Brother Nervous Is Actually Pretending?

After a long period of book shortage, I finally found another book worth reading. The beginning of this book does not have many of the routines of previous novels. It is a very pure style of writing that makes people want to see what happens. The writing is brisk, interesting, and fascinating. The protagonist is neither a loser nor a monstrous genius standing at the pinnacle of fantasy, but a handsome young man with outstanding talents. Although he is precocious but not too mature, he maintains the youthful passion of a young man and understands the right and wrong. The protagonist has a distinct image, a strong sense of substitution, and has an endless aftertaste of charm. The emotional line in the article is also in place. The relationship between brothers, masters and apprentices, senior brothers and junior sisters is harmonious, and the heroine has also arranged it very well. The love of childhood sweethearts will definitely lose even if it falls from the sky. Although the number of words is still small, the pace of the novel is appropriate and the writing is orderly. I look forward to the author's subsequent updates!

It's good to read, but after reading more than 60 chapters, I realized that there is a female protagonist [crying] (I personally don't like novels with female protagonists, but it's well written and I'm so confused)

With this writing style, this book will surely shine. I have read 800 books on Tomato but only spent 800 hours reading it. In this era of fast food, the writing style of this book must be at the forefront of Tomato. Most of Tomato's novels cannot write emotional scenes, the fighting scenes are not good, and the characterization is even worse, but this book can really resonate and affect emotions. It is really not a poke! !

I don't know how to write a book review, but it's a very good book. The protagonist is affectionate and has a sense of justice. The talent of the protagonist is very good (the genius category). The relationship between the heroine and the heroine is well described. The relationship just started in childhood, and they met again as a teenager, and they were ignorant. The sect has masters, brothers, sisters and elders who love and protect him

Very good, very good. I haven't seen such a cute book in a long time. Moreover, the author has some literary skills. The protagonist Wei Guangzheng is nice Love is sweet, nice The sect is united as one, nice I hope the author doesn't give up! I will definitely chase it to the end!

It's super good. I really like the protagonist. The plot is quite rich and the world view is quite big. I've only seen 44 pictures so far. Because my personal taste doesn't like having a female protagonist, so I haven't continued to read it. But for now, if the book doesn't suck in the end, it should be very good (sorry, I can't think of more words of praise). If you like fantasy plots, want to read some warm feelings between masters and apprentices, and want to see young romance, you can read this book. It's quite gentle [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

Fresh, refined and non-toxic, it can be regarded as an invincible flow, and the single female protagonist is sweet! This is a new book. The score is low. It's definitely more than that. Cool article! Super cool article!

Although I only saw a few pictures, overall the details, actions and language are very rich. But why did I comment after just a few pictures? Personally, I prefer fast-paced writing into the text. For example, the main text of Third Brother is normal in just a few pictures, or it can be realized faster than the introduction. Have you seen God? This sentence is very powerful, so I came here to read it (-人-)

The writing is very good, and the emotional plot is also handled well. I hope the author will stick to it. It is not brainless, and it is very interesting. It describes the delicacy of young Huaichun, the publicity of young people chasing dreams, and also the perseverance and hard work of ordinary people and the ordinary life. It is a lot of hazy beauty of youth, and it is also the lost youth that you and I cannot pursue. However, the protagonist here can go to places that we cannot go and marry our original her! I like it very much. The novel is full of beautiful things that I have always wanted to express but couldn't!

It's really good to watch. The main character completely won my heart. He is a bit mean (very cheerful and greedy, but there is a reason), but he is also very sensible. He is idle on the surface, but secretly very distressing (he has practiced the formation and state of mind to the extreme for ten years). His talent is ridiculously strong, but after dozens of chapters, his cultivation suddenly catches up. It feels a little cool (but not invincible). There is nothing to say about the author's writing style. The combination of modern memes and writing techniques is refreshing. Anyway, it's very funny. The heroine is also good, she is shy and aloof in front of outsiders. But the male protagonist is very relaxed.

