Traveling Through the Original God, Playing the Second Creation, Everyone Cried

There are too many roles for the protagonist in the early stage. I came here to create a second film, and 𣎴 came to see the protagonist.

Although I only read the introduction, I still think that this type of PV, second creation, live broadcast room, etc., Is better without the protagonist.

Can't the protagonist be made stronger? Or remove Obito's face and turn it into the protagonist's face and play it for them? And Kevin, Shido

When the author let himself go and no longer wrote for traffic, the book began to break away from the conventional popular writing lines. It had its own original meaning, and the fun also rose to a higher level. If I had to use one word to describe it, it would be "natural." Yes, although the rating is not high, it is well written and very interesting. It relieves fatigue, so just keep it up.

After watching it, I feel that the protagonist is just a tool, emmm. I haven't seen him use the system to improve his strength. There is nothing to say in the video. The pv content is good. You can think about the plot of the protagonist carefully. If he is just a tool, then reduce his plot. Otherwise, you can consider letting him use the system store to improve himself or something. It feels like a sub-main line, right? I don't know how to describe it specifically. In addition, I still support the author, come on! More! ! ! Not enough! Not enough!

It's very interesting. I recommend you a few songs: "I am a Genshin Impact player", "[Genshin Impact/Kongying] Please continue to blow me" (recommended), "Travel is for reunion" (recommended), "If you suddenly think of me"

Great writing, keep it up

It's well written, and the main character isn't as offensive as many Genshin Impact fans are. [Like] There are many Genshin Impact protagonists who always have harems for no apparent reason, and are always controlled by the small head [awkward laugh]. I hope this protagonist doesn't have a harem

It's also pretty good among second creations. In terms of setting, it's not very different from the original god, and it's acceptable. Special people are treated specially, and non-special people are treated specially. Whose devil's remnants are eaten as snacks? Fortunately, this book does not have this setting. There was a previous book with the setting that the people of Liyue could eat it and use it as medicine, but they were too lazy to read it. Let's not talk about its use as medicine, but eating it will definitely not work. Officially, it is used as medicine, but who said it was taken?

The look and feel is quite good, but there are some problems with the details. The daily descriptions are also very attentive. The control of the characters is also in line with the second creation image that most players can accept. The author has appropriately added his own little creativity to the second creation (adding the protagonist to the plot of the second creation) and hopes to continue to maintain it in the future. (A little problem: What kind of emotion does the protagonist have about missing the original world? From the beginning to now, I can't figure out whether there is a love line or not. It's too confusing. There is also the setting of the emotional value. It is recommended to indicate the amount of emotional value obtained each time, otherwise the concept of emotional value may be really diluted by readers. For example, in the scene at the beach party, teleporting so many people at once, how much emotional value is consumed, and how much emotional value is left is really hard to understand. The playback and description of the second creation are a bit too detailed, but it is not incomprehensible. Just abbreviate it if you can, the plot about the protagonist is still a bit low) (Hope the love line will progress faster?)

Although everyone comes to see the second creation, the novel is not the video. What the novel needs more is the character's reaction to seeing the second creation, so the protagonist is needed. After all, there are some jokes that the characters don't know about. This requires an outsider to liven up the atmosphere. Otherwise, it will be easy for everyone to know directly.

Overall, it's okay. It's rare to see a protagonist, and there's no deliberate imposition of a role (as a conspicuous package B). The character design also fits the game relatively well. Overall, it feels good.

Author, can you please write about this [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] @dustTu "Genshin Impact Version Halfway Up the Mountain" Fuwei clan.

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It's good to read. I like novels with protagonists.

Have you watched the author's recent Genshin Impact birthday party "Unawakened Dream"? Write about it.

@Author, I want to see a plot where the protagonist is recognized as someone who is not from this world, hey! I want to see it, Ying! Civil! Of! Name! Righteous! I want to see Zhang Fan become a woman

The protagonist feels a bit restless in the front and doesn't go crazy very much, but his true nature is slowly revealed later in the game [laughs crookedly] But how many Genshin Impact players don't like to go crazy? What's wrong with me being General Raiden's dog? ! (Akimbo) And I think it's pretty good and nice to see the protagonist reincarnate himself into the second creation. It also gives people the feeling that the protagonist has integrated into Teyvat, as if he is a part of Teyvat. Anyway, all in all, it's awesome! [Laughing] If my brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother bothering readers. It seems that the readers are being sentimental. My brother is weak and he just needs to rest more. It is the readers who are urging him so much. Injuring his body also makes people feel sorry for him. It is a pity that he pities his brother. Whether he is injured or not, what does it have to do with the readers? Readers are eager for my brother to update 10 chapters a day, but I am different from readers. My brother can send the manuscript and outline to others, and let others help him check the quality and find typos. [Shy]

By the way, does this book have a female protagonist? I feel like Juying has a better chance at the moment. Summarize the advantages 1. The selection of videos is good, most of them are relatively normal videos, and there are no extremely outrageous videos (probably) 2. Most of the characters are normal, and there is no personality breakdown caused by the video (Linette said separately) 3. The setting is thoughtful and thoughtful (a game based on the future of Teyvat). It feels like telling everyone that you are a game character from the beginning is very disappointing. The author has a good intention. 4. There are original and second creations, and the author can make persistent efforts in this aspect. 5. The mixture of knife and wound is quite reasonable, at least it won't cause aesthetic fatigue in terms of look and feel. Emmmm That's probably all I can think of right now. Isn't it true that she is not the heroine? I feel like Ying has already guessed something, and it will probably work out when she finds out later. Take Ah Qing with you.

I was really a little teary-eyed when I saw A-Qing, I love her so much [I almost cried]

I feel that the second creation is gradually being used less and less. Now let me think of any regrets. Those regrets can be easily made up for with just a move of the hand. Maybe this is the power of the system. I would like to see those regrets made up for not by the protagonist, but only after thinking about it. If it is so easy to make up for it, I feel that the weight of the previous regrets has become much lighter.

It's really too sweet. The memory of my past has been stabbed once again. Such a sweet thing must be shared with all netizens to increase the rating.

It's not easy for the author. After reading a few pictures, I think it's okay and I'll give it five stars [laughing]

Pretty good novel

99% Rare item

What about Team Inazuma Rockets? My boyfriend came to pick me up on his yacht

Anyway, it is the plot of Genshin Impact, and no matter how many times you read it, you will still feel sad.

It's very good. I recommend that one. It's best to get more works by Michalen's The Flutist. It feels very good [sending my heart]

For me, one of the few books where I can see the yellow button!

Come on, I hope I can continue writing