write! [Punch out][Punch out] There are so many people watching, but no one comments? ? [Exploration][exploration] I have been following the latest chapter, and after reading it, I feel that it is very good in the Pokémon literature. The Pokémon is novel, the plot is also remarkable, and there are foreshadowings. I personally think it is very interesting! ! Here's a little suggestion: You can write more about the interactions and bonds with Pokémon! The Pokémon scenes in the recent chapters have been a bit sparse (?), Or else they have to be written about new Pokémon. Look at the great arrangements! ! Come on, go, go, go! ! [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript] @ who loves to eat panacea

The writing is very good [heartfelt]. The battle aspect and the bond between the elves before are also very good. There is no excessive Long Aotian, and the timing is reasonable. It is the best Pokémon novel I have read recently. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Don't be anxious. Thank you. The love line is not broken (it feels like it may be a harem, but I personally think that a single female protagonist is better. Too many female protagonists' love lines feel like they will steal the show from Pokémon [grievance]) This book should be stable at around 9.0. [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

It's a pretty good book, but I don't know why many people have objections. You can see a lot of clouds in the comment area of ​​the previous chapters, and there is also a master of beast control who thinks that his evolutionary route is the best. . The plot is very attractive, but the protagonist often almost dies (you really saved a life), but it is recommended not to do this kind of thing. It was like being stabbed suddenly while working for the Zhou family, it was quite uncomfortable. Other than that, it's just some details. In short, the more you write, the better. The pace is a bit too fast at the moment, with Zeraora bumping into fists the next. . I suggest you revise it and describe more details and focus on daily life.

It's really super good-looking. The author's description of elf battles is really unique. Whether it's a passer-by or the protagonist, he always has innovative ideas and development of skills. It's not limited to animation. The plot is also very smooth. This book brings out the full potential of the mythical beasts. The mythical beasts are mythical beasts, very strong. And I think his description of the stone slab is very good. I've taken it from other books. The slate is just a slate. Learn a corresponding attribute of Sanctioning Light, or it will greatly strengthen or immunize this attribute. However, in this book, the slate is of high rank and is not a bad thing. Everyone is qualified to touch it. The plot is also very innovative. The personalities of the elves in it are well described, vivid and beautiful. I hope the author will continue to write well.

Just a single female protagonist, a breath of fresh air in the Pokémon Tomato novel Nowadays, there are a lot of female sidekicks appearing. The writing is very good, but don't be a stallion. Be clear about the status. This is a Pokémon novel, not a stallion novel about another horse.

It's a good novel in the Pokémon parallel world. The plot is concise, and I was attracted by its beginning, because when it comes to the parallel world of Pokémon, I prefer natural and casual ones. The scene at the beginning made me think of the picture in my mind, and then I kept watching. His plot is not mind-numbing, unlike other novels that feature popular Pokémon, but this one has both unpopular and popular Pokémon as the protagonists. A very good Pokémon novel, highly recommended. There is a lot of nonsense, please forgive me!

Most Pokemon Tomato novels can't be read until they last past 10 chapters. This one is up to date. To be honest, some of the details are a bit uninteresting. But overall, it's one of the very few Pokémon novels that I can read in recent times.

Advantages: 1. Elves have personalities, and the chosen elf is not particularly popular. 2. Good combo skills 3. The protagonist is very naughty and lovable 4. The characters and events are logically smooth and have no flaws. 5. The writing is good and the story is smooth. Disadvantages: 1. It's too easy to learn elf skills, and hereditary (illegal) skills are considered a minor drawback. 2. There seems to be a trend towards harems. It's not that it can't be written, but the female supporting characters are all relatively average and not as interesting as the elves.

A book about elves that can be read, an academy-level cultivator wearing Pokémon skin. It's basically daily training - adventure/meeting troublemakers/competitions - encountering crises/forming conflicts/using your weakest skills to evenly match the enemy - running around with passion/laying grudges/showing the strongest pretense - daily training

Ultimate Invincible is super good-looking, but I hope the author can write more about the female protagonist [snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][ snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker]

From a Pokémon perspective, this is a highly rated, high-quality book. The entire book mainly highlights that the original basic features of "Pokémon" have not been overly affected by the system. There are not many poisonous points in the whole book. It is an excellent Pokémon fanfic. If the subsequent plot can be written better, it should be able to reach a score of 9 or above. For a Pokémon fanfic, it is already a very good book, without the mythical beasts. There will be no fatigue that occurs when reading too many stories about mythical beasts, and it is not completely absent. It has a very reasonable and realistic description of the presence or absence of mythical beasts. This book is not obsessed with mythical beasts, and it can be used to kill time or read seriously.

A very nice book about Pokémon food

The novel has won praise and love from many readers for its excellent writing, rich character creation, unique world view setting and profound emotional themes. They not only bring wonderful stories and rich reading experiences to readers, but also further expand the charm and influence of Pokémon, a classic IP.