It is recommended that the author add a line at the end of the introduction or the first chapter to explain that the book is a bit slow in the early stages, otherwise it will be difficult for new readers to stick with it. Let's put it this way, I read it for a while. The first feeling is that the pace is very slow, the second is that there are no interesting points, and the third is that there are no attractive points. Advantages The current content is well written and logical. The disadvantage is that I really can't understand the purpose of the protagonist's behavior. After reading the comments, I found that it is very slow to pick up. It will be more attractive later. If you don't see the comment area, you will probably put down the book because you are a little confused [face covering] I deleted them all. I haven't watched it for a long time. I found it to be finished. I finished reading it in one go. It has a single female protagonist and a good emotional line and is not limited to feelings all the time. Some of the things I thought were weird at the beginning were also filled in at the end. Basically, it was a gold mine for me overall. Finally, it should be noted that this book is about pure invincibility, so you don't have to worry about who the protagonist can't defeat. The interesting part of this book lies in the description of some small plots. This is what invincible flow should be like. After being in invincible flow all day long, you can't be considered invincible by dawdling with your peers. Of course, if you don't like this kind of taste, I don't recommend it very much.

It's okay to read this book on Tomato. It can be seen that the author is writing seriously and there is nothing particularly nonsense. It's just that there is a problem with the rhythm. I can see some traces of imitation. I want to imitate the sword in some places, but I don't think it is necessary, because such writing requires strong writing support. Some places are imitated and some are just written normally, which will feel abrupt. Overall it looks good

It's very interesting, it has a single female protagonist, and it's not ambiguous, but there are still some minor problems. Let me talk about it first, it has a single female protagonist, but because of the female protagonist's seclusion and other reasons, she doesn't make many appearances after hundreds of chapters. I haven't read the last two hundred chapters, so I don't know. There is also the plot of the previous meeting and discussion, which feels a bit like forcing the disciples to die. Although it can be seen that the author is trying his best to round up the reasons, it is really not very tenable. There are no other major criticisms. Some of the plots are a bit cliche but not bad. The single heroine is not ambiguous. One of the girls who gets closer is the junior sister (but the junior sister likes the senior brother and just fights with the male protagonist), and the second is the junior uncle (the junior junior uncle has hugged the male protagonist since he was a child and raised his daughter as a son, but social fear often makes it feel like the male protagonist is the father raising his daughter, hahahaha). I think the only suggestion is to give the heroine more scenes and write more stories about the two of them going out together and encountering a series of stories. Nowadays, there are real people listening to the book. I read the novel and I am still listening to the book.

The more I watched the next plot, the more I looked forward to it, but when I read other comments, I remembered that the description of the first realm of enlightenment was a bit too much, which caused the pace of the first part to be very slow and completely different from the second part. I felt very uncomfortable when I came back to that part. Probably from the time when I went down the mountain to slay the demons to the demon pass, the rhythm change started to become normal and very comfortable. Overall, the first few dozen chapters are a bit uncomfortable, and it's hard to read if you're impatient. However, the appearance and background of the most important characters cannot be skipped. The overall story and background are very good, highly recommended.

So far, the plot is pretty good, there is no deliberately disgusting plot, and the characters' IQs are all online. I hope the author will continue to maintain the same

It's really good, a rare single female protagonist. Although there are many female supporting characters, there is really no ambiguous plot. The emotional scenes with the heroine are also very well written. The drama is also online But the first twenty or thirty chapters are really unattractive. It's hard to endure this, but it will be much better after seeing it.

The following chapters are really beautiful. If you read it patiently, you will find out what is special about this book. But to be honest, since it is a single female protagonist, the heroine should have more roles, and the junior uncle and the protagonist should not make people feel cp-prone. It gives people the feeling that the young master is the heroine, but the real heroine does not have many emotional scenes with the male protagonist.

