Passers-By's Survival Rules for Cultivating Immortals

In my personal opinion, it is a good novel. It can be seen that the author wants to write about the stability of cultivating immortals and cultivating Taoism. But there are some flaws, such as too many protagonist names in the article, the description of realm combat power is slightly vague, the map crosses domains too quickly, etc... Here are some of my suggestions 1. Slowly fill in the foreshadowing laid out in the previous article 2. Describe the supporting characters in a smart and awake manner so as to echo the subsequent emotional line. 3. If the protagonist's name appears too much, try to change it to subject, predicate, object, etc. 4. Describe the details of the combat power of each realm and improve the protagonist's combat power. 5. The changes in the protagonist's realm correspond to the growth of his state of mind, allowing him to correspond to the foreshadowing of his emotional line. Secondly, what I want to say to the author, come on! I'm very optimistic about you, don't worry about other people's ridicule, you are very powerful. ——Five stars to the author

The introduction is a bit deceiving. It is a world in my imagination. It is very warm. Has the protagonist gone back to the past? It is plain yet contains mystery and foreshadowing, which always makes people want to read more. It is a very good book, don't be a eunuch [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's just that there are too many "Li Qianming". I'm wondering, should it be "your signature or my signature"?

Personal opinion, although it is a relatively ideal world of cultivating immortals. But it is rare to have flesh and blood and emotions. Of course, many people who like the real and cruel world of immortality may have different opinions. But to me, each author's world of immortality is different, and if you want to read it, you have to accept these different worlds.

It's not the armor of the beginning. The armor of Yama transforms into a sleeping nest.

A little flawed, but a very innovative novel

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

I liked it at first.

It's to my liking, come on

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It looks good, but the front part is a bit boring.

I just like this kind of careful and low-key development

It's pretty good to be ordinary, but it seems like there are a lot of holes that haven't been filled at the moment.

A true cultivator of immortality and farming. The protagonist has a clear self-positioning and no big goals. A time traveler without a golden finger will most likely end up like this [laughing]

As long as you put your mind to it and go in and take a look, I think it looks pretty good.

Not bad. I really like this type of protagonist. The story is also good.

If you like the leisurely life of cultivating immortals, you can take a look at Tao Yuanming's secluded pastoral life.

This is my first time reading a novel, it's so well written [I almost cried]

The story written is very attractive! There is a mellow and long-lasting feeling! Fascinating

The narrative of this book is relatively detailed, and it feels like Robinson Crusoe in the early stages [laughing]

Not bad, normal