校花痛哭，她弄丢了自己最爱的人

It is considered good among novels of the same type, and even the ones that should be abused are abused. Compared with the second female protagonist in novels of the same type, the mental calculation is reasonable and well-founded, but it is still a bit awkward. I clearly liked the male protagonist so much before, but I fell in love with a substitute just because of a substitute. If the male protagonist is gone, it can be explained, but the problem is that the male protagonist is still good, how could he fall in love with a low-matching character. . . Alas, I am not saying this to complain about the logic of the article, because the logic of this type of novel does not make sense, but I just feel very sad, because the previous story between Xia Lingxue and the male protagonist was too sweet, so it will be painful later. At the end of the if line, we are reborn and together with the male protagonist. I have to add a dream about waking up. I think this is definitely a failure. Xia Lingxue is not that outrageous compared to the same type of female lead who changed her mind. Even though she was in a sequel and couldn't give a good ending, she was a bit cruel for the sake of torture. The problem is that she has already been tortured enough in the beginning, but she just sweetened the ending and then tortured her again. It is really superfluous. Overall, it's not bad. The current score is about 8.5, Which I think is a reasonable score. If it weren't for the stabbing at the end of the extra chapter, I would definitely give it five stars. One star would be deducted right there.

I just want a single heroine, well-written, good-looking, and I love watching it!

It feels pretty good, but the level of abuse is not deep enough. I give it five stars. Come on, the author.

After reading the first 20 chapters, I feel that there is not enough foreshadowing and the characters are not fleshed out enough, which makes it look sad but not sweet. However, overall I can see the author's thoughts and ideas, which are more in line with my personal perception. I give it five stars as encouragement and hope that I can continue to write without losing my original intention.

I took a rough look at it. Among them, Huang Shunda made me feel very good. Although his confession failed, he was still elegant. This is what a boy should be like. It is not as brainless as in other novels. It shows that the author carefully created the character and made it flesh and blood.

The plot is actually quite awesome. If you can bear the grievance and read it from beginning to end, you will find that the author actually prefers Xia. After all, she is described as a truly pitiful person. She went crazy after the death of the protagonist in the previous life. However, based on the subsequent cleansing, it actually makes sense why she was brainwashed by the male Green Tea, because everyone around her was playing tricks. She withstood the situation. If you like this kind of tone, this book is very well written.

The casting of the characters is very three-dimensional, and the logic of the emotional lines is very reasonable. There are no sudden insertions or sudden turns away. Everything happens without the foreshadowing of a bloody event. In silence, you realize that the two people at the beginning have gone far away. It is a very realistic writing technique. I look forward to the author's new work.

How should I put it, let me give the author some pertinent suggestions. First of all, it seems that this work is based on the love line between the protagonist and Yaoyao, with Xia being abused as the auxiliary line. But in fact, the most core and most attractive thing is Xia's abuse line. This requires the author to grasp the "degree" well. I have seen many similar types before. I think a better way to deal with it is not to end this line hastily. It is best to give Xia's "abuse" points from time to time. Then, never forget the core point of love stories, don't step on "thunder", Xia's line is always to assist in raising the level, this is based on the fact that Yaoyao line is completely free of thunder, don't touch the line Finally, come on.

This was supposed to be a single female protagonist. I had seen similar themes before, but in the end I was forgiven and turned into a harem [facepalm]

After reading this book, I found that I don't want to read the sweet and refreshing articles before. The other sweet articles I read can be said to be very interesting, but relatively lacking in meaning (of course there are also meaningful novels). This book can be said to be very meaningful. The feelings and family of the male protagonist, as well as the female protagonist's character are very fully portrayed, and the second female protagonist's character is well portrayed. The writing is a little imperfect but just right. Although there are only more than a hundred chapters, it is written in an orderly manner and has rich content. The key points are very meaningful and can move the readers after reading it. When I was about to finish the book, the first thing I thought of was a song, which is Jay Chou's The World Is Not Ending. This novel left me with a deep feeling, and I may not be able to get out of it for a while.

The three views are very upright. Although some plots are clichéd, the character creation is very vivid.

Relatively speaking, it's okay. The switch between male and female protagonists is also reasonable. What about the logic of Xia's behavior? Whitewashing is acceptable to me. It will be more interesting if the mental state develops and she becomes a yandere. However, I prefer stories with multiple female protagonists. It depends on how the author arranges it.

