Genshin Impact: Abyss Girl After Picking up Miyoushe

It's a very interesting fanfic. The last time I saw this was Lin Musi's book. I don't know why Tomato gave it a rating of 7.0. It makes me really sad when it's so low [crazy]

It is a very heartwarming novel, but there is some content in it that I feel is not enough. Mainly on the heroine's side, the current portrayal is still very interesting, but it would be better if the setting that has long since died can be added. For example, the heroine has long since died completely, and now walking in her identity is the demon god named Illusion and Reality. The demon god absorbed all her memories after the death of the heroine. It was originally able to maintain self-awareness, but the bracelet given by Zhongli activated its effect in the middle. As a result, the memory of being the demon god was lost. This also caused the demon god of illusion and reality to always think that he was the heroine, and the memories about the death were subconsciously blurred. Then Tianli discovered its true identity when getting along with the travelers later, which reminded it that it was actually the Demon God. Then it went undercover to join the Seven Gods, intending to cooperate with Tianli to destroy them all. At the last moment, the Demon God relied on the memory and research of the heroine to successfully destroy the Seven Gods, and created a new world with Tianli. It is gratifying and congratulatory. [Understood]

So beautiful! Love every character in the book. Everyone who was rescued made up for the regrets of the plot. This may be the meaning of second creation/fandom. I like the character of the Wanderer very much. He is not a straggler. He is not likeable in the original plot (but the planning and writing team decided everything about him. I think there is no need to go against the normal cook and role... I like the author's emotions for each character. I really like it. Compared with others (I have seen the follow-up to the Wanderer in the book is to get him back together with the shadow, take over Ina Wife and let the shadow change his name. The plot in the book follows the characters and activities of the characters in the game, and it is very interesting to create more characters that we don't care about without ruining the plot.

Very well written! The plot has not touched the transformation points that are often encountered in fan fiction, and the impression is still very good. It would be better to write a non-CP to a wider audience, but according to the current trend, there will be no such thing. I won't say more. When it is finished, the quality can be maintained. I will change my account and give it a five-star rating!

I just realized that I haven't written a review for the novel I've been following for so long. This is my favorite Genshin Impact novel that I've read so far. This is the author's first book, but the writing style is not at all immature, and the details and foreshadowing are handled perfectly. There are very few novels like this that I didn't feel any negative emotions from the beginning to the end. There is no nonsense or water in the whole text. There is no bad or poisonous point in the whole text. The writing style is humorous, and the humor is natural and not artificial at all. There are jokes and jokes, but they should be perfectly integrated into the plot, not obtrusive, and make people laugh but not annoying. He has already formed his own style of writing. The protagonist in the article is a character that the author added out of thin air, and it is consistent with the original setting and plot. Moreover, it does not suffer from the common problem of second-generation novels that have too much original plot and not enough of their own creation. The whole text is mainly from Nana's perspective, and more than 80% of it is new. I feel that what I am watching is not a second-generation novel, but a incomplete world. The characters are all brought to life. The characters have her/his own characteristics, but they are by no means rigidly following the personality. Reading this book is not just for entertainment and passing time. Although it is a place for brain storage at the beginning, I will not put it away as long as I can. This novel is worth chewing carefully. The full star is well deserved, it is full star rather than five stars. Five stars is the upper limit of Tomato and not the upper limit of this article. I hope the author can continue writing, and I will always support you!

How can I put it this way? The book is a good one, but it just gives me the feeling that I have read one less book (I feel like I can write another article about the background information).

It's very novel. It's the first time I've seen a book written from the perspective of the Abyss Order. It's very interesting. I like it.

Not bad, although but, is the protagonist's feelings for Kanrea a bit deep? At most, he only has bloodline, and he grew up in Liyue and Xumi, just like Kaiya, It should have nothing to do with Kanriya. Of course, if there is a plot that has not been written, just pretend that I didn't say it. And if I remember correctly, the protagonist didn't know that Zhongli was the God of Rock before getting the Miyu Society. He only found out after getting it (of course, it may be that I remembered it wrong). The part about empathy with the skirmishers said that Zhongli and Zhongli fought in the battle of Kanriya, and they are enemies. Wasn't the protagonist picked up by Zhongli from Kanriya? And he was a baby when he picked it up, right? Why is the timeline wrong? Or is my timeline wrong? The author can explain that he has been reading this book recently and may have misremembered some of the previous plots [laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs] Generally speaking, there are no shortcomings. I hope there will be no cp [like][like][like][like],

Good news, another treasure has been found. Bad news, there are only more than 50 pictures, not enough to see, not enough to see at all. Come on, people like me who don't hoard books at all will definitely catch up on updates (basically I won't urge them)——

It's very interesting. If this character really comes out, the rock type can drink a lot of soup.

