FATE: IF

It's pretty good-looking and has the flavor of fate. It's quite interesting that the protagonist appears as a heroic spirit, and the plot is also quite interesting. There are no problems with the other heroic spirits. When will the progress reach FGO or the Fifth Holy Grail War?

It's a very good fate fanfic. Basically, most of the regrettable things have been changed for the better (Illya finally doesn't have to die), and I like the character of the protagonist very much (I've seen too many silly and funny protagonists). Overall, this is the best fate fanfic I have ever seen in "Tomato". I just realized that I have never given a five-star review to this book that I have been following for so long! (●—●) So will there be a Shajo love song? Author (Curiosity and Expectation).

To help the author of Xingyue, the overall structure of the book is quite good. The main character is a heroic spirit, which makes the subsequent story development of the article more reasonable. The content of the story is also very good, and the occasional update is very surprising [Like] [Like]

First of all, I haven't dabbled in FGO much. I went to FGO and recently I played a complete game of FSR. I only watch anime and don't know much about it. The writing is very rigorous and setting-up. But the switch between 1st and 3rd person makes me a little confused. I don't know who said it. People who read it will have a deeper understanding of type moon (it's not friendly to people like me who have only watched one side of anime. I read less Japanese literature and basically only read reasoning). The author may want to write in this style. Sometimes the same thing is emphasized by different persons and it feels like reading the plot text. Except for this, everything else is very good.

It can be seen that the author really researched the setting carefully. Please support [smile]

It's good-looking, and the male protagonist participates in the Holy Grail War for the first time. Unlike other novels, he can still stand until the end even if he doesn't get the Holy Grail. Should I say that when the male protagonist of this book is an ordinary person from the beginning? Anyway, it's not the kind of mindless cool article, it gives me a sense of reality

First of all, I want to support you. After all, I rarely write [sending heartfelt messages] to Xingyue.

Nice! There are very few fate fanfics, and even fewer of them are good-looking, but this one is really good-looking, and its current rating is definitely low. It must be at least 8.5 Or above.

There are very few people writing about fate. I must recommend this book. Come on, author, you must finish the book

This is pretty good, why does it feel like no one is watching it? I want to see Xiao Mo

This book is a masterpiece among fate fans

It's very interesting to watch, but it leaves a lot of holes unfilled. I'll forget about just abbreviating the 7 singularities. I want to know more about what happened in the Lost Belt. Also, I want to watch Shura Field Kouga [angry]

The plot is good, and it can be seen that the author is trying very hard to create an atmosphere close to the original work, but the writing style needs to be strengthened, and the article has a bit of a human-machine feel.

It looks good. It looks like Lao Yue Chu at first glance.

A very good work

Support me, after all, very few people write about the moon.

Dear author, have you confirmed whether it is a single girl or multiple girls?

Very nice, support ✊ [smile], @ How about creating a group

Support it, it looks good

If the update reaches 400,000, just send four or five certifications from the king of gifts or masters to urge the update!

The author's involvement in the field of moon-shaped moon is quite deep, but there are some parts of the world that most people should not be involved in, so generally the people who come to see it are mostly people who love moon-shaped moon, so there are relatively few people who come to see it.

Not bad, by the way, I want to watch the magic replenishment

There are relatively few novels about Yue in Tomato, and I haven't read many of them. But when I wrote about being stupid, I suggested that I skip it. It's a poisonous point. I'll put it on the bookshelf first and read it again later.

Dear author, can the heroine have Artori? Please @

Books written by Xingyue are rare. I asked the main character who he is. I can't tell in the catalog.

The content is interesting and the subject matter is novel. It is eye-catching and very interesting.

A very good work

Oh no, where is the author?

Everything is good except that there are few people watching.

It's good, but I don't want to have multiple heroines in the same timeline, otherwise she would just be pure Yue Chou.