Genshin Impact************

In the slow pace, the speed is well controlled. Well, I rarely see such slow-paced novels. It is very good. As for the protagonist, well, my evaluation is that he is just a person, a person without any deep hatred or outrageous background (I am talking about now), but he has friends (now). Who doesn't have a few friends in life? Even though his friends are really awesome He doesn't have any outrageous powers, but he can do what he wants to do, but there are some things he really can't do, but he is trying hard. He will retreat, but he will also persist What I hope is that this rhythm can be maintained. If you want to improve the protagonist, my suggestion is to make him stronger and make him a helper in combat, not the main force. Then came the question: Can you give me the outline? Or will the travelers come out? If it could be extracted, would Sora also become a woman? Hmm, quite interesting. But I think what you wrote has a high probability that it won't come out. Oh, I forgot to mention the shortcomings The vocabulary is rich, and some of the descriptions are really good. The only problem is that it is too rich, and writing too much becomes a burden. Ah, of course it might be a word count issue

Due to the mechanism of Tomato, some comments are invisible to me in the background. Although I am a little angry, there is nothing I can do about it, right? Tomato is like this. But it's not a good idea to complain here. If you have any questions, you can say them. I know my mistakes and won't correct them.

It requires some cultural foundation to understand. It should be very slow to heat up, and the strength... Well, it is enough (a little higher than nothing, as small as a few millimeters of dust). Then, the memory is incomplete. There are memories from the previous life, but I can't see that it is of any use.

You make me feel like I'm reading a Chinese book [laughing and crying] But the writing is good, [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

Yes, it is a rare masterpiece so far. The author's writing style is very good, and the character description is delicate. It may be because there are too many things described, which makes the plot advance a bit slow. However, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and it is still highly recommended.

The writing is very good, it's also very good in Tomato, the plot and characters are also great, keep up the good work✊

It can be seen that the author really wants to write well, but in the era of fast food, the author's writing seems too strenuous and many people may not be able to read it in the early stage. The author's failure is even more expected. The author's writing is not bad, on the contrary, it is very good (at least in my eyes) [laughing]

Um, I hate the Riddler.

The existence of perfect scores for writing essays

I hate the Riddler, but I still like reading Shuangwen [Chigua]

Well, cheers to the author, this article is very good. Too elegant for me, I'm a vulgar person

The writing is good and the text looks quite comfortable.

I really like the sexually-transformed Wendy [laughing][laughing][laughing] The author's description fits my imagination of Wendy very well.

I'm a rough person, and it doesn't feel like I'm reading an online article, but more like I'm reading a paper. The writing is very delicate and can even be said to be gorgeous. The literary and artistic atmosphere is greater than the secular atmosphere. Well, overall it's a very good book, but it's a bit confusing for the uninitiated.

In fact, it's quite suitable to read when you calm down, but it's a pity that it's too short.

I don't have enough literary background to understand [face covering], but the description of the scenery is still very good.

A five-star base for a gender-transformed male character. Although it was a bit confusing in the early stage, the writing is good and the interactions are very comfortable to watch. I look forward to Zhong Li and the Water Dragon King.

All I can say about this book is that the writing is really good, and it is the best among the fanfics I have read. Worth a look

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch [sending heartfelt wishes]

Come on, I like [love] very much

I've read five chapters, and without further ado, I would like to give you a good review just because of the writing style.

Wow, the emotions are very delicate, much more delicate than the average harem novel.

The writing is good and the plot is good, but there are too many things I don't understand [face covering]

It's a pretty good book, but why don't many people read it? [Eat melon]

After reading it for so long, I feel qualified to comment. Generally speaking, the author's writing is very good and the plot is very creative. It's a pity that the update has been discontinued.