Pokemon: A Brand-New Journey

The story of this book is very long and many characters will appear in the future. If readers have any characters they want to create, or what kind of Pokémon appear, you can leave a comment and I will add them as appropriate. The Pokémon world in this book cannot be created by me alone, it will be even more exciting with everyone! Welcome everyone, and thank you for your support! [Notice]

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So far it looks very good and in line with my thoughts. I would like to give it a five-star support. If I have time, I will add more chapters. Cheers, author! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

I support it with five stars, but the author writes more Pokémon. You have to believe that your Pokémon can definitely be better than the characters you write 🤦 The character description is a bit old-fashioned, but the plot is still relatively relaxed and interesting. The heroine's operations are very interesting. I was almost forced to quit by the heroine, but the twist attracted me again. After that, when you go to that island, just don't have a Shiny Wifemon suddenly appear 😫. The protagonist can have one in the future, but don't want the third one to suddenly become it. Also, the protagonist has already pre-determined four. You can choose to catch more Pokémon in the future, but don't keep it an idea. I want to see the Pokémon. The description is very good, but newcomers have not avoided some poisonous points. The part between 20-50 can be skipped, which is a bit poisonous. The protagonist is a bit obsessed with auxiliary skills. I feel that the animation only uses sword dance and shadow clone skills at most. The author is advised that this point is worthy of support. The characters are vividly described, but in terms of emotions, I can only say that the industry is really chaotic⊙▽⊙I look forward to how the heroine will make a comeback, but the dream is a bit confusing. I don't know if it is foreshadowing.

The writing is very good. The protagonist is not invincible. The protagonist is thoughtful, strives hard, and reflects on his own mistakes. The description of the character is good, but I think it is unnecessary for the heroine to appear so early. Whether it is a girl chasing a boy or a boy chasing a girl, the protagonist will definitely focus on Pokémon in the early stage. And it is difficult for me to imagine what it is like for a hero and a young lady like the heroine to go on a trip and adventure. It is better to let the blue-haired heroine be the heroine.

The slow pace is normal, but a lot of elf slots are taken up. A novice trainer practicing so much at once may make the plot develop even slower. He wouldn't raise it for his parents 🤦 Everything else is good. I think the character creation is okay. Just add more padding later.

You must write more, this is the Pokémon world in my imagination, no system, not invincible, the feeling of growing up step by step is really addictive, okay, I feel so immersed in my daily life, I just don't know who the heroine is 🥰

This fanfic is the most realistic one I have ever read. The male protagonist was not very powerful from the beginning. When I played against his father and classmates for the first time, I thought I would win, but ended up losing. This felt very real to me. One has decades of laning experience, and the other fights with many fire Pokémon every day, so losing is normal. The disadvantage is... Too few!!! [Punch hard]

Okay, okay, very nice

It feels weird to study the battle in detail, but it's really well written, keep up the good work Today's follow-up update progress: It looks much better than those groove system articles. The protagonist can also have his own ideas. If he wins, he will follow up. If he loses, he will reflect and grow. I will continue to follow the article. Ps: Judging from the first chapter, the squad leader named Xiaowen should be named Zheng, but I saw the title "Zhang Xiaowen" several times later, which should be a fallacy. I hope it can be changed slightly later to achieve uniformity.