That Year, That Building, That Blind Boy!

Shamelessly give yourself a five-star review [shy] It went so fast, and before I knew it, it was already a million words long. To be honest, it was my first time writing a book, and I never thought it would be so long. Let me talk about the name of the protagonist Pei Li first. The word "Li" already explains a lot. It is destined that the protagonist will not be a heinous villain. As for why the surname is Pei, it is partly to make the protagonist's name catchy, but more importantly, there are relatively few protagonists with this surname. Let me talk about a few flaws or poisonous points in the book, and I will respond (defend) briefly. 1. Regarding the setting of time travel. The existence of the "Yuan Tian Seal" in the book will involve knowledge of modern firearms and weapons and equipment, as well as some jokes. If there is no time-travel identity, these will appear very abrupt. 2. The protagonist was an otaku in his previous life. The comment section is almost full of abuse, but the main character in the book is taciturn, socially awkward, and the otaku setting is just to fit the personality. 3. There is a chat group between the treasures of heaven and earth. This is a reference to The Watcher, but reading the comments from readers, almost all of them are scolding it and saying it is poisonous. To be honest, I still can't figure out why people criticized this. Fortunately, I listened to my advice and never wrote a chat group again. 4. About the heroine. Again, single heroine! Single heroine! Single heroine! The heroine is one of Jiang Yuebai and Jiang Xiao. The article mentioned that there will be emotional bonds between Pei Li, Jiang Yuebai, and Jiang Xiao. Some readers felt that this was not a story with a single female protagonist. First of all, I don't want the characters in my books to be just emotionless machines. Everyone has emotions and desires, and the protagonist is no exception. Secondly, the protagonist is a sentimental person, very sensitive to emotions, and is sincere to his friends, so it is not an exaggeration to say that the protagonist will have some inexplicable feelings. In short, this is definitely a single-female story! 5. Regarding combat power. Some people say that the combat power has collapsed, but I feel that it has not. 6. Regarding the identity of the protagonist's killer. It must be mentioned that the killer is just an identity, and the protagonist is actually more like a knight wandering around the world. The plot in the book about the protagonist doing the killer mission is not even one ten thousandth. The title of the book was fixed when we signed the contract, and I can't change it. If anyone reads it for the killer, I'm sorry, but I really can't change the title. 7… 9… 10… There are too many criticisms, so I won't list them all. Let me tell you my personal views on this book. First of all, I feel that the portrayal of the protagonist is quite good. There is the enthusiasm and emotion of young people, the heartache of seeing the suffering of the people but being unable to do anything, and the courage to stand up when the country is in trouble... The other characters in the book are all flesh and blood, not just stick figures, which I am very satisfied with. In terms of plot, it is basically promoted from the perspective of the protagonist. There will be flaws in some places, but I feel that, overall, the flaws are outweighed. In addition, I did not expect that the fourth volume would be so long, especially the fourth volume, which actually contains more than 500,000 words. There are many characters in the book that are not in my outline, but as the plot progresses, some characters emerge as the times require. Also, I basically wrote according to the outline, but when it came to coding, I had other ideas in my mind. After thinking about it for a while, I felt that the new ideas were better. This resulted in me often deleting and writing, and writing and deleting. In fact, the total number of words I typed every day exceeded 6,000, but the final draft only had two chapters. All in all, thank you to everyone who reads. Since it was my first time to write a book, and I was so excited that I also wrote a male video. I really didn't expect that I would get scolded so much, I didn't make any money, and I got scolded a lot, haha. One last update. Due to the birth of the second child, although the eldest child is in kindergarten, the second child cannot be separated from others at all times, and there is not much time for renewal. The mobile phone I use to code is a way of squeezing in time to use love to generate electricity, but it's not because I don't work hard at updating [I'm about to cry]. Okay, I admit, sometimes I can't stop using TikTok [shy]… The last one is really the last one. Please scold gently [cry]

How many chapters do I want to ask when the male protagonist and the female protagonist get together [laughing] [laughing]

The writing is good, the descriptions are good, the emotional scenes are not procrastinating, and the protagonist's image is set well. I have read all the author's updates. The plot is smooth and there are no logical problems. At present, the protagonist group should be quite large, and the author has done a good job in shaping the characters. It can be predicted that as long as it is not unfinished, it will be another masterpiece with a rating of 9.5 Or above. Generally speaking, the writing is quite good. It not only describes the necessary characters, psychology, and environment, but also incorporates some of the author's personal interests. However, there is still a slight flaw. The protagonist's time travel can be completely ignored. Although the author does not mention it much in the article, only a few strokes are used as back-up patches. However, adding an unnecessary time-travel setting in the article will lose some points. Finally, I wish the author can create another masterpiece with a 9.5 Rating. I look forward to the author's efforts.