I haven't read much, but the rating of this book is really low. The author's level on Tomato is at least above average, which is close to the upper level. The writing of this book is also relatively good, which means that the writing style is not popular on Tomato. Otherwise, objectively speaking, this book can at least reach 9.2, And it has a chance of reaching 9.4. Overall, it is still good, but the reason why the rating is not high is because of the plot. Tomato is also like most novels on major platforms. They all have the theme of plot interlocking. In short, I can read a book for a whole day, but once I put it down for about half an hour, I have no desire to continue reading. This book is different, but the main reason for the low rating is that the plot is not compact. Of course, I have not finished it, and I have only read less than a hundred chapters. I will not comment on the overall plot level, but the early flaws are obviously in the plot, and it is different from me. I read another book, that book is about the plot from the beginning to being concentrated, and slowly leading to the plot, but the premise is that it is extremely confusing in the early stage, including character creation, plot foreshadowing and suspense reasoning. It is difficult to see the whole picture until later, so that book can grasp the plot in place. To be honest, I can only say that the current early plot of this book is just average, a normal and refreshing plot. , But the character creation, emotional foil, and plot changes are all very reasonable and good, and they all demonstrate the author's strength and level. It can only be said that judging from this book alone, as long as the author's level can be improved in terms of plot, he will be able to reach the upper level of Tomato. In the future, as long as he uses it skillfully, he can reach Zi Ling's level in all aspects, but it is still far from Zi Ling's storytelling level. It is definitely enough for Tomato.

It's very good. I hope the author will work hard to complete it. I'm looking forward to the end of the book. From being for the people around me to being for the entire Dongzhou, it is also very passionate. The heroine is also very good. She is dressed in red and looks very sassy. I hope the ending can be longer and more long-term. I am looking forward to having a side story about the trivial matters of Su Liang and Miss Chen. Come on, author (ง•̀_•́)ง

The advantages are that the characters are very good, the protagonist is likable, and the writing is also good. The shortcomings are that there are too many Riddlers, the lack of a main line, and poor plot arrangement, resulting in the protagonist's behavior being unintelligible and having to cross the border to challenge. It lacks the refreshing feeling that such articles often have. If you read Shuangwen, you can use it to refresh your mind, but you don't need to read it just to pass the time. For me, this book has no bad points. The protagonist has an excellent character and is attractive. The plot is dull but readable. I can give it five stars.

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I've read so many fantasy novels on Tomato that I haven't seen such an interesting one in a long time. The story is interesting and not draggy. The relationships between the characters are very good, and the male and female protagonists are also very relatable. Overall, it's a book worth reading as long as it doesn't end badly.

After reading it for so long, I don't know if I am qualified to comment. My evaluation of the real book is very good. I haven't read many books, but I haven't read many books. It is difficult to write a good book. Everyone will like it. Whether it is the character setting or the emotional line, I personally think it is very good. I love reading it and read it every day.

The writing style of the text is not very delicate, and it is not very rigorous and refined. I originally planned to read it casually to kill time, but it always hit my mark from time to time. On the contrary, now I am looking forward to whether there will be better works coming out.

I have nothing to say, it's very well written. A new author is very good with his writing style. However, some book friends said that the realm is a bit confusing. I don't feel that at all. It's very easy to understand. There aren't many clichéd plots and the plot moves very quickly. It's super interesting.

Well, it's quite good-looking. The third senior brother is very nice. He is proud, his talent is very strong, and his strength is also very good. The formations, elixirs, and weapon training are all wonderful, and the plot is very good. [Love]

I didn't want to read it when I saw the rating of 8.8. The word count is quite high, even if I'm a bit addicted, I can still read it. The only thing I've read so far is that the experience of going down the mountain is a bit impulsive and insane. The micro-group portraits and the supporting characters are well portrayed. It's worth watching. I've finished reading it. Can the author write it faster? Ten chapters a day.

This is my first time to write a book review. I have read half of this book so far. Until now, the divine protagonist shows up to take away the pseudo-Heaven. For some reason, the author's writing style of this book gave me a very warm feeling. It is a very nice book. I haven't seen such a comfortable writing in a long time.

Gray comedy is not brainless. I guess the author is also a fellow traveler in the novel world and is a loyal fan of the manager.

It's a very comfortable article to read. The emotional description is also very good and interesting. Good luck to the author [please update]