The Cold Wind That Protects My Sweetheart Is Still There

It looks good, the writing is smooth, and the characters are not very OOC. The style of the whole novel is indeed a bit fragmented, but it is fragmented in a good, logical and hidden way, so it is not a big problem. [Eat melon] In the early stage, it was obvious that the storyline was a guardian sweetheart style template. In the later stage, you can clearly feel that the author's writing is becoming more and more smooth, and he has more and more personal opinions. The arrangement of the emotional line was also slightly stiff in the early stage, relying entirely on the heroine to rely on unwritten childhood memories to hold the arrow. Whether it was the hero's vague memory or the wariness of the heroine, as well as the proportion of the plot, atmosphere and character creation in the early stage, if it weren't for the copywriting clearly stating who the CP was, I would have really doubted whether the heroine was going to have a lily with Yameng in the middle of reading [face covering] I feel that the relationship line in the later period is relatively smooth. No matter what others think, I really got involved when the male protagonist declined the confession. He really took this relationship seriously. The female protagonist silently fell in love with the male protagonist. The male protagonist completely pulled the female protagonist into the circle of tolerance, as well as the specialness and affection expressed by the "pen pal". Anyway, I felt that it was quite easy to relate to, and it was in line with the standard of sweetness for their age group (what) It's just that the update speed is a bit slow. I finished it in one go. I'll save it now and look forward to my wife's next update. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It's so good to watch and I really like it. I have to take a lot of medicine to get rid of it. I want to see the ending [crying]. The characters are particularly full-bodied. The author has his own ideas. He does not follow the original drama episode by episode but writes from the main perspective of the original characters. He has his own story background. I like it very much [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

After reading this, I feel that I am a good candidate for cultivating the ruthless path.

This book is not like most other fanfics, which completely follows the perspective of the protagonist, or highlights its own male and female protagonists by stealing the spotlight from the original protagonist group. We, Linlin, have our own lives, complete thoughts, and our own highlights. We are not rigid puppets who follow the plot. Until now, in the latest chapter of the Dada update, Linlin has started from the perspective of a bystander - discovering the original plot - trying to change - staying away from Japan - trying to fill the regrets outside the plot. She really writes what she wants to tell us, and the basic logic is self-consistent, so it can be read with a little brain. (PS: At the beginning, I did come here for "Guardian Sweetheart" and "CP is Nadeshiko". Linlin and Nadeshiko are also childhood sweethearts, and I like them very much. However, Linlin's two identities: arrogant and elegant young lady × gentle and considerate guardian, this is also very good, ah, I am dead.)

So we really can't let Linlin be beautiful alone, and then meet someone better, better, and more suitable for Linlin? [Almost crying] (Okay, I know it's impossible) I really feel that he is not worthy. It is always Linlin who takes the initiative, who wrongs herself, and never considers her own feelings, so can happiness also come to Linlin's hands? Closer to home, this guardian fanfic is much better than the fanfics I have found in Tomato novels so far. It is not the same old story about becoming a big or small king, intervening in the main plot, etc. More of the plot is on us, Linlin, and then interspersed with some plot lines. It is more for me to read. When it comes to Linlin's growth process, working hard for her dreams, giving 200% to her friends and having a secret love that she doesn't know when she will get a response, the author hasn't finished it yet, leaving a star for the author to finish it, so can she not let Linlin be so wronged? [I'm about to cry], I want to hug Linlin

Write quickly! Write eight hundred chapters a day! Don't make me, please, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Fujisaki, really, can hurt the heroine's heart so much. Everything is a dream, and everything is your friends. Looking at it from a God's perspective, I really feel that Rin might as well go solo and be the heroine by herself. It doesn't matter if this book doesn't have a male protagonist.

The second book that got me into trouble after the first one! (What a heinous crime!) (Bushi) I have always preferred novels, because in my opinion, the characters in novels are more "flesh and blood" and can arouse my empathy more. This is the case with this novel. My wife made reasonable and incomplete settings for the invisible parts of the anime Leia Dream, and used this to make the characters "alive", no longer weak and weak. In fact, I generally don't like the protagonists of comic books, because it seems that the world has already been determined and everything is taken for granted, but you are different, Rin, please love yourself a little more, you are worth it.

It's good-looking, but I don't think it needs a male protagonist. I feel like the female protagonist can just grow up on her own. After reading the last chapter, I realized that no one seemed to care about the heroine.

Mom, as long as you are willing to continue writing, I can change from a dark and scary mad woman to a sunny and lively little girl. Do you understand, the kind of lively little girl who laughs and sounds like a silver bell🤲🏻

Alas, even though he knew that Agari didn't like the heroine in the early stage and didn't even know she was a girl, he still couldn't help but feel aggrieved for him when he showed that he was special to Yameng in front of the heroine. In addition, he already knew that the heroine liked him, and he was afraid of showing his specialness to other girls in front of people who like him. It was a bit uncomfortable mentally. Even if they are together in the future, there will be estrangement [crying][crying][crying][crying]

It's beautiful and beautiful. The characters are very detailed. You can feel that in Da Da's writing, the characters are full of soul. Between the lines, you can feel Da Da's love and care for the characters in his paintings. [Send heart] I hope Da Da will continue to persevere [Blow kiss]

What a great setting, and the characters are well controlled! From the first chapter to now, there is no discomfort in the whole process The protagonist is not delicate and weak! It's Xiao Jiu who is active! Www I would definitely be fascinated if I were there! ! ! ! Not enough (sadness) Come on come on! !