"The causes sown in the past will bear the fruits today." No matter what the future holds, no matter where you are, remember it in this life History is always similar, but it is forever. The writing style of the book is good, and the articles are tight but precise. I'm in this world...

It seems that the rating is not high, but the Tomato rating is related to the number of readers. It's well written, the story is in-depth, and the writing is very mature. The plot development and writing style highlight the excitement of the novel. I'm just judging after reading dozens of chapters. The author does have something. Don't stop watching it just because the rating isn't high. . . Author, please update! The male protagonist is very handsome and feels very cool But I hope there won't be so many female characters, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists will resonate with me. I originally only watched it when I saw a single girl, but the story is really brilliant I beg you not to have multiple heroines in the future. . . . Keep up the good work, author, and recommend everyone who clicks on the book review to read this book

As a killer, he performed chivalrous deeds. The author's writing style is superb, and he vividly describes the grievances and hatreds in the rivers and lakes, the fast-moving fights, and the vicissitudes of life. Especially when describing the many friends in the Jianghu, first they shed their blood when they first entered the Jianghu, and then after immersing themselves in the big dye vat of the Jianghu, they finally looked back and only said goodbye to each other. Come on, author, she is a female author and has a baby. It is really difficult to write until now. This book is worth reading [Love] [Love]

It feels good. Let's chew it first. Come on, author.

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian has been waiting for 800 years, Feng Qingxue has been waiting for Baili Tusu for 900 years, Nightshade has been waiting for Long Yang for 1000 years, Bai Zi has been waiting for Xu Xian for 1000 years, and Yi Xiaochuan has been waiting for Yu Shu. In 2000, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. One day, one day, one month, a weak man was lying beside the bed, with a slight smile on his lips. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of his eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..."

It's a good novel, but the protagonist is not like a killer, but more like a knight who will stab his companions at all costs, rather than a cold and ruthless killer who puts his mission first (my understanding of a killer)

It's a very good book. I've read a lot of killer-themed books, but this one still gave me a different feeling. The plot and character descriptions are very good. I originally decided to read it again, but I couldn't stop reading it [face covering]. Come on, author, write well [like] [like]. I hope this book will get better and better. I may not be able to live by this book in the future.

The protagonist is more like a knight-errant, the kind of knight who does justice. As a killer, he is too kind. Personally I think it's pretty good looking, but the rating is on the low side, but if you're looking for someone who is decisive and ruthless, I wouldn't recommend it.

I have read half of it now, and the overall evaluation is good and worthy of recommendation. So far, the female protagonists I have seen have very few scenes, and it can even be said that there are no female protagonists. Secondly, one thing I think is very bad is why the male protagonist always has various women around him when he walks in the world. You can even say that the female protagonist has more scenes than the female protagonist (all of the above are personal opinions and do not represent all)

The male protagonist is too kind. It's not that the Holy Mother takes care of everything, but he is a little bit involved in unfair things. This adds a bit of a knight's face to the image of the killer. The language is not good enough to describe what he wants to say. Secondly, it is too short, which makes it uncomfortable. (´இVanஇ｀)

It's awesome and beautiful. Although the plot is a bit cliche, the writing style is just right. Can you please update more? If you keep doing this, I will keep it. Author, you don't want to lose a handsome reader who is following the update. Jie Jie Jie

It's good-looking, but there's just too little [face covering] [smirk] [smile] [admiration]

My friend, if you want to continue writing about killers, please look at the current rhythm. If you don't want to write about killers, try changing the title of the book slightly (a personal suggestion after reading the two chapters)

Most of the novels are fictional, but there are shadows of life📚...

Since there are so many female supporting characters, let's have more female protagonists. As for novels, it's okay if they are beautiful. Just have more love lines, don't limit yourself because of the single heroine

It's nice to watch, but the protagonist has been injured and wanted. He looks like he's about to die now. The heroine is here to save her, right?

Although there are many knives, the reading has a Jianghu flavor, and it is easy to get involved and immerse yourself in the situation. The author's writing style is very good. I am currently reading the third volume, and I hope it will still be the same by the end.

I have read part of it, and this book has some ideas.

It's so beautiful that it makes my blood boil.

It looks good but... There are a lot of knives [crying]

I really like it, don't break it!

The author is faster. Not enough. I have been chasing your book for so long. This novel will be popular in the future

It looks good and the writing is very good. Keep up the good work and don't let it suck.

It's pretty good. It's rare to see someone who specializes in being a killer on the market.

There's a different feeling

It's too short. Make it longer.

I think it looks pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low [thoughts]