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Try to avoid mixing the cultivation of immortality and the struggle for dynastic hegemony. This is a personal opinion, not everyone's opinion. Good luck to the author👍

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After reading a little bit of the beginning, there are no big problems, but there are some flaws. After reading the comments, the author is mentally stable and I will give you a bad review. The first point is that the character of the protagonist is a bit twisted. Like some people's comments, he seems to be too outspoken or to find an excuse for himself. Personal opinion is that it is not necessary. The first sect behind my brother's cultivation of immortals is also a small master. Within a certain range, I can do whatever I want. If I like a person, I don't want to repay the help. I am happy. There's nothing wrong with asking for payment if I'm in a bad mood (I gave this example because the protagonist is not an extremely self-interested person). The second point is to not let readers influence your thinking to a certain extent. I read some of the author's replies and I don't know if it was originally designed that way or to retain readers. Wang Cheng's portrayal is very good. It's understandable to recommend him to the sect, take him as a follower, or provide guidance as a teacher and friend.

It's such a good read, a humorous yet passionate novel about cultivating immortals. The last book that felt like this was the snail's fake immortal and the second generation of immortals. I don't know why the score is so low. Come on, author, I think highly of you.

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I really want to know who is the protagonist, and you will help whatever others say.

I like it a lot, but the author will update soon [smile] It would be better if the word count could be mentioned. 1,000 Words is a bit low. If you are busy, it would be better to keep the word count around 2,000 words.

The score is low, it's very nice, much better than those nine o'clock journals. [Love], come on, the author Why is it so good-looking? Didn't the author buy the navy? This article is much better than those big hydrographs at nine o'clock.

It suits my taste very well. The main character is well written. I saw the author on the recommendation list on my homepage. Come on, I hope the author will keep updating and make more updates. I look forward to the completion.

Five stars, must be five stars, no nonsense, just talk about the topic, it looks very comfortable

It's good to watch, but the male protagonist is a bit too helpful, and I hope that the immortal cultivator can break up with the dynasty as soon as possible

The writing is good, it just depends on how the author fills in the holes, but in the end he should not disgust the readers.

It would be better if there were no secular involvements like Qin Siwu.

Not bad, not too stunning or too watery. I read it and reached over a hundred chapters. I couldn't finish it but I got bored and came back to finish it.

The writing and plot connection are very smooth. You won't feel like you don't want to watch it for a long time. The setting is very good. Come on.

Not bad, keep up the good work, author

An absolute treasure and a great book...

Beautiful and well written

Very well written, really cheers, v

It's okay, but why did Wang Cheng write it? I'll have to look at it later It feels really average

Much better than those with a score of 9 or above, what kind of monsters are they?

It's okay, I can barely watch it, I hate the main character's uncle, that woman.

It's so beautiful. This kind of setting is my favorite type.

This book is overall very well written.

Come on, keep at it, I think it's well written

Not to mention anything else, Gaga is good-looking, and the sect behind the protagonist himself also likes me I really like the settings of Baiyu Temple and Daomiao Mountain. Come on, author, it will definitely become a hit.

To be honest, it's really good to watch. It has ups and downs of the plot and various emotional dramas. This rating is indeed low. It's worth watching.

Good-looking, reasonable plot, well-drawn characters

It's still a pretty good book about cultivating immortals, and it's still worth reading if it's not a book. I originally wanted to lose one point because many chapters don't have chapter names, but seeing that the score is so low, I decided not to.

It's okay. It looks better than those invincible ones who kill indiscriminately and wipe out clans at every turn.