Honor of Kings: Kidnapping Doria from the Start

You readers, please stop messing around in the book review section! If you have any suggestions or questions, just comment them to me at the end of the chapter or chapter. The author can't blindly see them. If it works, the author will take action. Don't give me low scores every time. First of all, I can't see your score in the book review area, and it won't be displayed in my backend. Secondly, low-scoring comments really affect the author's mentality. The author is almost exhausted because of love. The little money I make from writing novels is not as much as what I earn from writing bricks...

A pretty good fanfic of The King. What's rare is that it was written according to the orthodox king's background. Friends who are interested in the background story of the King can give it a try.

It's very beautiful, and the structure is clear. As long as it's reasonable, don't let me throw my brain away.

Personal advice, I'm afraid of being sprayed. Highly recommended to watch. Bookworm for 5 years The emotional scenes in the first big picture should be shorter. The most interesting thing about this novel that attracts me is not the emotional scenes, but the interesting and huge world view and power system. It is very suitable for people who have never seen the world view of The King. It doesn't matter if the woman accepts it or not, but don't be too abrupt. And I suspect that having a bunch of women together might turn off a lot of people, unless it's an important plot point. Try not to include daily life, or don't make it too long. Unless the plot requires it, just keep the plot continuous and it will look interesting. In summary, what attracts me is the big world view and the foreshadowing is really good, but the white cat is a bit inexplicable, but I can't deny that it's not good, because I just caught this. There are currently five power systems, no spoilers. There are also emotional scenes, which are a bit outrageous. In addition, three words A fake masterpiece, why not? ? , Because it's not finished yet and has unlimited potential. (I was afraid that the author was hungry, so I went to the big account to give him some points)

The book is very good, but the shortcoming is that it is acceptable to have multiple heroines as long as the emotional lines are well written, as long as there is too much poison. Also, let me ask, how many heroines the author plans to have, I hope it will be two or three, not too many, please, please [blowing kiss]

Great author, I'm looking forward to this book. I think your writing is very good, but I would rather like the protagonist to have the form of a demon like the one in Silver Aria. The most important thing is to have armor. He's handsome.

Among the Wangzhe novels I have read, this one can be said to be the best. The characters and emotions are well portrayed. I hope it can be updated more. It is simply not enough. Come on, author, hold on! ! Nice

The title sets up suspense and stimulates readers' interest in reading and thinking. The content is interesting, but the author does not work hard to code. Each opening plays a role in leading to the following and paving the way for the following. He also uses the technique of interjection to enrich the content of the article, making the article ups and downs, fascinating, and enriching the character and characteristics of the protagonist. It also uses metaphors and personification rhetorical techniques to make the article vivid. The ending plays the finishing touch and sublimates the main idea. The author loves the card but has few words, and the author is very good. It is friendly and will answer readers' questions. The overall content of the article is humorous and very attractive. However, the author does not update it well. The content of the article is very good, but it often enters the dark room. It should not be the author's problem. This novel is biased towards the harem and women. There are many protagonists, and the male protagonist is a straight man. The author also added some new characters to make the article compact and easier to write down the word count. For me, this novel is like a surging river, and it is out of control. Generally speaking, in addition to the author's ability to write down the word count, enter the small dark room. , Poor writing, few words (my sister-in-law is too pitiful, the author is too short, you can understand it by yourself), other than that the author has written very well.

It really feels good, and Yihun feels like a new system.

It's okay. Among so many fan novels about this Tomato, it's still a very good one. I've read about 150 chapters. So far, the main line is clear, the storyline is reasonable, and the combat power level is not broken. It's acceptable. I really don't know how this reading time is calculated.