Hello, Miss!

When the ice and snow melt, burying the glory of the past, only the desolate loneliness remains; when the wind blows away the former glory, only the melancholy sighs in the wind are left, echoing in the sky. The candlelight of the past has passed away, and now only the lingering smoke is left, dancing lonely in the cold night; the silver clothes of the past have been broken, and now only the broken pieces blown by the wind are left, ringing sadly in the night sky. The prosperous age will eventually pass away, leaving only a touch of dim sadness; pride will never be able to withstand the years, and will eventually turn into a sighing wind.

Try to unify the person pronouns as much as possible. Don't use first person. It really doesn't look good. Just stick to third person. If your writing skills are not good enough and you can't support the first person perspective, it will be easy to overturn 🤦. This is a piece of advice. I have read more than a dozen first person books and basically all of them sucked.

The story is simple, the writing is excellent, and there is almost no description of women's clothing, women's bodies, and women's degeneration. The heroine is too silly and sweet. According to the setting, the heroine has been a beggar. The rules of the world of human relationships and cannibalism should be clearer. It is very unrealistic for the heroine to only know how to eat and play when she arrives at her new home. The supporting characters are all well-cast, and the writing is on point, but it's just too bland, with no main plot, and it's a rather boring book. The writing is worth collecting.

Although the previous plot before the adoption is inexplicable, the heroine's integration into the new environment is surprisingly easy, and the subsequent plot is also a bit Mary Sue. But it's still pretty good, even if some parts seem inexplicable, overall it's worth a visit.

The first book review is mine

I was shocked when I first saw this title. I thought that a novel I read last year was exactly the same as this one. Then I took a look at the content. It was 10 or even 9 points similar, so I looked at the author's homepage. . .

The writing is very good, the writing style is good, and the content makes people want to read it.

Damn, I'm single, should I get married?

I really like rescue books

Another good book