The Campus Belle Weeps, Having Lost the Person She Loved Most

It is considered good among novels of the same type, and even the ones that should be abused are abused. Compared with the second female protagonist in novels of the same type, the mental calculation is reasonable and well-founded, but it is still a bit awkward. I clearly liked the male protagonist so much before, but I fell in love with a substitute just because of a substitute. If the male protagonist is gone, it can be explained, but the problem is that the male protagonist is still good, how could he fall in love with a low-matching character. . . Alas, I am not saying this to complain about the logic of the article, because the logic of this type of novel does not make sense, but I just feel very sad, because the previous story between Xia Lingxue and the male protagonist was too sweet, so it will be painful later. At the end of the if line, we are reborn and together with the male protagonist. I have to add a dream about waking up. I think this is definitely a failure. Xia Lingxue is not that outrageous compared to the same type of female lead who changed her mind. Even though she was in a sequel and couldn't give a good ending, she was a bit cruel for the sake of torture. The problem is that she has already been tortured enough in the beginning, but she just sweetened the ending and then tortured her again. It is really superfluous. Overall, it's not bad. The current score is about 8.5, Which I think is a reasonable score. If it weren't for the stabbing at the end of the extra chapter, I would definitely give it five stars. One star would be deducted right there.

I just want a single heroine, well-written, good-looking, and I love watching it!

It feels pretty good, but the level of abuse is not deep enough. I give it five stars. Come on, the author.

The plot is actually quite awesome. If you can bear the grievance and read it from beginning to end, you will find that the author actually prefers Xia. After all, she is described as a truly pitiful person. She went crazy after the death of the protagonist in the previous life. However, based on the subsequent cleansing, it actually makes sense why she was brainwashed by the male Green Tea, because everyone around her was playing tricks. She withstood the situation. If you like this kind of tone, this book is very well written.

I took a rough look at it. Among them, Huang Shunda made me feel very good. Although his confession failed, he was still elegant. This is what a boy should be like. It is not as brainless as in other novels. It shows that the author carefully created the character and made it flesh and blood.

After reading the first 20 chapters, I feel that there is not enough foreshadowing and the characters are not fleshed out enough, which makes it look sad but not sweet. However, overall I can see the author's thoughts and ideas, which are more in line with my personal perception. I give it five stars as encouragement and hope that I can continue to write without losing my original intention.

A very good work, without system or imitation. The most important thing is that it is a novella. This is also the first time in my history that I hope that the author's label of having a single female protagonist is false. The only regret is that it was a little too forceful when I first tried to clean up Xia Lingxue. It would be better if I added a few more chapters to detail and rationally design Xia Lingxue's difficulties. I hope the author can keep his water bottle, refer to readers' effective suggestions, and create better works. Also,,,, it's so fucking awesome😢😢😢

The casting of the characters is very three-dimensional, and the logic of the emotional lines is very reasonable. There are no sudden insertions or sudden turns away. Everything happens without the foreshadowing of a bloody event. In silence, you realize that the two people at the beginning have gone far away. It is a very realistic writing technique. I look forward to the author's new work.

How should I put it, let me give the author some pertinent suggestions. First of all, it seems that this work is based on the love line between the protagonist and Yaoyao, with Xia being abused as the auxiliary line. But in fact, the most core and most attractive thing is Xia's abuse line. This requires the author to grasp the "degree" well. I have seen many similar types before. I think a better way to deal with it is not to end this line hastily. It is best to give Xia's "abuse" points from time to time. Then, never forget the core point of love stories, don't step on "thunder", Xia's line is always to assist in raising the level, this is based on the fact that Yaoyao line is completely free of thunder, don't touch the line Finally, come on.

This was supposed to be a single female protagonist. I had seen similar themes before, but in the end I was forgiven and turned into a harem 🤦