苟道长生，从沙漠开始加点

This book is well written. The score is really low. It should be 88. There is no harem, no disgusting ambiguity, and no slap-in-the-face stories. There are no repeated fights or secret realms. There is no feeling of fatigue. Everything is written very naturally. But the story is a bit short. I recommend this book.

I read the author's new book and found the author's previous book. I feel like the author has written every book well, so why is his score so low? At the very least, they all have sufficient writing skills, smooth plots, broad imaginations, grand worldview designs, smooth scene switching, and the protagonists are happy and contented. It should be at least 9 points. If I have to find fault, it is that the complexity and growth of the characters are not enough, but generally speaking, the author's character and three views of the characters in each book are consistent and relatively unified. In this book, the male protagonist has a compassionate side, only caring about the friends he cares about, and not hesitate to take care of them and their descendants. He is very decisive towards others and has no disputes or conflicts. This kind of character is very comfortable to watch. This book has been finished, so I gave a reward of 8 yuan or something at the back. It's not much money, but it only represents my gratitude to the author and my affirmation of this book~

High-quality systematic immortality writing, no major poisonous points

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All I can say is that this book is pretty good and worth reading. How can I say this rating? I don't know why it is so low-level. It is a good book, but the rating is too low. I don't know why. Whether it's the early, middle or late stages, at least for now, it's worth watching.

Not bad, I've been waiting for you for a long time

[Conscience Comment] Overall, good! The score should reach about 9 points [Like] [Like] [Like] After reading the whole book, the text narrative is smooth, the storyline develops naturally, the logic is relatively self-consistent, and the interpersonal communication is calm and serious... There is no such kind of intentional or malicious mischief and comedy... Serious immortality + systematic cultivation of immortality. [Working on manuscript] [Working on manuscript] [Working on manuscript]

Preliminary evaluation: The protagonist's personality is quite likable, but it is obvious that he wants to have a group portrait or multiple threads running at the same time. I am worried about the follow-up processing and that too many hidden threads will blur the main line.

This book's cultivation progress is quite normal, but it's not suitable for me who is impatient.

It's okay. Compared to the average novels about cultivating immortals, this one is very slow to upgrade, but I feel like the protagonist is like an old woman, helping here and there. I'd say he has deep feelings, but he is a time traveler, and he shouldn't have a close relationship with the so-called childhood. He helps his grandchildren and his children and grandchildren. I don't think the relationship with those people is as long as the time Sword Spirit spends with him.

Compared to the average novels about cultivating immortals, it is more interesting and very good. The plot is very good and the ideas are very clear. Come on.

It is considered a relatively good work. The killing is decisive and the progress is fast. Worth reading

It's well written, without any ambiguity, and the level rises quickly without being irritating.

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From ordinary to extraordinary, step by step, hard work, enterprising and a little luck. Beautiful! ! !

Very good, brave and resourceful, decisive in killing

It's not bad. It's quite engaging. I rarely skip chapters when reading novels.

The literature and science are smooth, the characters are vivid, and the world view is grand. This is a masterpiece. Please feel free to eat it.

Okay, the cheating is not too big, it feels a little bit

The story is not bad, I hope the author can write more about the protagonist taking action and joining the fight instead of his followers [Like] The story is getting more and more exciting, I really enjoy reading it so far [laughing][love]

A very good film about cultivating immortals. It has clear logic and no poisonous points. It doesn't take random risks just for the sake of showmanship or the plot. I like watching this kind of thing.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

Very good, why don't you continue writing until you become an immortal?

This book is very good. I stayed up for three days and finally finished it.

The author's literary talent is really good. The book is interesting to read [like] and interesting [thinking]

It's a very nice author and the writing is excellent, keep up the good work💪

Good-looking😊Good-looking (○｀ε´○), able to describe in detail, and the writing is worth reading. Not annoying. No hoops…

When will the second part be released? Your other one wasn't that good, is it related? If there is any, I will read it. If not, I will not read it. I only read two chapters! This one is pretty good, just put some thought into it

Beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, continue to follow

Looking forward to the follow-up content, come on!