It's good-looking, and the father-daughter relationship with the emperor is really good. The old man is a good father. The relationship with Ying's best friend is also very good. When will the heroine enter the pool?

1 It's super beautiful, the characters are full-bodied, and the plot is very reasonable. I like it very much. The author is more explosive and more [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Maru La, the latest wing is about the rebel master who was used by the Last King as a container to absorb the abyss. It seems that his life is not good. Even the five sinners may be white. In order to save the rebel master, he absorbed the power of the abyss and hid (those disasters may be the overflowing abyss). Alice said that the waking time of gold is getting shorter and shorter, and the laws of nature are the most undead (at least before solving the abyss). She created earth veins to protect the world's creatures, and made false heavens to isolate the external abyss.

It's pretty good, the setting is good, and the writing can support the setting.

I didn't see any major bugs. The plot is funny, good-looking, and full of laughs. It's sweet but like chocolate raining from the sky, sweet but slightly bitter, and delicate but can't be eaten in one go as you'll get sick of it. The characters don't have OOC either, which feels really good [like]

Spring and Autumn Cicada, Spring and Autumn Cicada, help me embark on this path of Chen Zun I knew at an early age that things were going to be difficult, and people were allowed to fly and prosper in the world. The youth has unlimited glory, only to regret it later I'm old and frail, but I don't regret it, but I don't have the slightest strength to save myself. Occasionally, I am a young man in the Spring and Autumn Period. I change my destiny, change my people, and change my destiny. Love to watch. Original God's masterpiece

It's really good-looking, the character setting is very interesting, the interactions are also very interesting, the characters are not OOC, and the plot design is also very clever. Serafina is cute and cute. I want to recommend Nabao's favorite drinks. By the way, teacher, why did you stop updating? I'm going to play the game three times. Wuwuwuwuwuwu, teacher, when will you come back to update Nana? I'm still waiting after 26 years. Wuwuwuwu.

How can I put it this way? It feels like many novels. The ideas and ideas are great, but the ability is not good enough [face covering]. When I read it, I always feel that there is something missing [full]. The pace feels a bit fast and the content is a bit empty. Anyway, give it a try, author.

It's beautiful, I really like Serafina [sending my heart], she's so cute Nana is great. She saved a lot of people and helped a lot of people along the way. She suffered a lot. From the very beginning when she didn't cry and didn't dare to go home, she later became the Lord of the Abyss with her father and her second father and many good friends. She really experienced a lot. The Abyss Order is also a warm family. The Abyss Mages are silly, but I was really touched. I really liked the part about the Night Sky Lullaby. After hundreds of years, Nana, it's not easy, but this story is really great [Sending Hearts]

Very well written, I'm currently on my fourth brush. That is to say, the protagonist's character is well developed and the plot is interesting. It's just that the author seems a bit lazy~ Come on, author, I believe this is not your limit.

It looks good, the plot is good, the setting is good, I like it, I highly recommend it! ! ! Big cheers for the author! !

In fact, it's hard to say what's good about it, but my brain just tells me it looks good. The emotional portrayal is very warm and contagious. Reading the book is like taking Xuanmai, you can't stop at all. Inexplicably, the style feels very similar to another book. I forgot the name. The protagonist is Tavernal, an executive of the Fools. (I also recommend that book. The plot of Xumi's scattered soldiers is about becoming a god. The scattered soldiers sacrifice their lives to resist the punishment nail thrown by Tianli. There is no main plot of Xumi in the Genshin Impact fandom that can surpass that book.)

I forgot when I found the book last year and I didn't finish it. I wanted to finish it, but I found it was discontinued and stopped reading.

It's interesting. I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot. I like reading forum posts. It would be nice to have more.

It looks good. I am becoming more and more curious now that Nana will slice and dice her body and then take the old man to reality.

Are you coming back? Teacher 😭 I finally found a book that I like very much and it's been almost a year and a half since I saw it 😢

It looks pretty good so far. I'd like to give you five stars for encouragement.

Looking at it so far, I feel it is very beautiful and well written.

Nice! The protagonist has complex composition (the identity covers Liyue, Xumi, and Kanria), the character creation is unique, and there are no flaws in the plot. The protagonist makes his presence felt around the travelers from time to time. All in all, it looks great! The author seems to be very cute too! Highly recommended!

Watching the author's book score rise from 7.5 To 9.1