King: Kidnapping Doria at the Beginning

You readers, please stop messing around in the book review section! If you have any suggestions or questions, just comment them to me at the end of the chapter or chapter. The author can't blindly see them. If it works, the author will take action. Don't give me low scores every time. First of all, I can't see your score in the book review area, and it won't be displayed in my backend. Secondly, low-scoring comments really affect the author's mentality. The author is almost exhausted because of love. The little money I make from writing novels is not as much as what I earn from writing bricks...

A pretty good fanfic of The King. What's rare is that it was written according to the orthodox king's background. Friends who are interested in the background story of the King can give it a try.

It's very beautiful, and the structure is clear. As long as it's reasonable, don't let me throw my brain away.

Personal advice, I'm afraid of being sprayed. Highly recommended to watch. Bookworm for 5 years The emotional scenes in the first big picture should be shorter. The most interesting thing about this novel that attracts me is not the emotional scenes, but the interesting and huge world view and power system. It is very suitable for people who have never seen the world view of The King. It doesn't matter if the woman accepts it or not, but don't be too abrupt. And I suspect that having a bunch of women together might turn off a lot of people, unless it's an important plot point. Try not to include daily life, or don't make it too long. Unless the plot requires it, just keep the plot continuous and it will look interesting. In summary, what attracts me is the big world view and the foreshadowing is really good, but the white cat is a bit inexplicable, but I can't deny that it's not good, because I just caught this. There are currently five power systems, no spoilers. There are also emotional scenes, which are a bit outrageous. In addition, three words A fake masterpiece, why not? ? , Because it's not finished yet and has unlimited potential. (I was afraid that the author was hungry, so I went to the big account to give him some points)

The book is very good, but the shortcoming is that it is acceptable to have multiple heroines as long as the emotional lines are well written, as long as there is too much poison. Also, let me ask, how many heroines the author plans to have, I hope it will be two or three, not too many, please, please [blowing kiss]

Among the Wangzhe novels I have read, this one can be said to be the best. The characters and emotions are well portrayed. I hope it can be updated more. It is simply not enough. Come on, author, hold on! ! Nice

Great author, I'm looking forward to this book. I think your writing is very good, but I would rather like the protagonist to have the form of a demon like the one in Silver Aria. The most important thing is to have armor. He's handsome.

It really feels good, and Yihun feels like a new system.

The title sets up suspense and stimulates readers' interest in reading and thinking. The content is interesting, but the author does not work hard to code. Each opening plays a role in leading to the following and paving the way for the following. He also uses the technique of interjection to enrich the content of the article, making the article ups and downs, fascinating, and enriching the character and characteristics of the protagonist. It also uses metaphors and personification rhetorical techniques to make the article vivid. The ending plays the finishing touch and sublimates the main idea. The author loves the card but has few words, and the author is very good. It is friendly and will answer readers' questions. The overall content of the article is humorous and very attractive. However, the author does not update it well. The content of the article is very good, but it often enters the dark room. It should not be the author's problem. This novel is biased towards the harem and women. There are many protagonists, and the male protagonist is a straight man. The author also added some new characters to make the article compact and easier to write down the word count. For me, this novel is like a surging river, and it is out of control. Generally speaking, in addition to the author's ability to write down the word count, enter the small dark room. , Poor writing, few words (my sister-in-law is too pitiful, the author is too short, you can understand it by yourself), other than that the author has written very well.

Highly recommended, everything I want to see is here [laughs]

I like this book very much and hope the author can keep updating it. I also wish the author can write better books. I will keep cheering for you. The author keeps working hard. 🤗👍👍

It's okay. Among so many fan novels about this Tomato, it's still a very good one. I've read about 150 chapters. So far, the main line is clear, the storyline is reasonable, and the combat power level is not broken. It's acceptable. I really don't know how this reading time is calculated.

It's okay, the structure is relatively clear, don't write randomly later, just respect the original plot! !

Okay, it's pretty good among the King fanfics.

It's quite good. If you are short on books, you can check it out, but I can't understand it. When did Ying He Shao Si Yuan be released? I can understand Jing, after all, my childhood playmate, and Xiao Man can also understand love at first sight, but I really don't understand the relationship between Ying and Shao Si, but it's quite good-looking, a little bit unreadable, and I finished it in just two days. I'm looking forward to the author's next book.

The best King fanfic, the author must keep updating, author, come on↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗↖(^ω^)↗

Go read other Wangzhe novels. I think this one is the best. I have read at least a dozen Wangzhe novels. The first is this novel. The second is a king-themed system. The system is Yuanshen. I also ask all book friends to help me find the heroine, Gongsunli.

I have read a very good Wangzhe novel so far. Why is the rating so low? [What]

The narrative in The King is very good.

After reading it, it was actually quite good, but the author also said that he was often blocked, which made the data ugly, so he didn't want to write it. So the book ended suddenly and casually, but in fact the author's writing style is very good.

It's quite interesting. It's the author. Can you write about Shao Si Yuan? I want to see it and it makes my heart itch

It's rare to see this kind of King fan fiction that combines the King's world view, and the story line is also very clear, which is much better than that kind of mindless and refreshing novel.

I think this is the best book among the King fanfics. Each hero has his own story. I hope the author will write better and better.

Very restorative, the type I like

The content is substantial, the structure is clear, and the author's writing style is excellent. It satisfies all my fantasies about the world of kings. This book is the best among all the books written in the world of kings [laughs] As the plot progresses, the protagonist will gradually have many abilities, and the combat power in this book is clearly divided. At least until now, there has been no collapse in combat power. The author also writes very delicately in the emotional drama. The only drawback is that the author updates too slowly [making faces]

Finally found the novel of Glory of Kings [crying]

I usually don't read this kind of book, but this book is quite good, but it just feels a bit bland. Maybe it's not like the world destruction, or the confrontation between the good and the bad. The plot feels like it's about fighting monsters, upgrading, entering dungeons, and falling in love. Moreover, the protagonist seems a bit immature after more than 100 chapters, but the character is good, and the plot is not too bad. After all, it is free, so you can just read some.

The subject matter is relatively new and the author is quite rigorous in writing. It's a pretty good book. I'm really happy to see more and more reminders. There were more than 100 at the beginning and now there are 400. More people have seen this work. I hope the author will keep writing [Sending Hearts]

Highly recommend this high-quality King fan novel

Okay, the plot progress is moderate and the characters are okay. There are just too many female protagonists, but it doesn't matter. There are too many female protagonists anyway.