Ask Me to Be Your Military Advisor, but the Target of Your Attack Is Me

The writing is pretty good, but I just like to insult Genshin Impact players. So what's wrong with just playing a game?

10/10. The writing style in the early stage is a bit immature, and the action and thinking of the male protagonist is not well displayed; in the later period, the content gradually becomes better, but I hope that the identities of the male and female protagonists can be recognized in advance, or at least provide both parents with an opportunity to understand their current situation in advance. I like to watch the plot where the whole world is assisting. - I don't quite understand the significance of the appearance of the elementary school girl character. The content evaluation will be done after the book is completed. Overall, it is a very interesting book!

Very well written. If the male protagonist was a child, the part about the fiancé would be even more amazing. Then in the later units, the heroine's teasing is more interesting! These 8.0 To 9.0 Points are pretty much it.

It's very sweet and emotionally delicate. It should have been written by a female teacher.

This is the most ridiculous and ridiculous book I have ever read.

I feel pretty good after reading more than 40 chapters

It's very sweet, and the plot is quite clever, but it was really too sloppy in the end. Most of them were mentioned in one stroke. It's a pity that it didn't get popular. Otherwise, it would be really good to continue writing according to the previous writing style. But at least there is an ending to give it a five-star rating. I hope that I can make a children's episode when I have time in the future to make us happy [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

Beautiful and well written

Looks good, pretty good

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

After urging for so long, the score has reached 6.3, But! Can we go on a blind date soon? [Angry]

After following it for so long, I feel that the writing is good. Why is it not rated 8 points [what] So what's going on? Why was it blocked? Does anyone know?

So pretty, so sweet

"A match made in heaven! Love forever!"

Very good-looking @

Super super pretty

A pretty good book, but short

The author is too short, but at least the writing is okay

The language is humorous and you can learn a lot [laughing]

Author, please write faster. It's so beautiful. I only updated two articles. It's too slow.

There are several love tutorials, the content is light and enjoyable, but unfortunately they have been blocked and ended early.

The novel is very interesting and has many plot points. The characters of the male and female protagonists are very detailed. However, the story in the first few chapters is not coherent and looks a bit strange, but overall it is okay.

From the initial acquaintance to the dedicated efforts to the final confession, this book can indeed be broad.

It's really good-looking. I was attracted by his name. Sure enough, the more I look at it, the more I like it.

Overall, it has a score of 89, and it's worth watching. Another thing I want to know is whether the girl I got with the help of a military advisor likes you or the military advisor.

I found that most authors of the books I was following stopped updating on this day. What happened?

I don't know what to comment [shy]

Come on, author, I'm waiting for your book

It's pretty good. I just like this short one.

Zhao Shuran is still single until the end [face covering]