[Detective Conan Fanfiction] [Multiple Female Leads]
[Will you keep jumping between the good and bad sides? Why not have the best of both worlds!]
Sera Senki transmigrated into a detective manga world, but it was a wildly altered version.
In a place called "Beika," countless underworld organizations had gathered.
Detectives, police inspectors, gangsters, and all kinds of secret organizations were mingling amicably and joining forces.
And he hadn't even read the original.
Still, Sera Senki wasn't worried, because he had obtained the "Free Trade" System and possessed a large stock of advanced technology.
To that end, he gathered all kinds of outstanding talent in Beika, each with a remarkable skill!
His company manager, Kurosawa, was diligent and hard-working.
His driver, Uotsuka, was mild-mannered, honest, and simple.
His secretary, Sharon... was a woman with a lot of talent!
Of course, he needed people on the legitimate side, but he couldn't neglect the underworld either.
That Amuro guy looked like trouble. Send him to smash up their joint!
That Morofushi guy seemed patient. Send him to train the hired muscle!
And that Akai guy looked like a real fighter. Put him on door duty!
Looking at the bunch of boisterous troublemakers before him, Sera Senki let out a triumphant cry:
My company is booming!
I like the protagonist's character very much, and there is a feeling of disregard for life, although in the eyes of the protagonist it may be just a game.
So cool! This is my feeling after reading the current updated article. The word "evil" is highlighted at will, without a lot of babysitting plots. Sometimes it is dark and sometimes red, but it is not the gray of the traditional Conan text, but the gray of the word "evil". It is novel and eye-catching, and the writing style is not bad, which makes this article readable, of course, some logic must be ignored! Overall good looking
The protagonist's gamer mentality is so crazy that it's fun to be straightforward. I am more worried that I will be blocked by "missions" later. Players have no inhibitions, but they will work hard when they see tasks. Another point is to argue with Conan's philosophy. This is really unnecessary. It seems pretentious to say it. Later, he took revenge on the employees, opened the shark ring, and was very "artistic". This is quite good. Since the player's digitized body will not leave any traces, it can't be used casually. In a world of order (?) Like Conan, it's quite satisfying to provoke a shark in front of the police, but it will cause more trouble.
Personally I think it's pretty good^ω^
If you put yourself in God's perspective, you would think that the male protagonist has incorrect views? But if you take the perspective of the male protagonist, you will find that he is just a poor person who was deceived by the system. He has traveled through time instead of being a good citizen with five stars. In terms of plot, it is not about being a babysitter all the time. It would even be more interesting if the protagonist rebels against the system later on, completes the system rewards for nothing, and finally resists the system. This way the protagonist will not appear out of place, because it is really not a game. The system can also be set up as being made by the protagonist in the future, but the AI rebels, but the protagonist's clever future links up with the winery to reach an agreement. All the early plans are within the boss and the male protagonist's plan. Anyway, the plot is okay. Again, don't look at what the protagonist does from God's perspective but look at it from the protagonist's perspective. The perspective of gamers is different from that of normal people. Why is it still a matryoshka plot? The undercover plot hasn't appeared yet, it's all about gangsters fighting matryoshka dolls. Numb
Author, who are you? The Guinness record is for typing 807 letters per minute. Calculating that each Chinese character requires 6 letters, you can type about 134 words per minute. Since you are not a holder, let's calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and it takes about two hours for you to eat every day and 20 minutes to go to the toilet. , 40 Minutes to wash up, one hour to exercise, two hours to find inspiration, and then strip away one hour of idle fishing time. You should have nine hours to type and type 54,000 words. Calculated based on 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 27 chapters, but you only post so much content every day. What's going on? To be honest, is it a deduction? The donkeys in the production team don't dare to take such a rest. The author quickly got up to type!
I really like the protagonist's attitude towards people and things like playing a game. And if Xiaolan's words were to be accepted, she would have to kill someone (for the protagonist's sake) (at least to show her internal attitude), which would be in line with the protagonist's previous thoughts.
It's pretty good-looking and more in line with my taste, especially the Osaka section. I hope the protagonist maintains the "I don't care" persona and tortures Conan severely, but don't go too far to avoid the character collapse. And the main plot of Conan is not only to detect the black organization, but also to "bring the protagonist to justice."
Gin is OOC, and then there are multiple female protagonists... I can't stand both of them, and I'm going to cry to death.
I've read more than sixty chapters, and it's good. It's written with new ideas and has been well received. Finally, it's not a cookie-cutter Conan story. Time travel, jumping between black and red, finding a partner (the police is likely to be Officer Sato, other identities are likely to be Haibara Ai), and solving crimes. I hope the author can always write such innovative follow-ups and not fall into the Conan literary path.