The System Is Late. My Journey to Another World Is Over.

In fact, I prefer to write stories in this book. Shuangwen may still be figuring out how to write it. This is the author's first book. To be honest, as you can see, there are many problems, such as the death of Yu Weixue in the first volume and the change of perspective and hasty ending of the two supporting characters Zhou Yun and Cheng Linshu in the second volume. In the original ending of Yu Weixue, I wanted to take her out of the bungalow. After all, she really It was too painful. After writing this volume, I also felt that the malice towards her was really too great. However, at that time, the censorship was very strict when writing strange stories about people and ghosts. The author hesitated, so he continued writing without deviating from the outline of the first volume and gave such an ending. Now it is much more relaxed. The author also wants to give her a new ending so that she can be better. I was also thinking about how to change the perspective change in the second volume. At that time, I just wanted to mention the development of the supporting characters, but then the plot got out of control. As an author, it was the first time I felt what it was like to lose control of the plot. It was really upsetting, but I will still keep revising it. If you have any suggestions, you can write them down below and I will think about them seriously. Thank you all. At the same time, I would like to apologize to the readers who have had a bad impression.

It was surprisingly comfortable to read. Except for two points, too many flashbacks are used and the update is too slow. I apologize for committing seppuku🙏

Reading your book is torture. After all, I don't know when the next update will be [smile]

It's very interesting, and there's nothing toxic about it. I hope the author won't stop updating it.

It looks pretty good at the moment [Thinking]

It's pretty good, but the front perspective is a bit too much.

Come on! Come on! Work hard at coding! Give me the code! ! [Anger]

It's better to watch. I just want to say that the plot is more attractive and the content is not bad.

I'm halfway through it. It's very well written and suits my taste. I'll give it five stars.

I saw it on the homepage, the writing is okay, keep up the good work (ง •̀_•́)ง

Nice writing, keep up the good work^ω^

A very good book

This book is really beautiful

It's so cool, the excitement has begun

OK Nothing too poisonous

It's so pretty, I need 5 hearts

Good-looking, good-looking, quite interesting

Not bad, very beautiful

It's okay. I can barely watch it but I've finished it. I'll cut off the perspective a little bit later. I don't lack anything. Let's have some fun stories later.

It's pretty good, I didn't see anything bad (*｀▽´*)

Not bad. There are no special blocking points to watch at the moment [laughing evilly]

The story and character settings are very novel, and the author's writing style is also good. Overall, I like it, but the stock is not enough. Come on, author [crazy]

It looks good so far [laughing evilly] More updates [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It looks good, I love watching it, I love watching it! Update it quickly, it's not enough!