The First Book of Lu Xian Tang

The title of the book was changed to "Langya Zhiwang Qianqiu"

The book is okay, the writing is good, but can the author change the title of the book, for example, change it to "Starting from Nirvana in Fire", etc. I have encountered this book several times, but was dissuaded by the title, and then I read it, and there are too few updates. As time goes by, it will gradually get better. It is a good book, come on, author

This is the first time I've seen a different kind of fan fiction, and it's very well written. Please update.

Very interesting Nirvana in Fire time travel series

The writing is good, and it suits my taste. It's not like some books that always kill people, abuse the protagonist and steal the opportunity of the protagonist. Although this one is slightly exaggerated in King Yu's martial arts talent, the writing is generally in line with the original setting. I like it 👍👍👍

I am the protagonist, I really like this fanfic changed the misery

There is very little written about political intrigue in the book, and even less about the central character Mei Changsu, but it gives King Yu an ending without regrets. In fact, this character's ability and IQ are both online, but he is too obsessed with pursuing power and profit, and has no righteousness in the world. This is also related to the selfish and balanced guidance of Emperor Liang. If it is for readers who have difficulty in getting over Yu Wang's feelings, it is still quite good.

The first description is very good, but the second part is a bit rushed.

Well written, this is my first time reading a Nirvana in Fire fan fiction.

The plot is meticulous and the logic is clear. It's been a long time since I've seen a good Langya Bang fanfic.

There is an original story, which is very good

Well written and well written

Author of Ganba De

Okay, just a bit fast

Nice writing, keep it up＾0＾~

Not bad, worth a look

Not bad. The rhythm is average.

Well, I prefer this type of book

If a time traveler doesn't have a career, he must at least have a lot of beauties to live his life in vain.

This kind of Yuwang is very good, and it also makes up for the Hua tribe.

Let's just take a look and kill some time.

Everyone is doing well, and everyone has their own way out to make up for their regrets. I love fanfics so much, and I also like everyone who writes fanfics.

It's well written, but it's a pity that it's too short.

Although it's a little short, it's still good. I still like this ending. Evil will be rewarded, and good will end well!

Personally, I really like this kind of villain who subdues the protagonist. He has brains, loyalty, and a sense of the overall situation.

It's very interesting. I was dissuaded by low scores before and almost missed this book.

The plot is full of ups and downs and touching. [You taste it carefully] [Learn]

It's well written, exciting and there's still room for improvement! I hope the author can work hard...

Not bad, quite novel, some places are well written, you can take a look

Jinwu Shuiyue borrowed from the Spiral Nine Shadows. The main plot of the original work. As for the fighting part, it is not the focus. The original story itself is not rich enough. It is not easy for the author to change it like this. Support