Era Holy World

The thinking is clear and the plot is powerful. There is nothing sinister about it so far. I will continue to update it. I love watching it.

Some paragraphing problems are serious and affect the sense of reading. It is recommended that the author divide it into paragraphs. It is best to have three or two lines of words in a paragraph, which makes it easier to read!

I feel that the realms are divided very well. I fell in love immediately. However, this is my first time writing, but it's still the first chapter! [What]

It's so beautiful, I support [adoration] [adoration]