Mirage Dream

It's really unbearable to have first-class qualifications and no one wants it. Even if there is some foreshadowing, it's hard to be interested in reading it. But the author's way of writing is really interesting.

Good article, highly recommended.

The book is full of hardships and joys, and it is difficult to get rid of the truth!

The plot is okay, but it feels like the time is a bit too short. It would be nice if some daily plots such as cultivating immortals are added. I have read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals. The protagonist is pushed away by events every time, and various conflicts are integrated into one. But cultivating immortals is not just for seeking freedom and freedom. Well, practicing the exercises all the time is just like going to work in real life. It feels like another kind of cage. Write about the protagonist's hobbies, daily life, the beautiful scenery you see, and the little interesting things you encounter. It would be great to lengthen the timeline and sandwich it in, slow and urgent.

The rhythm is very good, neither too fast nor too slow. The setting is probably that of cultivating immortals in ancient times. There is not much to say. If I have to say it, it is too sudden that the test jade token is broken. There is no explanation why it is broken. Of course, I may have skipped it.

The fragrance of plum blossoms comes from the bitter cold. The talented male protagonist He Liangchen has made his way through various hardships with courage and wisdom. Although he got off to a bad start, the results of his training have begun to show. We look forward to the follow-up plot.

Keep up the good work, I like novels with brains, but the main characters in new books in the future should not be too cowardly! ! ! A good book is what you need to think about, and the plot comes second! ! ! It's better not to be too self-righteous as the protagonist, otherwise he will look like a clown! ! ! The above is my review

The writing is excellent and has a lot of imagination. The story is novel and has many foreshadowings. The reading is ups and downs and fascinating.

The author's imagination is wide open and his ideas are wonderful. The plot is compact, the writing is fluent, and the story is interesting. Recommend. Come on, author. I have read more than thirty chapters, and the writing is really beautiful. Come on, author^0^~

A very nice novel. The author's writing style is very sharp and smooth. The story description is wonderful and beautiful, and the characters are lifelike. I give the author a big thumbs up [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like]