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I shamelessly gave myself a four-star rating [shy] because I actually have something to say to everyone. I am a complete newbie. I started writing just because of my pure love. I didn't expect that so many people would read it [crying] Thank you very much for your likes [blowing kiss] At first, it was just because I wanted to read such an article, but couldn't find it, so I just wrote it myself. I post it on this platform in the hope of having fun with everyone. In addition, I saw everyone's comments. There were some mistakes in writing. I was too careless and didn't check clearly. I'm sorry if it affected everyone's perception. I will definitely change what I can. There are many shortcomings, so I won't give examples one by one [laughing] I hope I can bring you better stories in the future

The more I want to cry later ... Sigh. It doesn't matter if it's a dual personality or a dark side. There will always be times when I wake up later. Faintly visible. In the past, he would look at the unicorns he had the same problem with and give them gentle names, and treat his friends, teachers, and seniors with great warmth. A little cowardly and very delicate. Since that year, Obscurus has seemed to have died in that year. What woke up was a strong possessive desire for his brother. He is crazy and has no three views. He doesn't know how to think about the consequences of making a Horcrux for his brother, and what will happen if his brother kills those people. He just listens to his words, but when he has reason later, he will be confused and not listen to his brother's words. The Tom of this book is also the same. The previous Tom would comfort his only brother, saying that his albinism was moonlight, wiping away his tears and hugging him when he was confused. Later, because of the Horcrux, he became delirious, punished him, and used the heartbreaking thing that turned him into an Obscurus that year, and then regretted it. To be honest, I think they both died that year, I really want to cry [cry]

What do you say? This book has a lot of soul, and the settings in it are very touching and have a bit of an orthopedic feel, but I am not sure yet. I hope you can continue writing. Come on, the author is very optimistic about your work.

As the half-brother of Tom Riddle, who is one year younger than his father, he unexpectedly falls in love with his older brother and becomes dependent on him. In the later period, the second personality, also known as the sub-personality, dominates and kills people like crazy, but the main personality flashes from time to time. I don't know when the author wrote the third volume and let the main personality regain consciousness. However, the protagonist has slowly regained consciousness and is already the front end of Be. Are he and Tom going to fall in love and kill each other?

Super Invincible loves the interaction between Eric and Tom! ! ! ! ! ! ! Later, Eric and Professor Dumbledore collaborated, which was a bit of a pity... From the current point of view, I think Tom's layout can be said to be just a few steps away from firmly controlling the wizarding world. I think even if Lao Fu loses later, as long as there is a glimmer of hope, he will probably regain his strength. If Tom finds out about Eric and Dumbledore's collaboration, I think he might... Anyway, I think it might be a bit cruel later on, I don't know why [I'm about to cry] All in all, it's super invincible and beautiful in big letters! ! ! I finished reading it in one day! ! [Blow a kiss]] It won't work, it won't work, although I still have one piece left to finish, but it's true! ! ! ! ! I really can't help but leave a big comment! ! ! ! (*'▽'*)♪ Damn, your words are so sweet to my heart! ! ! ! ! ! ! Dark crawling...(/^-^(^ ^*)/ The last few pictures are so sweet that my teeth almost fall out! ! ! ! ! ! ! Tom and Eric's life is simply plain yet sweet! ! So touching! ! ! (ﾉωﾉ) The writing is really great! ! ! ! ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Super good! ! ! True orthopedic warning [love] The protagonist is cute, optimistic and cheerful in the early stage, but his possessiveness soars in the mid-term. Tom is not disfigured yet, and he is very doting on the protagonist [Love] In short, the protagonist and Tom are two people who possess each other.

The content is very exciting, the protagonist is a brother-in-law to Lao Fu, highly recommended! Also, the author often interacts with everyone, but there may be very few comments.

It's quite profound, but what's more poignant is Eric's feelings for Voldemort. It's a bit like the love in a family and a bit orthopedic. It feels like two kinds of desire and persistence for these two different kinds of love. Eric believes that love is possession, which is actually quite consistent with his origins in the Gaunt family. The description is also great, and it won't be too shocking for everyone. And I really like the capitalized Barty. However, when I saw Abu pass away, I still felt confused for a moment, how fast time passed. Looking forward to the update

It's super interesting to see Eric's dependence on Tom in the early stage, and his happiness after knowing that he and Tom are brothers (they are the only relatives of both parties) and loneliness (they can't be together openly), but in the middle and later stages, Eric loves Tom very much, and even cooperates with Dumbledore to keep his brother by his side. They are also very ambiguous when Tom has no nose! The feeling of letters, especially when Eric was a professor! When Lance was little, he was a little anxious at first, but then it was very sweet to confirm the relationship, but then there was a little conflict, but it was only a few lines, and in the end it was he!

It's so beautiful, the subject matter is very novel and the writing is very delicate. Why didn't I see it earlier? [Crashing][Eyes glowing] The author quickly told me that the ending would not be [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Please [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Is it the top of the year or the bottom of the year? I personally stand on the top of the year and want to see Riddle fuck Eric [sending my heart]

I finally finished watching it in 105 days. I don't know what to say. At first I was attracted by the setting of Eric with white hair and red eyes. Later, I was attracted by Eric's character, from a kind-hearted little cake to a big brother. In the later stage, I felt a little crazy, and the ending was more open-ended. I like the description of the early timeline in the book, and the characters are also very full. Dumbledore was a kind and kind headmaster of Hogwarts in the past, but later he was able to abandon his personal interests for the benefit of everyone. After all, he was the White Devil. If he was just kind-hearted, there would be no peace in the wizarding world. Bella is the villain who impressed me the most after reading this book. She will do anything for her own interests, but sometimes she seems to be unable to see the situation clearly and does not understand "movement and emotion", so she was punished several times by Tom. Little Barty is really cute, and Draco is timid but caring about his friends... Although there are some shortcomings, I still like this work very much, and I hope the author will open up new holes! [Laughing] Question: When will the author publish a new book?

