Become a Disciple of Taiqing and Never Be Separated

Your book must have some suggestions from Li Changshou. You have to say that you can learn from Li Changshou before you become someone else. People won't give you low marks.

Good book It's a breath of fresh air It doesn't look tiring, there aren't so many conspiracy theories

There are only three more book reviews, so here's an extra chapter! I don't count. For every three more book reviews, one chapter will be added. I don't count this, because I made a typo just now. There are similarities between the storyteller and that ancient Lingbao Tribulation Record. It was reviewed by me for security. What?

It seems that the author really likes Jian Lai. The master of the Hanging Mountain once came to live with Bai Ye, the master of Zhongtian in Qinglian Cave. In addition, looking at the fourth sword immortal Song Ci in Penglai in the post, he must not have the image of a layman Yi An.

A different prehistoric era, very exciting, not as dark as other prehistoric stories about the Six Saints of Heaven and Hongjun, everyone is the protagonist

Suits my taste

A very good prehistoric novel without so many conspiracies. There is a plain refreshing feeling. It's not as refreshing as other works written in the prehistoric era, it's just weird. And overall it has a warm and bland feeling. I like it very much and recommend everyone to take a look.

It's palatable, good-looking, not bad, and well-written. The Lao Tzu here is not like the cunning and cunning one who uses all means to do things, and the primitiveness here is not like other people who are jealous of others. The Tongtian here is also very bold and unrestrained. Hongjun is not bad, he is also good. He plans for his descendants and is a well-deserved Taoist ancestor. The other character settings are also very good.

After reading more than 90 chapters, I generally feel that the identity of the protagonist is quite new. Most of them are pretty good so far. Each character has a distinct personality. There is no distinction between good and evil, only a moral struggle. The protagonist is a time traveler and his identity is recognized by the saint. I feel that this is really well written. However, it is a bit unreasonable for the protagonist's clone to determine cause and effect. Moreover, in many places in the article, the descriptions are repetitive and a bit cumbersome. For example, in the chapters about the fight between Liu Er and Pan Wang, I understand that the author wanted to write vivid images and express the intensity of the fight. However, some action descriptions, narrations, and psychological descriptions of the characters can be adjusted appropriately. Some psychological descriptions of the characters and the narrations are not clearly distinguished and are easily confused. It feels like a long paragraph. Looking at it so far, some chapters may be the continuation of the previous chapters, and some content may be stated again in a different way. I guess the original intention may be to make it easier for readers to understand and review the past. When I read it, the book was already finished. As I continued to read it, I felt like I had written some things and reasons several times. The above are just my small opinions. The whole book is generally good. I hope to continue to work hard.

It's really well written. It's the only one of the prehistoric novels I've read that I can't criticize. Each has its own orthodoxy dispute but can still communicate with each other. It also adds some other novel elements in the middle, and the effect is very good. If I have to say it, it can only be because there are too few chapters.

I have read too many Hongjun, Laozi, Original, and Western Duo Are Bad. This one actually made me feel very comfortable. Instead of fighting internally, it is better to be united with the outside world.

Very nice, very good

The prehistoric novels I read before were all about calculations, but this one is really full of positive energy.

It's a very nice novel. I hope the author will update it soon and don't stop updating it.

Not bad, not that much conspiracy

The author of Miao Miao Miao Baby pays great attention to rest Thank you for your hard work. It's great.

It feels like a brand new interpretation, and it's a good book, but I don't have the patience to read it anymore. I feel that the fighting scenes are a little wordy [Like][Like][Like]

It's rare to see a prehistoric novel that opens up the landscape🫴🏻. Wouldn't it be nice to work together to upgrade to prehistoric without fighting among ourselves and make progress together?

Wow~ It's really good. The pace is tight and much better than long articles. It's rare that both Sanqing Hongyun and the Two Western Saints are normal people. Fortunately, there is no system or anything. The main character is working hard. It's a cool story and not so brainless. I recommend it~~

The largest relationship network in history

Very exciting and interesting.

It's really good. Great unity in ancient times.

Beautiful, very deep

Finally saw a different prehistoric era

Different prehistoric literature, worth collecting

No bragging, no slander, it's rare to find what you want!

It's good-looking, it made me see a different kind of prehistoric times, and it's also the kind of prehistoric times I want. Good luck, author😊

After seeing a different prehistoric era, my eyes brightened. Come on, author [salute][salute][salute]

A very grand view of the world, and I don't criticize anyone.

The content is very good.