Wow, Xia's ending is really hard to wrap your head around! Write her happy ending, if line is good, and what happened before Xia was reborn, why she went crazy, and what happened after she went crazy, I want to see it [crying][crying][crying]

The plot is good and I like to read it, but the author's writing style needs to be improved. Many plots and details are not handled very well, and it looks a bit jumpy. Secondly, the portrayal of the characters is not very good, the emotional collision of the characters, and the contradictions between the characters. The author can think about it again. Next, although it is a daily article, it can be written with a little more ups and downs in daily life, so that readers will like it more. The author can look at the prose written by Shen Congwen and the love letters written by some essayists to find out the feelings and refine it, so that the author can write the plot better [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] The best character in this book is Xia Lingxue. Why, after reading the ending, I know that Xia Lingxue is a tragic character. Her life experience, ending, and beginning are all tragic. Tragic characters often have a literary flavor, which makes the characters more infectious. I hope the author can write better works.

I've read Chapter 30 so far, and I feel it's okay. The characters in it are pretty good. Except for the guy named Xia and the green tea guy, everyone else is normal.

The beginning was very sweet, but a bit bland, but the final scene of Huang Liang Yimeng surprised me. I haven't seen a book with this kind of thinking in 🍅 for a long time. The book is a good food, but I was really disappointed when I saw Xia's ending at the end. I hope there will be another Xia episode to give a better ending. The author's writing is very good, and there are no regrets that are common in writing.

How can I put it this way, the characters and emotions are well described. I would give it a 9 out of 10. That score is not only a regret in the novel, but also a regret in our reality. I hope everyone can meet the person who belongs to them and start school every day.

Good! Tmd! Sweet! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Really, really, I am so sweet

I think this book is worth reading. Not very brainless. Both the protagonist and heroine have IQs. And. Both parties are aware of the other's rebirth. Not awkward either. Very suitable for normal people to watch.

The author's writing style is very good, and the writing is beautiful. It satisfied all my imagination. However, some of the logic is not smooth and some places are not consistent with reality. It can be seen at a glance that it is fantasy. It also satisfied all the fantasies of my youth. Therefore, the rating of four stars or above is only my personal opinion. However, there are many words in it that made me feel the same way, so I revised the review. However, illusion is illusion after all. Just read it here. I won't read the rest.

The best part of the regret article is that the reason why the core crematorium staff changed their minds is very clear and really forgivable. I don't blame her for a person who lives in The Truman Show to be plotted like this. After all, they were all plotted in this way, and it was just a slight wandering rather than a complete change of heart. To be honest, it's okay for her to value love and justice.

It's really good, the writing style is very strong, the sense of substitution is strong, and the writing is delicate. However, let's make a bold guess. The author probably had a very good female friend since childhood, but they didn't get together anymore 😏The two consecutive books are in a similar style, and there are emotional entanglements. It is probably the kind of friendship, the lover is not satisfied, or even the kind of secret love that has not been confessed, and later got a daughter-in-law when he got older. 😏The work is a bit short, which is good. It has been a long time since I read a novel seriously in one sitting.

I became addicted to reading it in the middle of the night. This book gave me a lot of feelings in addition to emotions. In addition to love, there is also friendship and family affection. When I was a child, Xiao Chen had a fight with Grandma Chen, which reminded me of my past self. I also had fights with my mother and sister, and even threatened to "sever ties" with my sister. As I grew up, I understood it, but as I once read in a book, "Every quarrel is like driving a nail into a board. Even if you can pull it out, the traces it leaves cannot be restored." Maybe we can only slowly make up for it in the rest of our lives, always reminding us that we should cherish our love, friendship, and family affection more.

I really highly recommend this book. It's a little bit sharp, but very sweet, and the plot is very touching. The characters are well created, especially Xia Lianxue. Anyway, it's just good to read.

Looks good, drives low and goes high After various things are gradually improved, it looks better and better. All things have closed loops. This book "Rebirth" is also interesting to write, but it's a bit too short. I just need to write more than 200 pictures. The second female lead becomes more and more handsome after she turns black. Brother Huang is not just a clown to set off the male lead, he is also handsome. The if line is also well written

The writing is delicate, the characters are distinct, the plot is ups and downs, the emotional line is super sweet, there are tears and laughter, the only shortcoming is that it is too short, the emotional line of Huang's brother and sister is not fully explained, and the final result of the male protagonist's roommate and the female protagonist's roommate is not lost. Overall, 5 stars are not lost.

A good book, the plot is neither long nor protracted, and the characters are flesh-and-blood. The so-called school beauties are not slapped in the face like most rebirth books. The male protagonist disappears after being reborn for a while. I like the characters in it. The concept of rebirth is somewhat new, but the plot is a bit cliche, but it is still an excellent work.

I can read it, and I think it's pretty good. Although there are a lot of bloody parts, it doesn't affect the overall ending. The beginning and end of the story also form a closed loop. I just didn't read a little bit, because this type of book may not be suitable for me, but as an outsider, it's not completely brainless, so I'll just make do with it.

The book is really nice Don't want a harem

Super sweet and beautiful, the author loves you so much, please add more soon! When the time comes, the rewards will generate electricity for love! [Sending Hearts]