Great Qin: A Confucian Scholar Who Reads His Way to Immortality

There aren't many bad points, and it's quite enjoyable to watch. I hope that the style behind it won't be romantic, ambiguous, or indecisive, and can be more refreshing.

Your book probably won't do very well, it's too ink-written, and sometimes the things that can be summed up in one stroke are too detailed, and you can't keep up with the updates. And then the main character is constantly being questioned, which makes me a little angry.

I don't know the protagonist's purpose, and he always looks like a child. Are you tired? Why don't you just skip it? Whatever you want to use later, just say it was gained from previous retreats. I can't stand the water like this

I feel like there's nothing wrong with the writing, it's just that it's too damn watery.

The writing is too slow. Where does the pleasure come from? Just brainless. Is there any cultivation method such as the Righteousness Jue that cannot be passed on to fellow Confucian disciples? He wants to do great things, become an ancestor and cultivate immortality, but he has set himself up with mindless restrictions. The protagonist's confidence is his understanding, not these methods of cultivation, there is no need to hide them.

No Taoist looks comfortable,

It gives people the feeling that they have been writing nonsense.

There is no such artistic conception, the writing is nondescript

Don't hit women? Still indistinguishable between friend and foe

It looks good, so why was it blocked? [Cry]