I've been really into articles about women dressing up as men lately. Perhaps because of the environment of early comics and Tomato, there are very few that seem refreshing to me. When I first saw the title of the book, I just thought it was boring so I might as well give it a try, because before this book I had read too many similar novels in which Super Mario Sue was prone to drama. Then I was slapped in the face. From the reader's perspective, I felt a little unworthy, but I didn't know who to blame. Rinrin remembers what happened when she was a child but Nagihiko forgets. I don't feel sorry for Rinrin for the inequality in the early stages of this relationship. But just like what was written in the article, most children don't remember much, so I read on. Fujisaki probed Rin Rin with many questions, from being suspicious and saying that it would be better not to be the opposite enemy, to standing unswervingly in front of Rin Rin with his friends no matter how provocative the other side was, which made me feel warm. (This kid Fujisaki still rejected Rin when he realized Rin's feelings. Haha, you kid obviously fell in love with me. Who is pretending to know about foreign countries but actually wants to know more about Rin? I won't say) Anyway! I really like this book [crying][crying]

Very good-looking, men's clothing boss x women's clothing boss.

Like! ! ! It really feels like watching an anime. The characters are not OOC and are very detailed. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is great. I hope it won't stop updating! ! ! !

The emotional description is delicate and in place, giving people an immersive feeling without being too incomprehensible. (A kind of tranquility and clarity like a gurgling stream?) There are knives and sugar, the mixture is clever, and it has a strong sense of reality... It's great~ It's like a fairy tale written by "they" who belong to another time and space. , And the direction is only defined by "them"... That sense of helpless oppression of falling into the abyss and being stuck in the mud but trying to save yourself... That kind of tenderness that makes the soul pure because of the experience... The capital letters are particularly great!!! The description of the environment is also very real!!! The only "shortcoming" is... Fast~update~ah~ Also, my evaluation may not be quite accurate. If I am wrong, I am really sorry!! For the sake of my child being only 15 years old, please forgive me for once... (Age protection hehe)

It feels like a very good book. Different from the previous simple plot and understatement of the protagonist, the protagonist has his own supplementary story. I feel like the characters are fuller [Send my heart] [Please update] I stayed up late last night and watched 4 o'clock in the morning, finally tied it, hahahaha, every time I see a novel that is more to my liking, I want to read it in one sitting. I hope my wife can finish Rin's story.

The writing style is very delicate. On the main line, I don't just pursue the same progress as the plot. It's really awesome to have my own personal settings and improve some plot lines. The expression of emotions is also very natural, but it's not finished yet. It really makes me miserable. The author should keep working hard ˶╹ꇴ╹˶

It looks good, but I feel sorry for the heroine, so I might as well just leave it alone.

Teacher, please don't give up. The child is still waiting for a bite of food [almost crying][crying]

I really like it🥹🥹🥹🥹I want to see if I can fast forward directly to the horse-falling position🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹I urge the teacher to update it quickly!

The inner activities of the protagonist are shown in detail. It is really the best among the Guardian Sweetheart fan fiction series that I have seen. It feels like the protagonist is developing. The author's writing style is also quite good. It does not make people want to read it at all. It is the kind of feeling that I hope the author will add more chapters.

It's good-looking, but just not enough. The characters are well-developed and the main character is real. If I didn't know she was a girl, I would have thought he was a boy. Oh my God, Sunny Sir, hahahahahahaha, and he's also scheming (˵¯͒¯͒˵). I love it so much.

The emotions behind it are delicate. I fell in love with the character in the novel for the first time. I felt sorry for Linlin. The author's description of figure skating made me very interested in figure skating. Although sometimes it was a bit depressing and it must have been too slow, but I finally confessed and lived up to my expectations. All in all, it's a very good work.

I accidentally clicked on this book during the book shortage. No matter what I read, I rarely take it personally. Instead, I look at the development of the story from a God's perspective. But in this book, the heroine's name is the same as mine, and her character is equally awkward. It's very easy to interpret, and I unknowingly experience the plot of the book like a character in the play. I'm really looking forward to the next plot, and I hope the author can continue it more.

I like it, it looks good, I love it, the whole thing is very smooth, there is nothing obtrusive in what I see, and it doesn't make me bored. I still want to watch it now, I like it, I love it, I love it, I will continue to update it. Love you [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

Come on (´-ω-`), I hope you won't be fooled

It is perfectly fine for both the rational party and the emotional party to invest in shares. The plot is exciting and the content is also very good

Good looking. Love to see more.

I like the heroine, the writing is very realistic