Ever since I saw the protagonist's drastic change in temperament, I suddenly felt a little depressed. I felt that he had become exactly the same as Tom. I don't know why I was really sad. From the moment I opened this book, what attracted me was the protagonist's character and personality charm. Although the author's writing is vague, it does not affect my appreciation of him. I can only say that I feel very sad now. I really don't want him to become like this. Please, can the author change it back? [Cry][cry]

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Who can understand how beautiful it is... I couldn't help but want to comment after seeing it halfway, it's really beautiful! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry][love][love][love] It's over, I'm so reluctant to let go [cry][cry][cry]

I have to say, the writing is superb! The content is also very, very interesting. Two chapters a day are not enough to read, and the writing is so stuck that it makes me feel itchy. Love the interaction between Tom and Eric, indescribable and short on vocabulary. I quite like watching torture [face covering] They are quite suitable for torture. Because I like it, I'm watching it on both accounts. Again, it's really super, super, super good-looking! Never give up books! Then I wish the author's literary talents will get better and better! Books are becoming more and more popular! Come on [send heart] To be honest, I had some books that I liked very much before, but I would abandon them if they were not good, but! The author is yours! I! I will absolutely never give up! What you wrote before was good, and it's good now. I believe in your writing. Come on! Work hard to write every article, and I look forward to every article from you. I love your readers [laughs]

Your writing is as precious as gold, and each article is a treasure. Let us immerse ourselves in the ocean of your talent and wisdom. Your writing is as precious as gold, and each article is a treasure. Let us immerse ourselves in the ocean of your talent and wisdom. Your words are full of profound connotations, full of wisdom and unique insights, which is awe-inspiring. You are so charming. Not only are you beautiful in appearance, but your inner wisdom and emotional intelligence are even more amazing. Your words are like a clear spring, crystal clear, moisturizing people's hearts and making them feel comfortable and peaceful. So please keep updating! Love you!

Hee hee hee hee hee it's fun Harry Potter Awakening is so fun Harry Potter Awakens is dead (panic) (turns off the screen of the phone) (looks around) I don't play Harry Potter Awakening (panickly hides the phone behind his back) (pretending to be calm) (trying to explain) (falls) (gets up in embarrassment) (falls again) (angry) (grabs your pants) (panic) I don't play Harry Potter Awakening, please don't despise me, please Please don't stop playing with me (panic) I... I really don't play Harry Potter: Awakening (eyes dart around) (horrified) (crying) (rolling on the ground) (thinking of the phone behind me) (throwing the phone away) I... My phone is for playing Baby Bus and I really don't play Harry Potter: Awakening... (Crazy) (jumps away) (screaming) Don't ask anymore, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... I'm really easy to die! ! (Escape in darkness)

The protagonist and Riddle are possessive and controlling, and neither understands love very well. Both of them are in love with each other, and they have feelings for each other, so they decisively follow up [laughter]

The characters' emotional descriptions are delicate, the style is unique, and the plot is fast, making people unable to put it down. Disadvantages: Too little, not enough to watch [crying].

Looks good😁Actually, I don't mind orthopedics⊙ω⊙

Nice! ! The author must not let the brothers turn against each other! Both of you need to send your heart to your wife well [please update]

It's really super invincible and beautiful. It's really beautiful. It makes me feel uncomfortable all over. Another reminder, the author will update it soon! ! ! ! ! If I don't look at it for a day, I feel uncomfortable all over! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

I really want to see how Tom finally discovers Eric's betrayal. Come on, author [Love]

This novel unfolds in the setting of two male protagonists, depicting a unique and profound brotherhood. The relationship between Eric and his half-brother is complicated and full of entanglements. Through delicate brushstrokes, the author shows Eric's inner changes. From his initial warm dependence on his brother, to his later unwillingness, and then to his willingness to make sacrifices for his brother's happiness, the character is portrayed in a very three-dimensional way. The story has ups and downs, and the discussion about love and growth is thought-provoking. It is a masterpiece of HP fan fiction worth reading.

It's really good-looking. It's the first time I've seen this kind of protagonist's character. It really struck a chord with me. The writing style is very good. The interaction between the protagonist and Tom is really touching. I urge you to update it [please update]

It's really good to watch, especially Eric's character in the early stages really struck a chord with me! ! ! Maybe it's my own fault. I was a little uncomfortable with Eric's personality change later [crying] [crying] [crying] But it's really good-looking.

The plot of the whole film is very coherent, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. This really made me want to keep watching. Later, because of the appearance of Lance, I wanted to tear off this "film cloth" even more, not to let me know the truth, but to let them know the truth. The reversal of the plot has not yet begun, so I will continue to follow it, and I thank you for every update.

It's really amazing, love it so much! Crazy pick between the possessive yandere protagonist and the Dark Lord! So annoying! I recommend more sugar! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Admiration]

It's a rare subject matter, but it's written fairly smoothly, so I'd like to give it five stars for encouragement. There are many small errors in the settings, but they will not affect the reading experience too much. The author also mentioned them in the comment area. It's just that the connection and excessive feeling between personality changes is a bit unclear and a bit abrupt. I still like the Eric from the beginning